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Hahaha, it's like you go to eat dumplings, only to find that only the dumpling fillings are delicious, but everything else is mediocre, the noodles are too hard, undercooked, the vinegar is too sour, the garlic has sprouts, the chopsticks have thorns, and even the napkins are cheap... But just because of the dumpling filling, I can still read it. So far, there is nothing objectionable. Anyway, as long as the dumpling filling is still there, you will always be willing to wait for the update of this book. Moreover, I feel that this should be a common sense work by the author. If the author is willing to put more effort into it, the overall quality can be greatly improved.

It's pretty good. But as long as the heroine is morally dark in the book, a bunch of people will come to judge her [Petrified]. The heroine just thought about it in her mind and didn't actually do it. She couldn't even have the slightest idea of ​​co-writing it. And for the sake of your own interests and safety, it's not too much to think about it [Shocked] [Shocked]

This book is really exciting📖, with a compact storyline, and every update makes people look forward to it✨! In particular, the character of the heroine and her golden finger setting are very attractive to me👍. Works with omniscient abilities like this are rare on the Tomato platform, which makes people shine🌟. The background of the current story focuses on the exploration of the bottom of the world of immortality🌲. The heroine's occupation is temporarily an alchemist🔮. This setting also makes people full of expectations🎯, and I hope to see more development📈. It would be even more perfect if this book could maintain a CP-free setting and complete the entire story💯! I am very much looking forward to the next plot📚, please continue to create💪!

Hmm... Weren't you very cautious at first? Then why did you expose yourself for nothing so that the Wang family could intercept and kill you? Would it be good for you to chop off that man's hand so he doesn't go to the academy?

It's beautiful, I love reading it, but I finished it after a while. Please keep updating the author! ! [Sending Hearts] What a pity. The plot after entering the college becomes more and more useless. It's the same as the running account of college students' admission records, what kind of takeout orders, student clubs organize the same teams, tutors for each major, and what time the class starts. These are all too modern, very inconsistent, and abandoned.

I don't have any cp yet and I haven't found any poison points. Although the plot is a bit too classic, I like to read classic ones (´-ω-`)

It's very interesting. There are very few novels written by female fans that are so realistic. Most of them are more like Mary Sues. The enemies cannot be killed directly. They also need evidence. It takes a long time to search and search, and many cannon fodders are killed. The enemies are still alive and kicking. From the beginning to the end, the enemies can be worn to death. , This one is more direct, with different stances. If you want to become an opponent, you can kill it directly. The heroine also has a grateful heart. When others treat her well, she will reciprocate. She will not blindly ask for or give blindly. They are all tied up with interests. This is more realistic. [Like]

I have seen Chapter 108 so far, no cp. In some previous plots, the heroine was careless, but it was the best the heroine could do. Looking at the main plot now, it is the age of great conflict. The saints and saints of the Holy Land are extremely talented and have top-notch physical skills and skills. The heroine's talent is not that high (doubtful, the golden finger is suspected of being a talent), but she will gradually surpass those with good talent, and I suddenly became excited. Like Ao Tianwen who has no bloody background

Keep it up, hope there is no CP

The idea is very good, but the heroine is really inconsistent with her words and actions. At the alchemy place, I said that I was not attracting attention, but ended up taking the first level, the second level, and the third level after that. . .

It looks good, I like it. What I like most is that there is no functionally vicious female supporting character. There is still the specter of her being robbed of her body. In the latest update, the heroine's body has been completely repaired and passed the clear path. The other four bodies have also been promoted. It should be a real world of war.

It's nice to watch, but there are too few and the fighting methods are not very detailed. It gives people the feeling that the person who shot the skill is gone. At least describe the reaction of the action. The plot is not bad.

The novel is quite good, but the VIP card suddenly appeared in the middle and I was immediately thrown into a panic. There are also some super modern places. I hope the author can be more rigorous (at least not so confusing!)

No? ! Such a beautiful fantasy novel, but no one reads it? ? ? These are really beautiful. The heroine is calm and rational. There is no cp. The plot is written one after another. The author begs you to update it quickly. I hope to see the heroine establish the Qingyun Sect as soon as possible, and to see the heroine restore the Taoist body as soon as possible.

Well written, keep it up💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

It's good to watch, no surprises, it's very enjoyable, it's fun all the way, but it's just too little, wow, the heroine is very decisive, and her talent is awesome, and then there are some hooks, it's so good to watch, but it's just a little lacking, please come on, author.

The main heroine novel, I haven't seen the male protagonist so far, so it should be cp-free. Although the heroine has traveled through time, she is not like other novels where she doesn't dare to kill or is bound by morality. The heroine kills and takes revenge very quickly. She kills people and takes revenge. She kills people and doesn't let children go. It's really good-looking. I like it so much [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration], but it's a little lacking.

It's good to watch, but the story line felt a bit confusing at first, but the core of the story is really a story about upgrading to become a fairy. The cultivators in it are all competing for powerful power. There is not much romance, and the story line is reasonable. It is not a traditional fairy tale with more men than women. Some titles such as boy and senior are not specifically used to refer to men, but return to their original meaning of neutral terms. When you see some contradictions, don't rush to deny the author. Things will come back later, so you can calm down and wait for the continuation. It's pretty good.

This novel is very engrossing. The author's descriptive ability is very good, making people feel like they are immersed in the situation of the story. The story is compact, gripping, and enjoyable to read. The characters are distinct and have different personalities, allowing people to gain an in-depth understanding of each character's inner world. The logic of the whole story is clear and the plot has ups and downs. This novel is worth reading.

Oh my god, it's so good. It's so great. I love the heroine so much that I can't bear to read it all at once. It's a good book and the story is novel and lifelike [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Flowing kiss] [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss] I really like watching the growth of the heroine. Nowadays, many novels about cultivating immortals end when they are written about ascension. I hope the author will write more and make it longer hahaha. I express my love to the author again [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It's okay, but I feel like it's just a bit...

Very pretty. I actually discovered it so early, it was only over 60,000 words long, so I had to wait. [Almost crying]

It's very beautiful. The reason why it's four stars is because the update is discontinued. It's really beautiful and the setting is very novel. When I clicked in, I discovered the author's latest update, Interstellar Nanny Guide. I'm also following the update. This book is also super beautiful and the setting is very interesting. When will the update be renewed for this book? Go check out other works. I like both of them very much and can't even skip a chapter. Forget it, I'll give it five stars. I really hope the author will continue this book [Sending my heartfelt thanks]

There are too few shortcomings [crying] Why are all the good books new [crying]

I hope it will be light or 100 [top post] I hope Shen Liner can accompany the protagonist until the end [top post]

It's not a new book, it's a new book. ! Why are there so few?

It's really cracked, and I discovered it in the new article,

Sorry, can someone tell me when the heroine will get rid of her blackheads? The main reason is that I can't control myself, and the heroine's blackheads always flash in my mind [cover face][cover face]. After all, the little cannon fodder can see the blackheads on the heroine's nose from such a distance, and they are already a blemish, so I would like to ask if the heroine has any chapters about removing blackheads.

It's very beautiful, the setting is novel, and the writing is fluent. Don't give up. It would be even better if it can be updated. [Sending my heart]

I have a very rich imagination when writing fantasy novels. Many of the plots are novel and interesting, and the heroine is tenacious and positive. It's great to watch!