What Should I Do If I Travel Through Time and Become the Male Protagonist's Mortal Enemy?

It's super good-looking, and I really like the characters. Luo Yunchen's characters are really rare now. He's kind to everyone, kind and innocent. He's not a cool, domineering or scheming bastard. I feel that the relationship between him and Shou Qi Fanyi is also very cute. In short, both of their characters are very cute. After Luo was stabbed in the back for the first time, he spoke very little, and the interaction between the two seemed not that much. Luo's character seemed a little thin, but the author loved his character very much, and specially wrote Xiao Luo's diary, and wrote about Gong's psychological journey. I feel that I can better understand their emotional line, and Luo's character is also richer and more three-dimensional. What I don't like the most is that Qi has been controlled by the system for too long. Now Qi still needs to maintain her personality and can't do OOC things. This makes me sad. If it weren't for the system, they would have been together long ago [crying] The interaction between the two is not too much, it is not industrial saccharine, it is a sweet love, there is no male partner or female partner in the middle, you can feel free to enter [blowing kiss]

The characters are so good! It also has a sense of destiny, which is the kind of love I want! ! ! ! This is my mission and I have to hate you. This is so delicious! It's just that the current male protagonist's identity makes me a little frustrated. The rest of it really doesn't have any flaws, and it also has a bit of a group character flavor, which I like. It's delicious for me. Needless to say, it looks good. Dear author, I advise you to change the cover. Maybe it will really attract a large number of readers who come for the cover. I was almost discouraged by the cover at first, but overall it's very delicious, but no one in the circle cooks it U ´꓃ ` U I'm sorry, if anyone sees my comment, be sure to read this book, just click in and read it!

The writing by the goddess is really beautiful, and the characters are super cute. They are exactly the type I like to eat. Luo Yunchen is just a cute big dog, and Fanfan is an arrogant little cat. It's really cool, so pretty, I like it🥰

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The entire book is from the perspective of Shou. From the beginning to now, it is all about Shou's cultivation path. There was very little interaction with Gong in the early stage, and only a little more interaction started when he changed his identity in the later stage. The system did not appear in the later period. I don't know if I read less. Since I changed my identity system, the OOC warning did not appear. It seems that the points obtained through the plot have not been used. Who is that voice of fast walking that appears in the forbidden area? But the author hasn't finished writing yet, so I'm still looking forward to the subsequent plot. Come on, come on. Come on.

The writing is a bit green, but the more you write, the better. The emotional output is very sympathetic, especially the first-person self-narration. I still like this story very much and hope to see extras or more works.

Wow wow wow this book is really well written! ! ! ! The plot line is really interesting! It's been a long time since I've seen an author write such a good first book! The writing is very cute, cheers! High quality but not popular makes me angry! I hope the author will get better and better! Looking forward to the extra episode

The author has great potential. Although the article has many small flaws and the logic is not very rigorous, I can still accept it. I really like the description of Xiao Luo's psychological activities. The characters instantly become three-dimensional. Come on, author, it is getting better and better [Like][Like]

It's really good-looking, the characters are brilliant, the ideas are not weak, and there are no strange plot changes. I can really feel the power of words, which is deafening and enlightening. In addition, Xiao Luo's diary is really immersive, and he will not forget the previous plot. His emotional process is also written out, and there is a feeling of "this is what he thinks", so flesh and blood.

Delicious, Xiao Luo is a puppy

It's very beautiful, but I have a problem. The two bodies of the senior brother have always been other people's. It's really frustrating to watch. There is no mention of changing to a new body later, but Luo kissed both bodies, so it doesn't matter whether they change or not.

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I think the author's writing of the plot of Xianxia is still okay. The outline is good, but the details need to be polished. If there can be more foreshadowing and interspersed with daily life, it will be a long story. However, this article should be the clearest I have ever read.

It's super good-looking. I enjoyed watching it in one sitting. The characters are super full and the changes in the image before and after are very logical! ! ! ! ! ! This is not a brainless novel in the traditional sense. The emotional changes between the protagonists and the progress control are very well written💙🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹Highly recommended! ! ! ! !

The images of each character are very three-dimensional, and the emotional lines are also very touching. It is simply the mutual redemption of two cute babies. I hope they can get married soon! ! !

I have been reading this novel for the past few days, and I was thinking about it in class. It is really good, and it tortured me later. I feel that the plot and plot are very good, and the characters are also good. It is really good, but it is still being updated [cry][cry], update soon, www[cry][cry] I've been following more hehe [Adoration] [Adoration] is really good-looking

It's so beautiful. Why doesn't anyone watch it? The rating is not high [crying][crying][crying]

It's pretty, but I feel a little bit sadistic

Very nice! (Already watched seriously) [Top post] [Blow kiss]

It's good-looking, it's really good-looking, and the abuse is really sad (›´ω`‹). There are actually a lot of regrets in the whole story. It can be seen from the back that the author is in a hurry. It doesn't matter. I think the emotional line of the author is okay. In fact, I think it is quite delicate. But after the author, the protagonist does not return to his own world. Wouldn't his sister be sad? (┯_┯)

In fact, it is very beautiful. I have always supported this author. Then, I have been following the update for a long time. The ending may be a bit rushed for newbies, but in general it is good. It is still smooth today. After reading it in one go, it should be okay for the senses. Especially the Xiao Luo diary, it is so cute to me [Love]

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It's okay. The protagonist's characterization is kind-hearted [please update], but there are more side stories interspersed in the middle, or another protagonist's perspective. I hope we can advance the main line more The ending was a bit unexpected and relatively short. [Thinking] Overall it's still a bit short, and fewer people have watched it, but overall it's OK [exploration]. Wait for the extra story

Dad, I like your books so much, come on [blow a kiss]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The two little ones are so cute [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's good to watch, but I don't agree with the ending! ! ! Extra ah ah ah!

So pretty, two little bitter gourds

I'm going to kill old Feng Fengle and wish 99 well.

Good-looking, senior brother is good at being bright and attractive.