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@ [Understood] A must-read for the author When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

I mentioned in the last book that I should write about Edgewalker. That unlucky world is definitely a morbid world. The story is clear and clear, and the background is familiar to cyberpunk. Unlike the spirit cage, there is a large blank space where the background and setting are unclear. Save my Rebecca-chan~

After seeing the author's views on the ordinary character of the protagonist, I have some other opinions. The reason why the protagonist becomes the protagonist is because he has certain qualities that cannot be replaced by others in the book. It may be tolerance, humility, gentleness, coldness, etc. Without such qualities, the story would be unnatural. I think what the author has always done is very appropriate, that is, it feels like how the protagonist will act to make the story come alive. Therefore, in my opinion, there is no problem with the character design of ordinary people. The story must be based on characters. Whether it is an ordinary person or a genius, the story must fit the characters. The author doesn't need to worry too much about the issue of character, it's just right if it's appropriate. Besides, can't ordinary people be ordinary people who are not simple?

Why doesn't anyone write about Zhutianliu? The Magic Eye Collection Train, past vision, future vision, and Gray [smile]

I feel okay so far. Is that why the protagonist's team is all female except for the protagonist? It's not that I dislike the fact that there are many girls in the protagonist's team, I just feel that there are a bit too many girls.

It looks good, but the shortcoming is that there are too few updates. Author, please don't work too hard, your body is your capital. After typing 100,000 words, take a five-minute break. After typing 200,000 words, take a drink of water. Don't be too harsh on yourself. You must work hard and refill, okay?

The author's writing is okay. This series in Tomato is pretty good. The first two dungeons were well written, but I skipped the third dungeon, Cyberpunk 2077. It's not that your writing is bad, but that many people have only heard of this game's name. The contents are unknown. When I read this copy, my eyes darkened and I felt very irritated. I hope the author will finish this copy quickly. The following copy can be your own original work, or you can write about a world that most people know about. It is just a personal opinion, and I hope the author will adopt it.

Coming from the last book, come on

It's okay. The protagonist settles down again in the middle period. Whether this book can get a score of 9.3 Depends on the author.

First: The writing is good, not verbose and lengthy, but also vivid and detailed. Second: The plot is reasonable, non-toxic, consistent with realistic logic, or most people's views Third: The structure is solid, the concept is reasonable, the protagonist's ability, teammate's ability, and reaction, and the reaction of the indigenous people are in sync. Disadvantages: The author is too young, and many of the plots are actually not excellent and quite boring, but they are downplayed by his excellent writing style.

Very good, I really hate those who pretend to be pigs and eat tigers. To be honest, every part of the author's pen was written in a place I didn't expect.

After reading it, I can only say that it is too short. And when will the foreshadowing laid by the spirit cage world be dealt with? I think Bai Yuekui can also invite him, right?

The introduction may not be very well written, but the content is absolutely wonderful.

It looks good. I love watching it. When will I "eat meat" [smile][smile][smile]

The author can read the book "Tokyo Rain Demon". I feel that the protagonist's strengthening talent is very similar to your control talent, but he wrote it very well.

Not bad, not bad, come on, author

Not bad, support newcomers and new books

Five-star review mark

A replica of Samsara Paradise with teammates

It feels like I was dreaming back to five years ago.

Sailing in the ocean of words, looking for the beacon of wisdom, is food for the soul

Seriously, this book is really good

It's so beautiful, I saw the updates in one go [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The creativity is very good, the plot is smooth, and the protagonist and his friends seem to be very well portrayed so far, I like it 👍

It's pretty good to watch. The main character is not a virgin, nor does it overwhelm the main character's fighting ability.

Very well written. The plot is very smooth. There aren't many choke points at the moment. The number of sheets is just too few. Totally not enough.

I didn't want to watch Squad Infinite after seeing it, but I didn't expect it wasn't a group portrait or too much of a nanny. It looked good.

It seems to give people a comfortable feeling. Both the protagonist and the supporting characters have brains and taunts. They kill when they can and cannot kill as if everything is normal and wait until they are able to kill. There is no such thing as knowing that you will get into trouble and waiting for you to get into trouble. Especially the two attributes (body) (soul) on the panel are clean and neat. There is no cooling down of skills as long as the energy and body can bear it. There is no sense of déjà vu in online games. The team handled it very well. Finally: Author✧＼\ ٩(눈౪눈)و /／✧Come on! ! ! That shit is so ugly [crying]

When to go to Warhammer?

Who, who, hand over the inhibitor