Immortal Lord, Your Disciple's Weakness Is Just an Act.

To be honest, I always feel sorry for Yin Huan during the process of watching. The 500 years of torture and hatred are diluted by the beauty and falseness of the past (the emphasis is on the latter). Even if I hate the wrong person, I always feel so sorry for the torture Yin Huan has suffered. Between Yin Huan and Tao Yiye The hatred between the two is unsolvable. Even if Bai Yunshu has no choice on the surface, what he does is indeed on Tao Yiye's side. He cannot stand firmly on Yin Huan's side and can only escape by himself for 200 years. Maybe this love was twisted from the beginning, but the 500-year separation is not in vain. Yun Shu's reason for bewitching Yin Huan will only make him feel more hypocritical (which is in line with Yin Huan's view of Bai Yunshu). In my opinion, most of Yin Huan's favorable impression of Bai Yunshu is still caused by the poison. Even if those good things are true, it is difficult to dilute the 500 years of hatred. I still hope After the bug is removed, Bai Yunshu can no longer evade the choice, and Yin Huan has the strength to compete with Bai Yunshu, the two will be together. Otherwise, it would be too unfair to Yin Huan. Finally, Teacher Yu's writing style is really good, and the relationship between the two is written so well. I highly recommend reading it 👍

鱼写的很好看。文笔很好，剧情前期是慢了点，但中间还好，感情发展得快。凝竹和云书之间的相处有虐有甜。但小虐怡情大虐伤身嘛 :) 有时候上一秒搞笑幽默的，下一秒就把刀子怼我脸上了，有点戳不及防🤓👆 哈哈，不过两个都带有一定的病娇属性的主角谁能不爱呢？ 两人互动很精彩，也没有一直揪着一些误会不放来打造虐的剧情，说开了心里都舒畅。〔一开始以为凝竹误会白云书得有好一段时间。这事居然那么快就掀了，额，也没完全翻篇〕坐等凝竹后期干大事哈 主角心理活动变化描写详细，虐的时候把她们之间的感情纠纷表现得淋漓尽致。刀完就递颗糖，虐中带甜哈。根本看不够 爱了，多更 :) 啧，鱼啊，咱是喜欢你写的书的哇，剧情很丰富，就是有一点点小虐了，没有别的意思，有虐正常嘛，但是吧，话又说回来了，咱得对得起简介对不对?简介里甜甜甜的，正文里刀刀刀的，早上看了一天没盼头，中午看了没心情干事，晚上看了抑郁。开头来一刀，中间来一刀，结尾再来一刀，刀刀刀的…没说这样不好，但是话又回到原点上来说，刀糖结合哈，没感觉非常虐，就是虐看多了，想吃点甜头，不觉得很虐！ 只是想尝点甜头，没有不好，很好看。

特别好看，是师徒系列里我目前最喜欢的一本[送心]师尊病娇态十足，但是又会撒娇又会演戏爱装，把小徒儿迷的死死的，小徒儿前期傲娇，后期爱得不得了。 鱼的文笔真的好好，特别是276章可能有近一百章有“肢体互动接触”吧，什么实力我不多说[奸笑][送心][你细品]而且做任务那段剧情，把古往今来的女性困境和悲苦描写得十分好，让人难免悲痛，同时对人贩子的憎恨更加一分。（我们要持续为女性发声！） 文中每一对cp都描写得非常好，全是女女[赞]每对cp都活灵活现，群像描写很好，文中每个人物都有自己特殊特别的性格，人物性格都很细腻，且文中没有一个人歧视同！！！我觉得特别友好，在大婚时每一个人都送上了祝福🌹 师尊白云书的病娇属性真的让人流连忘返，是真的让我感受到了她这五百年间的思念，是病态的爱，但是同时又饱含尊重，强制爱但又不舍得，下蛊但也不常用，真的是特别好的人[送心] 小徒儿戚凝竹傲娇属性拉满，口是心非，嘴硬心软，酷爱撒娇，跟师尊的互动都特别甜，从戚隐欢到戚凝竹的过程也是被师尊一步步套路，呆傻又可爱，但是又不是傻白甜，有着自己的一份狠辣 二师姐耿寄欢也是特别好的人，每次小白受伤了难过了都是第一个去安慰的，关心的，同时对每个弟子也非常好，性格温和办事稳妥，修的多情道却只专情一人，感情线也很丰富。 总结来说这本书故事精彩，内容丰富，情感都非常细腻，作者文笔很好，故事情节发展合理，每个角色都有自己的性格特征，都是非常好的人，看得我心暖暖的[送心][爱心]

写的很好，震撼美味😋。我第一本在🍅完全看到最后的书。 看到有人的书评说作者在文里打拳？并没有，只是描写了几个被拐卖的妇女的惨状以及对加害者的报复，如果这都算打拳，那你的小心脏未免太脆弱。 说说对我来说的缺点：男本位词很多很多，用词完全男本位。感情铺垫不到位或者因为我知道主角装的，完全没有虐到我一点。 优点：基本上就是全女，没有几个男人出场。好像没有辱女词。节奏还不错，有让我看下去的动力。

This book creates characters exactly like the introduction, and the characters are vividly created. Bai Yunshu, the yandere master, did not give up his responsibility because he loved Qi Ningzhu to the core. On the contrary, he deepened his idea of ​​making sacrifices for the world. It is really amazing that he did not stick to love and evaded responsibility. In addition, this is my first time watching the crematorium where two people are chasing after their wives. Although I am not used to it, I will continue to watch it because it is well written. I hope it is a real two people together. It is still too immature to watch Qi Ningzhu now. When will he mature?

打发时间不错，师徒情感描写算有趣，文笔凑合，有时候会有一些自造词，导致不是很通顺，略感别扭，逻辑不足但胜在情感浓烈，可惜看久了会腻。 从修仙角度看不堪入目，没有基础全凭心意，从百合角度看，情感稍显细腻，单就主角之间故事虽套路但不厌烦，支线有点奇怪，从病娇角度看，损不足以奉有余，至于性别对立，不置评价。 除去主角之间故事，其余人物之间感情稍显突兀。所有人物都显得狂妄傲慢，阅读到最后心里想的竟然是要不你们全跳了算了，感情拉拉扯扯却见不到一丝进步，全靠作者附加上的一句话。 综合来看，番茄内中等偏上，期待可收回一些，说的有些委婉了，唉

Really nice to look at. When I clicked on the author's homepage, I discovered that I have read almost all of the author's books. Only then did I know that when the imperial concubine acts coquettishly, the queen's soul also floats away. This author

I think it's quite beautiful. The one in the middle bows his head for love and goes crazy for love. He just wants his little disciple to be happy, even if it's fake, even if it's just to deceive himself... Obscure secret love, willing to die for the one she loves, five hundred years of hard work, and finally the person she thought about day and night came, but the person who waited was only full of hatred for her... So she carefully planned a plan just to trap the person beside her. Even if she died in the end, she would let her shadow be everywhere in her life, so that she could never forget herself for the rest of her life... Death seeks life, death leads to life. In fact, most of the plots in this novel are beautiful, such as Xiaoyun Xiaobai's rebirth, Nan Lezhi meeting someone who truly loves her and cherishing her, and Yue Daiyuan's treasured sword taking form. Ahem, the only regret should be the story of the so-called flower and his master, and the senior sister and second senior sister, although there is a lotus. Finally, I feel that this book matches the song 90,000 Words very well, and it is a book that supports 🐟. From the first book to now, I still can't walk after reading 🐟's book, it's so life-like 😄 👍

I think the characters in this story are vivid and the story is interesting. In terms of writing style and word choice, there is nothing to say. If you insist on comparing it with better ones, it cannot be compared, but it has surpassed 98% of people. But what I want to talk about in particular is the part about abduction. This is a true story. The author and Tomato are great at this. May you all get what you wish for!

It's very beautiful, hehe, the car is very fast, a little bit rough, the author's literary talent is very good, but if you want to see something exciting, you have to widen your eyes, hehe, it's cool, five stars, very sweet, hehe