My Campus Belle Girlfriend from the Cosplay Scene

It's not too much to encourage yourself by writing a book yourself, right? Brothers, I also read the novel I wrote. There are many typos, which greatly affects the reading experience. So if any readers see it, you can comment on it in the chapter review. I will revise it immediately after seeing it. Thank you very much for your support [blowing kiss] [love]

I didn't read too much, but I jumped to see Zhang touching his leg. I compared the timeline. The first chapter was the beginning of the military training (counted as 9.1), And then the following chapter was coded five days later in the evening, and then the day of looking for a house the next day. The follow-up came a week later, and then there was another day the next day (the welcome party). After adding the social gathering, I counted it as one day. That is 5+1+7+1+1, a total of fifteen days I'll just focus on these fifteen days. Starting from September 16, Zhang successfully touched the leg of the school beauty on National Day, that is, before October 1. Well, it makes sense.

The writing is not bad, it's not grinding, but some long dialogues between characters feel a bit like the third person, which is a bit dramatic. The overall pacing is very good and basically doesn't make anyone want to skip the chapter. However, the protagonist's image design does not look like the social horror that the public understands, which may be regarded as a poisonous point by many people. Otherwise, there is no big problem. I wish the author will write better and better!

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 40, I'm so addicted... I have some problems, mainly because of the character of the heroine. How should I put it, it seems that I'm a bit mysophobic, Zhao Na, the heroine, and the male protagonist are poisonous. The male protagonist couldn't accept it at first, but then he accepted it? Did this feeling change so quickly? [Awkward laugh] Originally, the male protagonist was well portrayed, but I don't recognize him anymore [Awkward laugh] (I could have directly changed to the female protagonist after that hospital, and the effect would have been better) [Awkward laugh] Purely personal feelings (if any offense is caused, I apologize, private Marseille)

Note beforehand: The current update is to chapter 85, so when I posted this book review, I only saw chapter 85. I'm not like those people who are good at literature who talk a lot, because I'm not that good at literature. I give my highest evaluation: good-looking Because I like sweet stories, as long as they don't fall apart at the end, it's a 5-star review.

It's pretty good-looking, but to my point of view, it's not on the main line, and there are too many supporting characters. If it's a love story like this, I don't think it's necessary. I don't say that supporting characters shouldn't be written, but when the supporting characters are well written, there will be a feeling that the protagonist does not exist. Of course, this is my own feeling. Generally speaking, the writing is very good, but it is a bit putting the cart before the horse.

Your rating is quite low. However, your subject matter is quite novel. It would be better if you just don't care about the word count and let the characters talk naturally. 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

It's good to read [shy] but I'm about to go to school and can't read such an interesting novel [crying] [crying] Great cheers for the author! [Love][Love][Love] Try to come back next time and enjoy it [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

Yes, yes, there are a lot of typos in the front but less in the back. I am starting to look forward to the time when they meet their parents. (⋟⋞) I'm not very good at writing reviews. If you are tired of reading the cultivating immortality genre, you can read this book.

It's awesome. The male protagonist and the female protagonist don't have a long mouth. They don't talk about anything. The female protagonist doesn't speak when she feels wronged. The male protagonist is even more outrageous and doesn't speak the truth. She is invincible. There is a reason for the 5.3 Rating.