Snh48's Guardian

It's good to read because this novel has a crush on the real Wang Yi

What can I say? The story is well written and interesting. I love reading it. But I feel like the content is a bit weird It has a faint human-machine feel (personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it)

This novel attracted me to click on it because it is really rare to see works with more poetic and picturesque chapters on Tomato. For us coconut milk cakes, it is a small blessing to find a familiar name on this platform. The reason for giving four stars is because I am very grateful to the author for his willingness to sacrifice his free time to create for us. This intention is worthy of recognition. However, from a reader's perspective, the plot still has some room for improvement in terms of time logic and emotional presentation. First of all, in terms of the main plot setting, it was clearly laid out in the early stage that Qi Qi passed away due to illness, and Yi Yi traveled back to the past because of this. However, the later plot almost did not mention the health issues of porridge at all, and this main line was diluted. Similarly, Yiyi went for a check-up due to heart cramps in the early stage, but the results were not disclosed later. Although you can make up your own mind that it is a psychological trauma, as the content of the novel, if the foreshadowing is not recycled, it will still make people a little confused. Next, there is the logic of the career setting. In his first life, Yiyi gave up his dream of being a movie queen and an actor because of Chu Pou's death, but after his rebirth, he suddenly changed jobs and became a CEO. This transition lacked transition and presentation, making it difficult for people to understand the change of mood in the middle. There is also a clear imbalance in the emotional line. Almost all interactions in the early stage are concentrated between Yiyi and Yaoyao. Although the relationship is emphasized as sisterhood, the description is very intimate, and there are even blushing and other plots, which can easily make people misunderstand the direction of the main relationship. On the other hand, the relationship development between Lunchou and Yiyi is very short, and the interaction is relatively simple, not even concise and clear. Instead, we coconut milk cakes need to rely on our understanding of reality to make up for the emotional thickness between them, which is actually a pity. Overall, although there is still room for improvement in the plot structure of this work, it is still worthy of support and encouragement to see the author creating it with such care and insisting on updating it. Especially knowing that this is the author's first attempt at writing a novel, I really admire your courage and action. Everyone will encounter confusion and challenges when writing their first work, but you are willing to take this step and choose to write a poetic and artistic story. This is a great thing in itself. I hope you can continue to be enthusiastic and don't be afraid to revise and grow. You are already on a great creative path. I look forward to more works in the future, and I also look forward to seeing your increasingly stable and confident brushstrokes. Come on! These are my thoughts after reading

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking article about Hanoi. The author is great and writes the bond between several people very well. I didn't pay much attention to Team H before, but the first and second batch students paid so much attention that I ignored them. It seems that the author likes them very much, so he wrote so vividly. This is the first time I have read so many articles and written a book review. I really like this work. I hope the author will create more good-looking works in the future.

I think it's very beautiful, but it has a bit of an ancient feel. Oops, I can't describe it clearly. You can feel it for yourselves.

There are many plots that should be in reality, and there are also different reading contents. It has been a long time since I found such a satisfying and happy novel. The contents are all what I like to read. I have given the author a big reward to support and encourage. Thank you for updating such a good novel. Five stars for your hard work. It's very beautiful, and some parts are very real and supportive.

The writing ability is very good. The works are vivid and vivid compared with real life. It is very good.

Very nice, but a little too academic-oriented

Zhou Shiyu and Wang Yi are having a good fight

I really like Wang Yi, Wang Yi, Wang Yi, baby! !

Very nice. Recommended for everyone to watch

I like it very much. It's really good. I hope the author can continue to update chapters every day.

Boss Zuo is so good at talking [Sending Hearts]

Beautiful, so sweet

Super pretty! More hair!

Very beautiful, come on

It's so delicious, whether it's Shi Yi, Hei Miao or Yao Yiyao

This book satisfied all the things I couldn't satisfy in real life. This book satisfied all my moods.

Good looking, good looking, good looking. Lots of updates. Not enough [crying][crying][crying]

The author writes superbly and the characters are well written [sending my heart][sending my heart]

Personally, I think it looks pretty good

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking

So beautiful. I love it.

A very nice book

It's so well written, so promising

Very nice and very interesting

Super universe is invincible and beautiful

Good, good, good, good

This book is very beautiful

The author's writing is excellent