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It's a very interesting story. Most of the first part is about the farming + infrastructure line of the male protagonist Lin Baiyan, and some of the later chapters are about Lang Cang's family search + revenge line. In the final battle, the two lines are merged into a main savior line. Although there are many chapters, there is no watering-down, the plot is not draggy, and the later revenge decisive battle is not confusing. They are all effective plots. The character creation is also pretty good. Although the male protagonist has traveled through the past, he is not a saint, nor does he forcefully practice political correctness. In addition to the main CP, there are several pairs of deputy CPs, as well as other orcs who often appear. It can be regarded as a small group of portraits. Each orc has its own characteristics, which is very good. PS: Who did research on orcs? Being able to switch between human and animal states is really a great setting for orcs. I really want to pierce the male protagonist and suck the bodies of other orc cubs. The male protagonist even gave birth to cubs in the extra episode. He is a fluffy little white wolf. He can suck two wolves without leaving home. I am very happy [love].

This book is super good-looking. There are almost no villains. It is more about group portraits. It shows how everyone works hard to live. It will warm the heart of those who read it.

It is very beautiful, the emotional line is very delicate, the transition is very natural, the development of the tribe from small to large is also very orderly, which makes people excited, and the relationship between several brother tribes is also worthy of praise. The characters are well shaped, both offensive and defensive have strong sides, but also cute sides, and they are also very responsible. The suspense of the setting is also solved little by little, but it also adds a little fantasy color, such as the underworld, which feels a bit inconsistent, but it can also be regarded as non-legendary. In the world of beasts, Shou is a priest, but it feels a bit strange to get along with people who are close to him. Generally speaking, the decision of a priest should not be questioned, but my friend will not believe his words. His elders will sometimes obstruct him, but it should be chaos if he cares. It is understandable, but it looks a bit weird, but overall it is very beautiful. The infrastructure inventions and other things are very exciting. Among the beast world stories I have read, they can be ranked among the top. I recommend it. After re-reading it, some details are still quite problematic. The description in the article is inconsistent, and Shou is too tame in some aspects. For example, he must be strict in discipline, but when Lang Mu drugged the soldiers patrolling the training camp, there was no punishment. Even if the cub was unintentional, this approach is still problematic. Lu Xiao went directly to Shou for a bite to eat. At that time, it was clearly stated that Shou was still sleeping. The character creation was very problematic, but the overall storyline was still good, but sometimes it was a bit dragging.

It is quite rare to have a long novel with two male protagonists. It feels like a novel about the world of beasts that integrates fantasy elements of gods and demons. The overall plot is the main plot of infrastructure in the world of beasts + revenge and war, which is quite different. But there are also many bugs. For example, the article writes about the extra story. The world of beasts has the feel of a primary civilization, with cities and characters. However, the actual main line lasts only two years, and the special setting of 16 months is only 32 months. It feels a bit exaggerated, and the language is still too modern. Sometimes it feels a little too dramatic? Overall, there are quite a lot of CPs that can be played. The main CP and the extra beast god CPs and Ming Luo are very fragrant, and the animals that appear are also very cute. Come on, great extras~

The little kitty priest × the leader of the big white wolf clan is so cute [admiration] I really like Bai Yan's character [blowing kiss] In addition, the simple and innocent orcs in the article, as well as the lively and cute cubs are also very good [send heart] And the author, please update it quickly! This little bit is simply not enough to watch [please update]

It's really super, super pretty! ! ! The great setting, the development of the plot, including the relationship between Yan Yan and Cang Cang are all very smooth! ! I just hope that the future development can be a sweet cookie and not too cruel (›´ω`‹)(›´ω`‹)! Big, super awesome [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]call[sending heart][sending heart]

I've been reading this book for the past two days. I'm obsessed with Slender World. This book doesn't have any of my outstanding protagonists or the heart of a virgin. There's no emotional lag, and there's no female rivalry! ! Still very cool! ! I almost gave up on writing when I saw the beast god stuff at first, but it turned out to be pretty good! Like! I don't know why I'm commenting on this book like this! I have read more than 200 chapters! ! ! Silver foxes and silver tigers are both very cute! It's so exciting to join in! ! If it's not finished yet, I hope there will be more updates! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Shy]

Okay, okay, it looks good. It's so perfect, oh, so pretty. I added it to the bookshelf before, but then I didn't read it. Then I saw it and it was taken off the shelf. Then I read it. It looks so good. Not bad, not bad.

The infrastructure construction process in the middle and early stages is heart-warming to watch. The story of Snake Ming in the later stage feels a bit too strong, and the element of God Realm is not used very well. Overall it's pretty good

It is rare to find a complete infrastructure text. Shou single-handedly pulled civilization from the Stone Age directly into the Iron Age. The only flaw may be that the population is too small. The total population that appears in various places may only be about 3,000. However, considering that it is a desolate continent and it does not seem to be too small or exaggerated, the cheating is considered moderate. It was brought by the all-powerful country grandma. The life experience does not cover all the equipment. It is an excellent infrastructure article (although I still feel a little stomachache when I see the paper being piled up without putting paper glue... It will break if you peel off the wet paper without paper glue). The emotional development of the characters is natural and reasonable. There are also a group of furry animals who are very cute, and the group portraits are also well written. It is a rare masterpiece.

This is the most beautiful novel about the world of beasts that I have read so far. It is mainly because it is finished. I think the emotions in it are very delicate, unlike some other novels about the world of beasts that I have read. The writing is very good. Usually I read half of the book or stop reading it. But I have finished reading this book. There are quite a lot of chapters, but it is very good. Some of the knowledge points about making pottery and other things are also explained in detail, which gave me a feeling of personal experience. Because some of the articles I read before seemed to be too confusing, this article made me feel that the author has done careful research. The writing style is also very vivid and will not be boring. I recommend it.

It's okay. Lin Baiyan became a kitten after traveling through time. He relied on the knowledge of modern people to survive step by step in the crisis-ridden world of beasts. He learned how to get along with his beasts and partners in the challenges, and how to keep his heart in a world of the jungle. This article does not avoid the cruel laws of the world of beasts. The setting of the jungle and the lack of resources runs through the entire text. The feelings between Lin Baiyan and Lang Cang The love line is delicate and moving, from the initial mutual testing to the later dependence on life and death, there is no abuse, only the warmth of going in both directions. Lin Baiyan uses modern knowledge to improve the life of the tribe, from making salt to developing agriculture. The recipients will have a golden finger (given by the beast god). The deputy CP in it is also sweet. There is also a love line between the protagonist and the deputy CP in the extra story. The plot develops well, but the love line is not too fast. Personal opinions, please don't comment.

It's really good to watch. I stayed up late to read it. I am a person with strong empathy and I don't like to read books in order. I kept reading until they were about to fight the final boss. But just while I was jumping, I felt a burst of heartache. When I saw the protagonist suffering, he stabbed the Bible hard into his heart, I felt very distressed. After watching it, I felt that it was a farce and a game of God, which caused a disaster and tragedy in the world. It's really warm to get along with each other, but the premise is that you don't read it with any brain, because some parts are a bit illogical. After all, it's a cool story. The group portraits don't actually make up a lot, but the two protagonists are the most affected. Anyway, I think it's good. I stayed up all night to finish it. I'm so sleepy now, my nose is blocked, and it's very uncomfortable. I actually persisted in reading it, my God.

I accidentally caught up with the progress. It's a very interesting article about infrastructure construction in the world of beasts. It's very good and I like it very much. There are so many updates🥰

Normally, I stop reading the Beast World novel after reading the protagonists together, because their career lines are written in the same way, but this one is different. It is the first time I see the protagonist of the Beast World novel building a city, and it may develop into a country in the future (personal feeling). The career line is really well written, and the emotional line is also good. More than 200 pictures are not enough to read, so please do not stop writing [Blow a kiss]

It's very interesting to watch, the two male protagonists have good characters, and the love story is slowly improving. There is a feeling of infrastructure in the tribe, which is very fun.

Come on, duck, I have read a lot of world of beasts, and some of the scripts are too monotonous, or just a routine. However, I have not read anything similar to this novel on the world of beasts, so you are so awesome, come on, duck.

The story written in Beast World is not general, and the protagonist is quite interesting. Recently, the plot of Wolf 🐺 has been a bit sparse, which may be the reason why the plot this time is a bit tight. The details are enough, and more than 200 chapters are enough to suggest Bai Hurry Up.

Good to see, this is the story of a group of abandoned and wandering furries who established a tribe together.

From the first few dozen chapters to the present hundreds of chapters, I suddenly realized that it had been so long without realizing it. The protagonist of the whole article has a correct outlook on life and the author's writing style is good. Whether it is Wolf Cloud Cat Summer Wolf Rain Wolf Wood or Tigers and Tigers Leaping, they are all cute babies.

Beautiful! The plot is more comfortable, smooth and reasonable. Compared with most post-travel stories where the golden finger is ridiculously big and the other characters mindlessly flatter the protagonist and so on, this protagonist is more suitable for a "capable ordinary person". After flipping through several books, I finally found something good😚 Boss, please write more! Delicious and love to eat. I especially like to see everyone gathering together and working hard on the same thing, eating and working together to warm up.

It's pretty good-looking, but don't believe the author's nonsense in the first chapter. I feel like there are a lot of battle lines [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon] The fur content becomes less and less in the later stages [thinking] [thinking] [thinking] But it's quite good-looking.

Super invincible and beautiful, Bai Bai is really cute

It's not bad. The content is compact and not procrastinating. The plot is coherent and there are no surprises in the plot so far. For those who like to watch dual male protagonists, there are really no surprises. For those who don't like this kind of novel, maybe the whole novel is a surprise, right?

A very good article about the world of beasts, which makes me happy both physically and mentally🌹 I particularly like this kind of infrastructure novel that develops from scratch. Watching the protagonist lead the people to get better step by step gives me a very satisfying feeling! Everyone is cute, the furry feeling is so good, I want to rua too [admiration] I hope the author will update more, like and read🌹

It's quite interesting to watch. The protagonist has a cheerful and straightforward personality, the plot doesn't drag on, and the scenes described can make people immerse themselves in it and make them want to read on. It can be regarded as a relatively good beast world novel among Tomato🍅.

I am an old bookworm of the world of beasts. This book is super, super, super, super, super, super, and it is very good-looking. It suits my taste. It is very warm and sweet. The young couple who usually get along with each other also have a good kiss [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [love] [love]

I like long articles like this very much, but in the end it turned into fantasy. It was okay. It was very interesting. I finished it before I knew it. It was not enough. I like this kind of plain and simple one that focuses on development (not so much later, it is a bit about cultivating immortals and saving the world).

It's very interesting. It's rare that I follow an article from beginning to end. The main CP and sub-CPs are very sweet. Sometimes I just can't remember the names of too many characters and I can't remember [staring], but it doesn't affect the reading. After all, I am a main CP addict. Didn't that dog fruit have a child before? Why the kid didn't show up later makes me wonder. It's a bit puzzling. Maybe I remembered it wrong.

I've finished chasing it, the writing is good, and it has a lot of cp. The early stage is about farming infrastructure in the beast world, and the later stage is mainly about war and revenge? There are beast gods, false gods, villains, etc., So this article also has fantasy elements. I skipped through the later chapters about the confrontation with the false gods, but overall it's worth reading.