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It's not too much to encourage yourself by writing a book yourself, right? Brothers, I also read the novel I wrote. There are many typos, which greatly affects the reading experience. So if any readers see it, you can comment on it in the chapter review. I will revise it immediately after seeing it. Thank you very much for your support [blowing kiss] [love]

The writing is not bad, it's not grinding, but some long dialogues between characters feel a bit like the third person, which is a bit dramatic. The overall pacing is very good and basically doesn't make anyone want to skip the chapter. However, the protagonist's image design does not look like the social horror that the public understands, which may be regarded as a poisonous point by many people. Otherwise, there is no big problem. I wish the author will write better and better!

Note beforehand: The current update is to chapter 85, so when I posted this book review, I only saw chapter 85. I'm not like those people who are good at literature who talk a lot, because I'm not that good at literature. I give my highest evaluation: good-looking Because I like sweet stories, as long as they don't fall apart at the end, it's a 5-star review.

Your rating is quite low. However, your subject matter is quite novel. It would be better if you just don't care about the word count and let the characters talk naturally. 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓

It's good to read [shy] but I'm about to go to school and can't read such an interesting novel [crying] [crying] Great cheers for the author! [Love][Love][Love] Try to come back next time and enjoy it [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

For the interaction between the author and the readers, I give it a five-star rating and add it to the bookshelf [laughing]

To be honest, I clicked here mainly because I have never seen a novel with a score of 5.3. It turned out to be surprisingly good. Except for a small section that is quite toxic, everything else is acceptable. Anyway, good luck to the author.

It's great, author, please come on

Very good, worth watching

The author should not stop updating, never stop updating and must stick to it.

Not bad, I just hope the author can slow down a bit [Like]

What is the name of the second book written by the male protagonist in the first dozen chapters? , Otherwise it will be changed to a five-star rating.

I wonder why you have such a low rating?

Very good Add some sugar to the warm flow

It's okay. You can read it in Shuhuang. It's just that the relationship develops a bit too fast. I'll give it a small five stars.

A very nice and sweet article. Although the author is a newbie, his writing style doesn't make up for it at all. The character creation is also very good. In short, this is a good book! [Like][Like][Like]

I think it's well written and quite interesting.

It's very beautiful, reminds me of my ex-girlfriend [crying][crying][crying]

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Give me 5 points to support it.

It's good to watch, I don't want to be a eunuch

The author who likes to eat melons [laughs evilly]

Personally I think it looks pretty [laughs]

Looks good, suits my taste

Who said there are ancient people whose names will go down in history? My brother

I think it's okay, just give me a little encouragement.

Can I add a few more knives at the back? The plot is too short and not enough, the adoptive father is on top

Author, your book is pretty good.

I really like this book. The author often interacts with readers.

When will the author let the heroine do a cosplay? I give you full marks [grievance]