Bound by Original Sin, Wandering Through Infinite Worlds

@ [Understood] A must-read for the author When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

I mentioned in the last book that I should write about Edgewalker. That unlucky world is definitely a morbid world. The story is clear and clear, and the background is familiar to cyberpunk. Unlike the spirit cage, there is a large blank space where the background and setting are unclear. Save my Rebecca-chan~

After seeing the author's views on the ordinary character of the protagonist, I have some other opinions. The reason why the protagonist becomes the protagonist is because he has certain qualities that cannot be replaced by others in the book. It may be tolerance, humility, gentleness, coldness, etc. Without such qualities, the story would be unnatural. I think what the author has always done is very appropriate, that is, it feels like how the protagonist will act to make the story come alive. Therefore, in my opinion, there is no problem with the character design of ordinary people. The story must be based on characters. Whether it is an ordinary person or a genius, the story must fit the characters. The author doesn't need to worry too much about the issue of character, it's just right if it's appropriate. Besides, can't ordinary people be ordinary people who are not simple?

I feel okay so far. Is that why the protagonist's team is all female except for the protagonist? It's not that I dislike the fact that there are many girls in the protagonist's team, I just feel that there are a bit too many girls.

Why doesn't anyone write about Zhutianliu? The Magic Eye Collection Train, past vision, future vision, and Gray [smile]

The author's writing is okay. This series in Tomato is pretty good. The first two dungeons were well written, but I skipped the third dungeon, Cyberpunk 2077. It's not that your writing is bad, but that many people have only heard of this game's name. The contents are unknown. When I read this copy, my eyes darkened and I felt very irritated. I hope the author will finish this copy quickly. The following copy can be your own original work, or you can write about a world that most people know about. It is just a personal opinion, and I hope the author will adopt it.

It looks good, but the shortcoming is that there are too few updates. Author, please don't work too hard, your body is your capital. After typing 100,000 words, take a five-minute break. After typing 200,000 words, take a drink of water. Don't be too harsh on yourself. You must work hard and refill, okay?

Coming from the last book, come on

First: The writing is good, not verbose and lengthy, but also vivid and detailed. Second: The plot is reasonable, non-toxic, consistent with realistic logic, or most people's views Third: The structure is solid, the concept is reasonable, the protagonist's ability, teammate's ability, and reaction, and the reaction of the indigenous people are in sync. Disadvantages: The author is too young, and many of the plots are actually not excellent and quite boring, but they are downplayed by his excellent writing style.

It's okay. The protagonist settles down again in the middle period. Whether this book can get a score of 9.3 Depends on the author.