Villain**********

Author, what you wrote for your own son is too weak [Chigua] I hope you can give him some ability to react. It was a bit frustrating to read. The book is a good book, but it just doesn't have the highlights. It feels like the protagonist is always being led by the nose and can't cope with the plot [Chigua]

I think it's okay.

The plot line is unclear and I can't watch it.

It's okay, but it sounds a bit messy.

Even if the protagonist doesn't need to lick like that anyway, right?

It's okay, but too stubborn.

Can the protagonist become stronger? There is still a novel route to be connected. Please correct it as soon as possible. As a villain, beating the protagonist is the king of capital. The plot line must be clear. I have seen so many villain male protagonists. This one is a bit weak. Since there is a system, then make it stronger. Come on, correct it. Write the plot line clearly. It feels a bit confusing. Don't be too wordy.