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The writing style and the description of the scenes are far beyond the passing mark [Like] It just downplays the existence of the protagonist, making the article seem like it is about the content of "Reading Dead Pen in One Breath". It is recommended to add the activities of the protagonist after certain famous scenes, and use his words to make the audience in the novel stunned. Open, thereby enhancing the excitement of the article, and at the same time describing the performance of its competitors. This kind of article does not arrange for parents to be sick and in urgent need of money, a cold opponent to fall in love with me, reversal of criticism and shocking everyone, etc. There is always a feeling of loss [face covering] In short, the author gives a big boost [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It looks good, but I don't like the ending of the anime version. I hope the author will write the ending in the live-action version. The live-action version is more perfect.

What is the name of the man with black hair and dead eyes in the article? I don't mean anything else, I'm just curious :)

So good The plot description is okay After the author finished writing about this competition, he was not sure what to write next. After writing the first part, can the author also write the second part? If not, can he write it in one go? Or try writing an official extra about the Los Angeles bb murder case

Will the ending be changed to Yagami winning [face covering]

It's a very nice book, very friendly to people like me who haven't read the whole book. Some details of the original book are very complete. Can the author write about JOJO? Although there are some flaws in the settings in JOJO, the characters have reached a very high level in the use and development of their own abilities. JOJO is also a good work in terms of wits. Can the author consider it? [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Give myself a thumbs up

In the past, there were too few dead-end novels, and they were not good to read. This one is really good, and the details of the original work are also written out. It's great!

Very satisfied, well written. However, we should pay attention to the structure of the novel and add more game plots appropriately to avoid the novel content being off-center.

This is really interesting for people like me who have never seen it

It's a very interesting book [like]

It's not bad, it's too much of the original work, but the audience doesn't write much

I have a question, is it a movie plot or an anime plot?

There's nothing that raises blood pressure at the beginning, so it's okay.

It's really beautiful. I highly recommend it, but I suggest the author update it quickly.

Can the author write a victorious ending to the game Yagami Yue? Or have multiple endings, after all it's a battle of wits

Just relive the classics

So good hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

I feel good, and everything is fine so far [eating melon]

Not bad, I just like reading this kind of psychological description

Nothing to say

Looks good, come on

Who will make up three nines for me? [Crying]

The world needs cryptography

Less less less less less

Name is your lie

What happened to this book

I hope the ending of the month can be well compiled

The big new book is also very nice! [Sending Hearts]

It's quite beautiful. Good cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes]