Above the Nine Heavens, the cold and ascetic Immortal Lord Shen Yuxu took in a poor young disciple Liu Yunzhi. I thought it was just a simple master-disciple relationship, but I didn't expect that Liu Yunzhi was extremely talented, and his cultivation was getting better and better, and he even had a faint tendency to surpass his master.
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Not bad, but there is a slight lack of foreshadowing in some places, which makes a small part a bit inexplicable. You can add some character descriptions to the book, but the writing style is a good advantage. If you want to write about knives, you need more foreshadowing [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
Not bad, but there is a slight lack of foreshadowing in some places, which makes a small part a bit inexplicable. You can add some character descriptions to the book, but the writing style is a good advantage. If you want to write about knives, you need more foreshadowing [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]