In America, I Travel Through Adult Fairy Tales

It doesn't matter if you are a child or not, the main thing is to be an adult.

So far, it's not bad. The protagonist has a flexible moral bottom line and is quite efficient in doing anything. In addition, the plug-in such as offering sacrifices and returning rewards is also okay. I hope you can stick with it for a long time and don't get cheated like others of the same type.

The plot is wonderful, I wrote one and reviewed one, and then posted one and reviewed another 🤔 [smile] The review shows that the more exciting the plot is, I reviewed it once, but I have no desire to watch it, and reviewed it multiple times, which made me curious to see it, and the previous content has not been changed [smile]

The beginning is logically sound, with only minor flaws in some common-sense writing due to the author's unfamiliarity with the subject. This is quite remarkable for a novel of this rating. However, the protagonist's overpowered abilities are a bit too much, allowing him to travel between different worlds at will. He gains strength through sacrifice, even possessing the ability to see through his opponents at will. His only weakness might be his failure to immediately become stronger; the only thing limiting him is himself. Including Amelika's identity, her ability to obtain guns at any time is essentially a kind of power she carries with her. I think this novel has a good creative concept. If the overpowered abilities weren't so strong, each arc could easily be written into 100-200 chapters. Character descriptions and the protagonist's growth are all things that can be written, and there are already existing stories to use; you just need to adapt them. There are also readily available character traits. However, it seems to be just a typical wish-fulfillment story, which is still a bit of a disappointment. In short, the overpowered abilities made it less appealing, since most novels are just about satisfying readers who only read the first few chapters. Secondly, the overall pace feels quite fast. Then there's the part about pushing women, which is straightforward, but there's not much description, making it feel more like a supporting character. Tomato is quite strict, so if there are multiple women, it's better to focus on character descriptions and create a group portrait; just pushing women won't get many readers. After all, when it comes to sex scenes, I think the moderator is more useful. Overall, it's not bad, and there aren't many logical problems. For a light novel, achieving logical coherence is already quite an achievement. The other issues are the ones mentioned above, so I'm giving it 3.5 Stars.

Cough cough, it looks very good. You'll see for yourselves where it's best; it gets better as you go on. (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The writing is not bad, but it suffers from the common problem of most books, which suppresses the protagonist's fighting ability.

I remember reading something similar, probably a long time ago. It was very similar to this book, but it was gone after about a hundred chapters.

When will the bright moon come? I drink wine and ask the blue sky. I wonder what year it is in the palace in the sky. I want to ride the wind and go back, but I am afraid that the beautiful buildings and jade houses are too cold at high places. I dance to clear the shadows. How can it be like being in the human world! (Update soon)

Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update, because I believe I will live to see the ending. Please write diligently, it doesn't matter how long it takes, as long as you don't abandon the story, everything is fine. I, along with your loyal readers, will wait. I greatly admire your writing style, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if I were to put myself in the story, you would be the seasoned actor, and I would be the audience. Your performance has reached a captivating level. Just like Jian Han's experience watching "The Fifteenth Day of Leohard," every episode I watch is one less to watch. I want to watch more, but I'm also reluctant to give up. This contradictory and complex feeling is driving me crazy. I'm just a bored person who randomly clicked on this novel without any intention of finishing it, but you successfully got me to finish it "halfway." Now, I can only feel a thousand emotions! Only by leaving a comment can I calm my emotions at this moment. I hope you will see it, hoping against hope. Keep going, author, I look forward to every "next chapter."

Although the author was driving, the writing was pretty good. It was true and not meant to be sarcastic or anything else.