In Monk Liuru's Jin Yong universe, after defeating the Bright Lord, the protagonist Song Qingshu had reached the pinnacle of his power. From then on, it was his stage to pacify the troubled realm and bend the world to his will.
Very good. I hope I can fill in the gaps in the original work, such as the true identity of Tong Lao, and the plots of some characters such as Miao Ruolan and Mrs. Tang. I can also write about how Xiao Song developed national power and conquered the West after unifying the country. Also, I think you look like a monk trumpet, your writing style is so similar 😘
The writing is very good so far, it has the feeling of being a master of stealing sex, and it enriches the plot of many female characters. The protagonist is currently invincible in martial arts, and enemy countries will not be a problem. Then he can farm and prepare for the future Western Expedition. This will not be monotonous. After all, reform will affect the interests of a group of people, and there will be some struggles in the court. The author can consider letting the protagonist slowly carry out reforms in various aspects such as economic, political, military, judicial, land, scientific development, etc., And copy more homework from later generations. The protagonist does not need to know everything, as long as he proposes an idea, there will naturally be smart people who can improve it for him.
The character of the protagonist is described like a licking dog, and the plot is about women. This is already in the later stages, not the time for the obscene development in the early stage. If I don't write something new, this book will collapse.
After reading the original version, I found this sequel. The ending of The Monk was too rushed. This supplement is quite good, and the writing is also very good 😳, although there are a few details that are different. For example, the little Songzi in the sequel is slightly behind the standard in terms of the balance of the harem, but it is quite interesting. I hope it can add some stories about the concubines that were not detailed in the original. In addition, although the Dragon Girl is also very good, I still hope that the boy can also write the plots of other female protagonists. After all, after reading almost a hundred chapters, I feel like Yingying is like a light bulb 😢
The plot of this book is quite good. As a sequel, it can fill in the pitfalls of the previous author and the characterization of the characters is more detailed than that of the previous author. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write more stories!
Anyone who has really read "The Master of Stealing Beauty" will know how well the author has written this sequel. The writing style is almost the same as that of Liuru Monk. It is as if you are really reading the sequel written by the monk. The only failure of the original work is that it ends too fast. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
Although there is still room for improvement in all aspects, the success lies in the fact that the writing style is consistent with the original work, and it is more than enough as a sequel to make up for everyone's regrets. In the end, I still hope that I can accept A Ke and Wang Yuyan, and draw a happy ending without leaving any regrets.
The logic is rigorous and the writing is good, especially the master of stealing fragrances. It has fulfilled my dream. 🥰 🥰 and this writing style, I doubt the author is a monk. Five stars are big [laughing] [laughing]
Well, I read it many years ago, and the continuation is very good. In fact, the author can write a similar novel by himself. Feiyu Zhuhun's Murong Fu in the Martial Arts World is very good. The author can try to write a character who travels to Jin Yong's novel in Tomato, and write slowly. You are not old anyway, so there are many opportunities.
The writing is very good and the plot is very smooth. When I finished watching Tou Xiang, I felt that I was too hasty and left a lot of plot behind. Young man, this sequel of yours just fills in the gaps. Come on, author! ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧
. If the original author doesn't write it, why not let others continue it?? Moreover, the author has great literary talent, and the connection with the original work is very natural, making it comfortable to read through. It shows that the author is a great talent 👍 👍 🤭 🤦 I hope to complete the omissions and neglected parts of the original work (some love debts) in the future, and add some innovations, so that I can consider cultivating immortals in the future. I hope to continue creating without being a eunuch. 👍👍👍👍
Very good. I hope I can fill in the gaps in the original work, such as the true identity of Tong Lao, and the plots of some characters such as Miao Ruolan and Mrs. Tang. I can also write about how Xiao Song developed national power and conquered the West after unifying the country. Also, I think you look like a monk trumpet, your writing style is so similar 😘
The writing is very good so far, it has the feeling of being a master of stealing sex, and it enriches the plot of many female characters. The protagonist is currently invincible in martial arts, and enemy countries will not be a problem. Then he can farm and prepare for the future Western Expedition. This will not be monotonous. After all, reform will affect the interests of a group of people, and there will be some struggles in the court. The author can consider letting the protagonist slowly carry out reforms in various aspects such as economic, political, military, judicial, land, scientific development, etc., And copy more homework from later generations. The protagonist does not need to know everything, as long as he proposes an idea, there will naturally be smart people who can improve it for him. The character of the protagonist is described like a licking dog, and the plot is about women. This is already in the later stages, not the time for the obscene development in the early stage. If I don't write something new, this book will collapse.
After reading the original version, I found this sequel. The ending of The Monk was too rushed. This supplement is quite good, and the writing is also very good 😳, although there are a few details that are different. For example, the little Songzi in the sequel is slightly behind the standard in terms of the balance of the harem, but it is quite interesting. I hope it can add some stories about the concubines that were not detailed in the original. In addition, although the Dragon Girl is also very good, I still hope that the boy can also write the plots of other female protagonists. After all, after reading almost a hundred chapters, I feel like Yingying is like a light bulb 😢
The plot of this book is quite good. As a sequel, it can fill in the pitfalls of the previous author and the characterization of the characters is more detailed than that of the previous author. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write more stories!
Anyone who has really read "The Master of Stealing Beauty" will know how well the author has written this sequel. The writing style is almost the same as that of Liuru Monk. It is as if you are really reading the sequel written by the monk. The only failure of the original work is that it ends too fast. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
Although there is still room for improvement in all aspects, the success lies in the fact that the writing style is consistent with the original work, and it is more than enough as a sequel to make up for everyone's regrets. In the end, I still hope that I can accept A Ke and Wang Yuyan, and draw a happy ending without leaving any regrets.
The logic is rigorous and the writing is good, especially the master of stealing fragrances. It has fulfilled my dream. 🥰 🥰 and this writing style, I doubt the author is a monk. Five stars are big [laughing] [laughing]
Well, I read it many years ago, and the continuation is very good. In fact, the author can write a similar novel by himself. Feiyu Zhuhun's Murong Fu in the Martial Arts World is very good. The author can try to write a character who travels to Jin Yong's novel in Tomato, and write slowly. You are not old anyway, so there are many opportunities.
The writing is very good and the plot is very smooth. When I finished watching Tou Xiang, I felt that I was too hasty and left a lot of plot behind. Young man, this sequel of yours just fills in the gaps. Come on, author! ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧
. If the original author doesn't write it, why not let others continue it?? Moreover, the author has great literary talent, and the connection with the original work is very natural, making it comfortable to read through. It shows that the author is a great talent 👍 👍 🤭 🤦 I hope to complete the omissions and neglected parts of the original work (some love debts) in the future, and add some innovations, so that I can consider cultivating immortals in the future. I hope to continue creating without being a eunuch. 👍👍👍👍