Mortals Cultivate Immortality and Ask for Immortality

Su Chen lives in the turbulent world of cultivating immortals. He never acts recklessly, and every step is carefully planned and planned. In the face of struggles and opportunities from all sides, he can keenly understand his own advantages, such as skillfully using the characteristics of his spiritual roots, grasping the subtleties of the spells he has learned, and maximizing them. He can firmly grasp the fleeting opportunities in the eyes of others and transform them into the cornerstone of his own advancement. Such control of resources and situations is amazing. The rhythm of the story is superbly controlled. It is neither fast nor slow, just like a gurgling stream, winding but surely running towards the majestic river and sea. From the first steps on the threshold of cultivating immortality in the alleys of the city, to the sectarian turmoil, the exploration of secret realms, and then to the criss-crossing of various forces in the vast world of immortality, the world view gradually unfolds, and the settings are detailed and reasonable. Whether it is the restrictions and differentiation of cultivation talents by the spiritual root system, or the rules and logic behind the refining of magic weapons and elixirs, they can all withstand scrutiny and lay a solid foundation for the unrestrained imagination. The author's imagination is wide open and the ecology of cultivating immortals constructed is rich and diverse. Strange monsters, mysterious relics, magic weapons with different functions... Many fantasy elements come in one after another, but there is no sense of clutter. They are closely intertwined with the main line of Su Chen's growth, weaving a magnificent and fascinating picture of immortality. It makes people immersed in it. Following the protagonist through hardships, pointing the sword to the sky, and witnessing the gorgeous transformation from the ordinary to the extraordinary, it is undoubtedly a masterpiece of fantasy.

As we all know, there are only three realms of cultivating immortals, the ant stage, the Taoist stage, and the senior stage. The ants will die. Fellow Taoist, please stay, and seniors, spare your life!

It's really nice to watch, the rhythm is tight, the killing is decisive, not much nonsense, and it's not easy to advance. It's not like many novels where people practice qi in seclusion for a few years and then advance to one or two levels. Although it's fast here, it's all based on evidence. The protagonist can be more careful, build the foundation, or quickly reach the golden elixir. After you decide, you can have a Taoist companion, otherwise it will be a bit boring. The heroine should not have a large sect goddess, which is the same in other novels. It is boring. Instead, get a casual cultivator or an inner sect disciple with slightly better qualifications so that he can rise with the protagonist and not fall halfway, hehe! [Laughing awkwardly]

There are few cultivation novels that can write down both the main plot and the details. The protagonist is sentimental and not a virgin, and the character is well developed. There are no love disputes at the moment, and I don't reject the idea of ​​having a female protagonist. I just need to have good character development to keep up and not hold back. I'm fed up with some mindless harem stories and non-CP stories (they claim to have no female protagonists, but in reality every one of them is ambiguous). It's just too little, not enough to see [please update]

The plot is a bit old-fashioned, but the writing style is smooth, and the story is steady and progressive. It is not sudden or rushed, and the logic is not a big problem. It is very good, of course, it is a little worse than Liuding Shenhuo, Alchemy Path, Xinglu Xianzong, and Mingjinggao. Not bad, five-star praise (o^^o)

It's okay, the plot design is reasonable, and it's not like the protagonist can't walk when he sees a beautiful woman [like] But when the protagonist releases his momentum or thinks of something, why does he make a "snort" and use the word "inexplicable"? (For example, in the picture I see now, the protagonist was provoked. The protagonist used pressure to knock the provocateur away, and then returned to his home. The pet he kept noticed that it had a different smell and reminded him. When the protagonist found out, he let out a "snort" and asked the pet if there was something else on me that I didn't have before [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

It's worth watching A Few Mortals. I found it quite enjoyable. It doesn't have that abstract slap-in-the-face plot. And the rhythm is just right, neither too fast nor too slow, which is quite comfortable to watch.

The protagonist is smart and determined, has a bottom line and is adaptable, and has three correct views. He is a rare male protagonist in a fairy tale. The golden finger is also powerful and the setting is very reasonable. In short, it is a five-star rating.

I didn't read the book, so I looked at the table of contents. Chapter 255, Foundation Establishment, is about 700,000 words. The author plans to finish it in 4 million words. One-fifth of a book is in the Qi Refining period, and the remaining one-fifth is Foundation Establishment. I admire it!

After reading this book, I thought it was very good and had five stars, but when I saw the author mentioned a single female protagonist, I could only give it four stars. Because I think women are just seasoning on the way to the story. There can be female supporting characters but not female protagonists. So give it four stars and here I go!

The rating of 8.1 Is relatively objective. The plot is worth watching. There are many foreshadowings that can be filled in one by one. Currently, there are more than 700 chapters, which have been abandoned. The writing in Jindanqian is very detailed, and the character descriptions are also vivid. The masters, spiritual pets, and villains are all vivid. The Nascent Soul Queen is rougher. After opening the map, there are more inexplicable things. Large jumps in chapters do not affect the reading. Moreover, the words are casual to the point of confusion, describing the wasteland as "nothing" [shocked]... It would be a bit poisonous not to list them all. If you can read it, it is an option if there is a shortage of books.

There is an old routine in the front, but there is also a "heirloom" in the back, so it is quite good. Moreover, the author will listen to opinions in real time. Even if there is a bad plot, he will probably change it. Highly recommended! [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's pretty good-looking, one of the better ones in the Mortal Cultivation to Immortality series.

It's great. I love reading it. It's considered a high-quality novel for mortals so far. I like the protagonist's decisiveness in killing. It's also great that he doesn't have any ambiguity with any woman.

It's a good novel that can bring people into the situation, but the shortcomings are the ink marks: there are not many good things, the progress is extremely slow, and the upgrade is comparable to the difficulty of giving birth to an old woman; the chicken thief is the sixth child, versatile, no one recognizes and appreciates it! No matter how advanced the skills are, I can't beat them at every level. I wonder what's the use of learning them? Shuhuang is worth reading!

I have read Chapter 76 so far. Why is that unskilled person so awesome? The old Taoist who obviously has the most golden elixirs has mastered the road of destiny? Can everything be counted? It all depends on what happens to other people's golden elixirs later. If the other golden elixirs don't calculate the heavens and the earth, the Nascent Soul doesn't reverse reincarnation, and the transformed gods don't live forever, they won't be worthy of Lao Dao's incredible computing power.

It's worth watching, but the bond of the Five Elements Sect is a bit too tight. I still want to watch Lone Wolf [laughing]

The storyline is pretty good, and the pace is okay, sometimes fast and sometimes slow. The only drawback is that the writing is a little lacking, and it reads a bit dull, like a primary school student writing a diary, but I believe the author will get better and better as he writes.

It's considered average in Tomato. At least I can see that the author is writing seriously, unlike some novels where there are all kinds of holes after ten chapters. (I forced myself to read Chapter 10 [covering my face], and I usually endured anything that wasn't too toxic) Simply put, my point of view It was agreed first that ① the two friends who came out of the village can see that they are also growing up. This kind of writing is quite touching. I think it is more interesting than only the protagonist surviving. This is the first thing that attracted me. ②The protagonist is also growing up. He was a child at the beginning. There are many things that we shouldn't do from the perspective of readers, but it is really rare for the author to allow the protagonist to slowly grow and mature. I think the bad points ① Absorb spiritual energy. Most items contain spiritual energy. After absorbing spiritual energy, there will definitely be problems. Take the wild boar as an example. Although its skin and claws are still very good after absorbing spiritual energy, they are definitely incomparable to the original ones. Therefore, I think this problem when absorbing spiritual energy to build equipment can be used as a lesson, and then do not absorb the spiritual energy from this beast in the future. ② It is still about absorbing spiritual energy. Can the spiritual energy of the immortal cultivator be absorbed after death? I think this is very important. Also, the spiritual energy on the beast cannot be converted too much, otherwise it will be difficult to write if the realm is improved too quickly. ③The function and effect of Yao Ming (Yao Ming?) Can be more clear. I have read dozens of chapters and I feel like I remember nothing except the name. ④The fighting scenes were not written in detail. When I watched it, I felt that there was no sense of fighting on the screen. It only represents my personal opinions and suggestions, haha, it's really good, and compared to many others, I feel it's interesting that hundreds of thousands of people are following it. Come on [shy] There is also the problem of increasing the qualification fruit. Since it is a treasure, the qualifications that are improved are a bit small, and it cannot be formed by absorbing a little spiritual energy and the true source of the Qi Demon Pill. Take your time and don't rush. Although the qualifications are much better after eating them, the pace is also faster. I think if you want to write a very good work, you still can't hurry up [face covering]

There are not too many unbearable poisonous points in the first 100 chapters, that is, the realms are divided too finely, which affects the viewing experience. In fact, each major realm can be divided into early, middle and late stages. In addition, the first part is not exciting enough, but the later parts are getting more and more exciting. I have seen more than 200 chapters so far, which is still quite good.

A very good book. I hope the author will work harder.

One of the best immortality novels in recent years!

Advantage 1: I have read more than 1100 chapters, and there is almost no female protagonist, and there is no messy ambiguity. Advantage 2: The male protagonist is relatively established, smart, decisive, and dedicated to cultivating immortality. I like this. Advantage 3: The writing has improved a lot. I have also read some of the author's other two books. The writing of one is not as good as this one, and the story of the other is incomplete. This one is quite good for the time being.

The writing is good, the logic is clear, and the organization is clear. It is worth reading. There are many typos in the ointment.

ฅʕ•̫͡•ʔฅYou are a candy gifted to me by the Milky Way. Only for one person in my life. I wish you peace in all corners of the world? One bowl, two plates, three meals in all seasons. All your dreams are another reality. Don't forget that you look sweet. Can I taste it? Peace of mind means happiness will always be there? Stay awake and self-disciplined. , Know how to advance and know how to retreat, loving yourself. Time will not heal you, but will make you remember that life is hard enough, so don't suffer yourself anymore? Like is a choice, love right and wrong. You cannot be sensible. It is polished by life into a shape suitable for survival. Everything becomes soft after passing by you? One bowl and two plates, three meals and four seasons are all yours. It's just beautiful, highly praised! Come on

Very nice!!! It's just that the pace is a bit slow. You can increase the speed appropriately (after all, it's already more than 1 million words long. I visually estimated that the author will write it to the Nascent Soul stage at around 1.45 Million words) [Sending Hearts] [Love]

It's really good, the logic is clear and the plot is smooth. [Like][Like][Like] The flaw lies in the small realm of monks and should not be subdivided. (For example, each level of Qi refining has an initial stage, a middle stage, a late stage, and perfection) Additional suggestions: monks, monsters, martial arts, various arts of cultivating immortals, and treasures of heaven and earth must have corresponding grades. Kung Fu: Spiritual power (mental power), mana (spiritual consciousness), rudimentary rules, rules, rudimentary rules, rules (primordial spirit), rudimentary principles of Tao, principles of Tao, avenue, origin of Tao% For example, treasures: talisman, magic weapon, spiritual weapon, magic weapon, spiritual treasure, acquired spiritual weapon, innate spiritual treasure, Taoist weapon, [laugh][laugh][laugh]

It is much better than the fairy gourd next door, but the rating is not as high as the one next door.

The story is quite good. The author should pay more attention when coding and don't omit punctuation marks. Sometimes sentences are difficult to break, which affects the reading experience. The writing style can also be improved. Overall it is good.

It's okay. It's a relatively old style of writing about cultivating immortals. It took more than 200 chapters to establish the foundation. I don't know if Senior Sister Feng is the heroine. If she is the heroine, it feels inappropriate, but it seems that with the character of the male protagonist, it is difficult to suddenly fall in love with a girl. At least Senior Sister Feng will be in love for a long time [grievance]