HP: Iris Fragrance

I like the setting so far, but I feel that the author's writing style is a bit childish. For example, adding some small theaters, and too many emojis are not objectionable. The small theaters and emojis added in the first chapter are a bit awkward. It's really hard to describe the writing in one sentence. When describing sadness, sadness and shock, it's all replaced by a series of "ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhh" and exclamation marks, and using emojis to express emotions. I like the setting of the introduction very much, but from the current point of view, the first part is really weak. I don't know if the writing style will be improved in the later chapters.

I don't know how to express it, because I came in because I was attracted by the Weasley Twin CP label. I have read a lot of Weasley Gemini CP stories recently, whether they are male or female or male-male Gemini CP stories. This is the second male-male Gemini CP story that I have read. But this article is very readable. Although there are not many emotional scenes, and it is not the most readable among my many Gemini cp articles, it is still very readable. I do not mean to slander the author. But it's really good-looking and well-written, and it made me cry during the fight at the end, really. Maybe I really don't like abuse, and I prefer plain love stories. This may be the reason why this Gemini cp story doesn't rank very high in my mind. But it's really good-looking, and it made me feel better when I cried. I'm also very grateful for this article. Because for a while I went crazy looking for Gemini CP articles, and I realized that life can't always be smooth. Reading the chapter "Original Ending" in it made me cry and felt much better. Although it's very sharp, it's highly recommended for anyone who likes a little abuse, peace, and meat. Let me say it again, the teacher is my god. (I weakly ask the teacher if you have any idea of ​​​​opening a second book. Although this one is not finished yet, the extra chapters are still being updated. I make a small wish, I hope it will be a warm and not so sad HP novel, please, please) If some treasures think it is not good, please don't insult the author. After all, I have worked hard to update it. Everyone has different tastes. Please, please [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Come on, author! I really like this book. To be honest, I liked it very much when I saw the introduction. My favorite is the Weasley Twins (two boys), but it is really difficult to find a book. Thank you to the author. Don't be unfinished or abandon the book. ❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆC)

It's super good-looking, the only two good-looking Gemini articles I've ever read! ! ! ! I really recommend everyone to read this book, don't miss it! ! ! !

It's so good. It's one of the few books I particularly like. I'll update it soon ⊙ω⊙ @minute

This book is really nice Good looking, super good looking

The author used stars to compare Asta, which really hit me hard! Sandwich biscuits, etc., I really like them! (*'▽'*)♪

Um. If you don't watch the prequel, it's just a pure and good-looking duo, you won't be traumatized.

The author will update soon! ! ! It's not enough to watch! ! ! ! !

I really think it's good to watch. I've watched it several times. I highly recommend [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Highly recommended, because it's very beautiful

The author's book is so great. Keep writing and it will make you happy along the way! Keep writing, and the future is promising! [Code live][code hold][code hold][code hold][code hold][code hold][learned][learned][learned][learned][learned][learned]

So pretty! ! ! (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ It's really well written, highly recommended! ! ! (Just a little less...) Big cheers for the author! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's a wonderful feeling, I like it very much

Crow Head, are you serious? I will cry to death [crying]

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Looks good😊I don't know what to say, but in short, just rush it

I finally found a book that I like to eat [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It looks good, I like Gemini, and I can flirt with Deha [laughing]

I won't say anything else. It's so beautiful. Brothers, you'll know after watching it. It's super sweet (as for whether this sweetness is really sweet or fake, you can see for yourself [laughs] [OK])

It's really good to read. He basically commented on all the regrets and everyone survived. Basically, it's a beautiful book. It's really

The setting is really good, there is a feeling of happiness, I like it very much, the original text is a bit confusing, everyone here is very happy, I like [][][]

It looks good so far. Just a little less

I have to ask, is it HE? This is very important to me🥺🥺🥺[Send heart]

It looks good, the author should work hard and update quickly (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's really super pretty! ! ! Your writing is super good

The writing is super beautiful and delicate, and each young couple is super sweet. The author, please work hard to update it. I will always support this book