Starting in America, I Become the Master of Fairy Tales

It doesn't matter if you are a child or not, the main thing is to be an adult.

So far, it's not bad. The protagonist has a flexible moral bottom line and is quite efficient in doing anything. In addition, the plug-in such as offering sacrifices and returning rewards is also okay. I hope you can stick with it for a long time and don't get cheated like others of the same type.

The plot is wonderful, I wrote one and reviewed one, and then posted one and reviewed another [thinking] [smile] The review shows that the more exciting the plot is, I reviewed it once, but I have no desire to watch it, and reviewed it multiple times, which made me curious to see it, and the previous content has not been changed [smile]

From the beginning, it seems that there is not much of a logical problem. At most, some common sense writers have not been exposed to it, so they did not write it well. It's rare for a novel with this rating. But the protagonist's plug-in is a bit too powerful, and he can wear it back and forth anytime and anywhere. By adding sacrifice, you can become stronger, including being able to see through the opponent at any time. The only weak thing is that he didn't become stronger immediately. The only one who can limit him is himself. Including América's identity, she can get a gun at any time, which is actually just a way to hide the strength on her body ( I think the creativity of this novel is pretty good. If it wasn't so strong, I could write more than 100 or 200 chapters in one copy. Character descriptions and the growth of the protagonist can all be written, and there are also ready-made stories that can be used. You can just modify and adapt them yourself. The characters are ready-made ( But now it seems to be a normal and enjoyable article, and I still feel a little regretful. Generally speaking, the hook is too strong, which makes it not attractive enough. After all, the most enjoyable articles can only be read in the first few chapters. Secondly, the overall rhythm feels relatively fast. Then, the promotion of girls is very simple, but there is not much description, and it feels like the pendant component is more important. Tomato is quite strict, so if there are more than one girl, you should focus more on character descriptions and more on group portraits, as no one will read it just by recommending it. After all, when it comes to sex scenes, I think moderators are better to use ( But overall it's pretty good, and the logic isn't too big of a problem. It is no longer easy for Shuangwen to be logically reasonable ( The other issues are the ones mentioned above, so I give it 3.5 Stars.

Ahem, it looks good. You will know exactly what is good-looking by looking at it yourself. The further you go to the back, the better it looks. (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The writing is not bad, but it suffers from the common problem of most books, which suppresses the protagonist's fighting ability.

I remember reading something similar, probably a long time ago. It was very similar to this book, but it was gone after about a hundred chapters.

When will the bright moon come? I drink wine and ask the blue sky. I wonder what year it is in the palace in the sky. I want to ride the wind and go back, but I am afraid that the beautiful buildings and jade houses are too cold at high places. I dance to clear the shadows. How can it be like being in the human world! (Update soon)

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update it, because I believe that I can see its ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up, nothing will be a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you are a senior performer, and I am the audience who appreciates the film. Your performance has reached a fascinating level. Just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard", one more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. The contradictory and complicated emotions drive me crazy. I was just a bored idler, and I clicked on this novel carelessly, without intending to finish it. But you succeeded in making me "half" finish it. Now, only feelings can make a thousand things! Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a sense of luck, I hope you can see it. Come on, author, I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours.

Although the author was driving, the writing was pretty good. It was true and not meant to be sarcastic or anything else.