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OMG it's very good-looking... I originally clicked it because I saw a fan named Seerhao, but I didn't expect it to be so good-looking. The character setting, interaction, and shaping are also top-notch! The elf is very cute, I really like Elaine, meow, and I also like Hermes very much! The interaction between the two makes my heart melt... Then, I saw that the boss said that he had a painting fan in the circle, so I quickly clicked in and took a look. Oh my god, I was surprised again when I saw the paintings drawn by the boss. Where can I find an adult who writes so well and draws so beautifully? The style of painting really impressed me... I didn't want to pause for a moment. I quickly read it and found that the word "catch up" in yellow made me painful for a moment. I immediately wrote a review just because I was excited after reading it. The summary is, a very good article that makes my hair spin. My love comes from an unknown reader.

It's very interesting. I read it all in one go. Compared with other fanfics by the author, this one by the author is simply a masterpiece. Others either have a harem, or have an old-fashioned domineering feel. Anyway, they just look awkward. However, the author's plot and character descriptions are very consistent with the thinking of normal people. All in all, it's good to read. I hope the author will not stop updating [Sending Hearts]. We readers will always look at your [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Overall, he has a lot of potential. The character of this child is very attractive to me, so please be sure to continue to update [Blow kiss] Although he looks cold on the outside, he is a little sun on the inside! I always feel something weird, like there is a hidden sword...

Mud, after reading only a few chapters, I was completely conquered by the protagonist's beauty... Ah, no, personal charm. I just like this kind of small facial paralysis that is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. The non-human control seems to be satisfied (peaceful), and I want to arrest the author and write 800 chapters a day, Jie Jie Jie...

The writing is really to my liking, and there are almost no mistakes. The main character has a very upright outlook on things, a boy-mom type, I love it very much. There are no gratuitous funny or abstract character behaviors, the warm scenes are natural and not artificial, and the writing ideas and concepts do not follow the public. What I see is the author's sincerity and love, and I really support the author to continue. Maybe your writing is a little immature, but your sincerity will be seen by everyone, come on! ! ! In fact, I also want to write a novel. The author also inspired me. You must finish it.

This is really a highly recommended book! Elaine, I will always follow you... The protagonist is an elf, but has a paralyzed face and is afraid of shadows. He doesn't look like a good person but actually makes people feel heart-warming. The plot line does not follow the protagonist and spans five seasons and goes directly to the eighth season. He has great mobility and freedom. Elaine is just himself! There is a new alliance to raise the war, but it is in another world... It means that there may be a Shura field Jie Jie Jie, especially if Solane is raised... That's right... (Devil whispers) It's our Black Onion... There is a lot of food! There are so many rice packages in the book circle that you will not starve to death, and the interactive atmosphere is also very good. Everyone is a cute baby... (What? So cute? Anyway, come and join Imen... (Whispering)

A great, very gentle book... (What am I talking about...) In short, the protagonist's relationship with other people is very healing. The author has been involved in many circles, and the ingredients are very complex, very funny, and very interesting. All in all, you can tell by the five stars I gave it, and I wholeheartedly recommend it! (This is just a random recommendation for five stars. It has no actual reference value. All in all, it is a very good book. I suggest you read it yourself...

This novel is great, it cured my chronic bronchitis, asthma, emphysema, bronchiectasis, pneumonia, whooping cough, mycoplasma pneumonia, pneumothorax, herpangina, adult respiratory distress syndrome, chronic inflammation, cancer, constipation, chronic diarrhea, acute inflammation, acute corrosive gastritis, gastrointestinal disorders, food poisoning, abdominal pain, colorectal cancer, peptic ulcer diabetes, hyperthyroidism and blood disorders. Blood diseases, thalassemia, lymphoma, aplastic anemia, Henoch-Schönlein purpura, anemia caused by vitamin B12 deficiency, iron deficiency anemia, infection, chronic nephritis, hydronephrosis, urethritis, uremia, renal cysts, kidney stones, acute renal and cardiovascular medicine, hypertension, Coronary heart disease, myocarditis, myocardial infarction, congenital heart disease, AIDS, whooping cough, breast milk jaundice, pediatric fever, septicemia, tinea cruris, pediatric pneumonia, thalassemia, diaper rash, pediatric cerebral palsy, hand, foot and mouth disease, childhood enuresis, infant diarrhea, hernia, pediatric malnutrition, autism, ADHD, ALS, depression, mania, photosensitive epilepsy, I will think about this novel every night before going to bed

It's really, really beautiful! The writing is very good! The protagonist Elaine has a paralyzed face but is gentle and powerful. The setting is very touching! ! And the main character has a very charming personality. The plot is so engaging, I can't get enough of it! Big cheers for the author, Meow Meow Meow! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

As a reader who has read thousands of books and read for nearly a thousand hours, I have rarely seen such thoughtful fan fiction. I can tell that the author has an unparalleled love for this book. In fact, I can assert that this book is definitely more thoughtful than 90% of the novels. Although the author is a novice, the editing techniques and emotions of the novel are in place, and The character setting serves the plot very well, and not only does it overcome the errors of a large number of system fan fiction, but it also improves on this basis. For example, the protagonist. Generally speaking, there are two types of protagonists. One is to only name the protagonist and not describe the protagonist too much so that players can be brought in. The other is to be an independent individual by himself, allowing readers to watch from the third person. But because of the writing problems of most authors, most of them are of the first type, but cannot let go of the second type, which leads to the end being neither fish nor fowl. However, this novel describes the second type of protagonist very well. I personally like it very much. Moreover, the author rarely writes about the protagonist and the system. In my opinion, it is very valuable, because in the eyes of most authors , the system is just a tool, and the protagonist is just a carrier, but the author has made a very careful description. The picture of the past self grabbing hold of the present self in the dream that Hermes gave Elaine is really touching. The character and image of the protagonist are very lovable. It can be seen that the author cares about this novel, not to mention that the author actually draws the setting diagram for this book? ? ? This kind of behavior can really only be described as commendable, and this book handles the relationship between the characters very well. Although it introduces the extremely risky setting of elf extraction, which may cause the plot to collapse, there is nothing objectionable in the whole article. The overall writing style is very good, which reminds people of the taste of childhood. This is really... It is really commendable. It reminds me of the expectation and expectation of reading the novel for the first time. Exciting, considering that the author is still a brand-new novice, it has a promising future, but that's not to say that there are no problems, but in comparison, it is simply innocuous, so I won't go into details here. The only obvious shortcoming is that it was a bit rushed in the early stages, but it got better after that. In short, I am very optimistic about this author, and I hope you can continue to work hard, hone your skills, and then... Update more! (Don't be like a certain salty fish. I read two huge and beautiful books before becoming an eunuch. I really want to send him a razor blade. Seize the opportunity given to you (งᵒ̌ᵒ̌)ง⁼³₌₃) Oh, by the way, the reason this book is rated at 8. Is entirely because it is too new and there are too few reviews. You can finish reading it. Whoever reads it will know, and you have to be patient to read the first few chapters.

A very good book with almost no flaws. The writing is delicate and the characters are three-dimensional. Each character is very three-dimensional. There is no feeling of "forcibly expressing sorrow to compose new words". You can feel between the lines that Fried Rice loves them. It's like a real world, and I was lucky enough to learn their stories, the venomous 03, the childish Judgment, the aloof lord and the timid Huanyuan... Everyone is so vivid and fresh, maybe this is the charm of the group portraits. Xiao En is good, the system is good, and everyone is good. Fried Rice is really good at writing about the inner changes of characters. During the ups and downs along the way, Xiao En has also been confused and panicked because of the unknowns and difficulties in the road ahead, but he always keeps moving forward and making progress. When the sea breeze turns the page, maybe you have forgotten your previous life. But no matter what, you will always be you. Whether it is Elaine or Su Bayi, please keep in mind that you are expected. No matter whether it is the third time or the second time, everyone loves you. Therefore, please be as open-minded and brave as you were when traveling in the Kingdom of Heaven, as you were on the road to rebirth, as you were when facing 03! Xiao En, may all your wishes come true, everything you do may be smooth, may you do everything you want, may you be happy in everything, may you always have choices, and may your paths turn around. Also, the writing on Fried Rice is really good. I have followed it since 24 years ago and I really like this book! ! ! Looking forward to the follow-up plot [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss] (Some random thoughts, I rarely write book reviews, maybe the writing is not very good, please forgive me [sending my heart])

The protagonist's character is funny and scary on the inside, but due to some factors, to others, he looks very serious and unsmiling on the outside. The warm sun like winter brings salvation to people. At the same time, he is also a responsible parent who can be trusted as a companion. When the people he cares about don't care about his own safety, or when the people he cares about hide something from him, he will get angry but will still pay attention to the current situation. There is no doubt that he is rational and responsible, which happens to correspond to his name - Elaine, bringing light in the darkness. The author's writing style also improves slowly from chapter to chapter, and occasionally inserts a few jokes to make the article full of joy, making it interesting to read. The foreshadowing is too obvious but easier to understand. If there are any mistakes, correct them promptly. The author also often posts pictures of people in book circles to make it easier for people to imagine the things described in their minds. (The paintings you ladies draw are really beautiful) This book has a promising future, and I also hope that the author will get better and better. I look forward to the next chapter and the next book.

This is my first time commenting. I don't know what to say. It's just beautiful. This is the best Selvin I've ever seen. It's not stupid, and the plot makes sense. The author must finish it and don't leave it unfinished (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

Ouch me! As for the author, who is both a mother and a father, she still cooks after reading the novel! Marvelous! [Lick screen] The plot is also positive, healthy, sunny and uplifting! The protagonist needs to be a gentle male mother! It's cold on the outside and hot on the inside! Just this silly baby with facial paralysis and rich inner drama! The supporting characters are obedient, cute and carefree, warm and hospitable. If we exchange names, we will be friends for life! Readers of Aikang Nurture, don't leave yet [laughs] (stuffs biscuits) Don't leave after eating the cookies! [Sending Hearts] Tied! The author's writing is very good, the daily routine is humorous, heartwarming and fun! (✪ω✪) Our Elaine has also been successfully fooled into thinking that she is beautiful and powerful. Haha, I look forward to the follow-up plot! ! [Lick screen]

It's beautiful. It's considered one of the best in Seer's fan fiction. Moreover, the author drew the pictures himself. He is also very gentle. You stinky babes, stop reading those harems and eat something delicious. Besides, I don't think I have ever played Identity V.

Author I am really addicted! Please add another chapter, the child is already scratching his head and can't wait 😭 The writing is so delicate, the foreshadowing is wonderful, and the plot advances smoothly, making it completely immersive to watch! The most coincidental thing was when the Son of Light (the Rebellious Son of Light) appeared, I happened to be running into Yunye when the light came on. It gave me that wonderful feeling of interdimensional linkage. I watched Seer when I was in elementary school, but I haven't paid attention to it for six or seven years now. I was immediately hooked when I saw the introduction. I still know a lot of follow-up news about anime and games from the article. The regret is more about the surprise of the reunion~ The contrasting cuteness of Eles is really too cute, but I beg the author to show mercy🙏 There are just a few typos, but they don't affect the perception at all. This book is really highly recommended, please update it soon, author! Finally, no cp is simply a god! 😭

After reading it, I feel warm in my heart. The content is joyful and warm, and the characters have their own personalities. I sincerely recommend. I like the teacher who is undoubtedly correct, objective, reasonable, clear, true, dialectical, profound, accessible, graceful, ingenious, incisive, witty, comprehensive, and beyond doubt. , To the point, to the point, incisively and vividly, well versed in the truth, with true insight, enlightening, with a golden voice, to see the essence through the phenomenon, to know the reason why it is, to be imitated by the world, to be unbreakable through the ages 🌹 I really love it, please update and kick it, thank you 🙏

It's super pretty. This is a wife who can draw and write. This rice is so delicious (I rushed in when I saw the cover, a rare breed of Seer Wen). Elaine is so cute. Male mothers want male mothers o(*￣▽￣ *)o, Konjac is so cool. Elaine's character really pokes me. She is a male mother who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside (￣￢￣*). She is sensitive on the inside and has a bit of a charlatan attribute. Although she looks dangerous on the outside (from the netherworld filter of her own mother) Buff (ಡωಡ) is very gentle when getting along with "people" and has a mysterious past (I actually don't know about the character of World Consciousness). Who said this character is bad? This character design is great, the relationship between Elaine and the elf is really cute (I want to rush into the screen and take a big sip, is this allowed?) I am looking forward to the scene of meeting the main characters in the future (ಡωಡ), I quietly asked my wife, this is supposed to be sweet, right OAO (put out a tentative foot) Please rate

Very nice! I have read so many of Purcell's OCs. The only ones I thought were good-looking were this one and Bai Yueguang's. The OCs in both books are very beautiful and their views are correct. They are worth watching! !

The authority of the egg fried rice boss is simply unquestionable. This Seer fanfic is really delicious. I like the male mother Elaine of the protagonist. She is very good to the elf cubs she raised. For the friends she has made, she is a reliable friend who can give her back. Friends who guide their progress, the interaction with everyone is warm, while the interaction with the villains is either playing tricks or fighting directly (bushi). It is a delicious fanfic that is both warm and pretentious. The characters in it are basically not OOC, highly recommended😚😚😚

It's a very nice novel. I came across it by chance. I fell in love with it as soon as I read it. Hehehe. The author's portrayal and control of the characters are very delicate and beautiful. Personally, I feel that the author's writing is very successful, especially the description of the protagonist Elaine, which really shocked me!!! Ahhhh! The interactions between the characters in the plot are also very heartwarmingＯ(≧口≦)Ｏ Full marks!!!

I just realized that I forgot to rate it! It's really beautiful, I love Elaine! Baby Elaine has a great personality! Xiao En's interactions with everyone are so interesting! (≧▽≦) We have been watching Xiao En's experience. He and his family or partners will become one of my eternal beliefs! [Sending Hearts]

Falling in love with someone else's OC is my destiny. . The early stage shaping was very good, I like it very much. After the Blair line passed out in the mid-term, the author went crazy and favored the protagonist. My impression was that the protagonist turned into a cub. This is very strange. In the early stage, she was struggling alone as the male mother Bai Yueguang. In the mid-term, she had nothing to do but turned into a cub. For personal reasons, the love with flowers always reminded me of cooking oil in a fire. The sense of danger and rejection urged me to skip the plot to escape the long and lengthy "I love you" paper. Then I saw Guang Yu emerging... I was stunned, so I quickly jumped to the last few chapters to end it - I am very happy, the protagonist is happy and it is foreseeable that he will always be happy. The overall style is more like the daily dream of the protagonist that Hermes saw in the early stage.

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This article is really, really, really, really well written. I highly recommend it! ! ! The plot is very coherent, and I really like the character of the protagonist. Oh my god! I have never read such a good article before. What I am announcing is that it is the best article I have ever read in Zaizaihao! ! ! ! ! Author, I will never allow anyone to disobey you! ! ! ! ! !

Oh my god, it's really amazing. Although I don't know much about the plot of Seer and I don't know much about the characters, I just enjoyed watching it. I remember that when I first saw it, I was reluctant to watch it, but then I really couldn't watch it anymore. It was so good at first glance, and it was not enough. At that time, it was about 69 chapters, and then it was around 9.3. Oh my god, now it's 9.5. It's really amazing. I have to leave a comment quickly.

I don't know what to say for my first review, but it's super beautiful, the author's writing is great, and there are many jokes. Xiao En is an elf control, but after traveling through time, he turned into a shadow elf with a rich inner world but a paralyzed appearance and an opposite appearance. The contrast is full of contrast, and he is super cute. He is usually quite cheerful (referring to his inner activities), but sometimes he gets confused and homesick. Fortunately, there is a system and elves, and the protagonists are here to comfort and encourage him when he is confused and homesick. Everyone is a super good partner. Especially the relationship between Elf and Xiao En makes people feel warm and warm. They were born because of Xiao En, and will stand by Xiao En unconditionally and give affirmation. At the same time, Xiao En also treats them as family members and gives them infinite care and tolerance. It's so happy. Highly recommended, highly recommended [send heart]₍ᐢ..ᐢ₎♡

Actually, I don't really like writing book reviews, but I really want to recommend this book to everyone I can read. It's so good! ! ! ! ! Xiao En is really a super, super, super gentle parent, and the characters of the others are not broken either. Not only did it not destroy the beautiful impression of childhood in my heart, it was even more perfect, with reasonable changes made to the original animation. As I followed along, I watched Xiao En grow from an ignorant student in a different world to what he is now. The process of mentality change is written very delicately without disturbing the original rhythm. It is really very comfortable to watch (//∇//). I declare that this book can definitely be regarded as a god among Tomato's Ser fans. Moreover, the author is not only a writer, but also a painter. The food he produces is really of high quality. I am so envious!

A warm-hearted raised child(?) Saier fan. The author himself is a giant, and the book comes with pictures, and the style of painting is also very exquisite. Ah, I feel warm and full after seeing the corpse.

A rare version of a wife who is both civilized and military. She is good at writing and drawing. From the article, it can be seen that the author has really carefully analyzed each character. At least the character design has not been broken. The main character's current attributes are probably the feeling of a male mother who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. It is very contrasting and cute. Moreover, the author promised that he will write it to the ending, surpassing most authors who write fan fiction. Summary: The writing is good, the paintings are good, the updates are stable, and the character design does not collapse. She is a rare conscientious wife in Lao Tomato [love]