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It's not bad, but it feels a bit like a conspiracy theory. But it's not bad. The author created his own plot. But one thing is that Xiao Xun'er went there when she was four or five years old. Xiao Yan was practicing Qi at three or four years old and had fighting Qi. He wanted to try it, so he ran to Xun'er's room. Xiao Zhan was not a fool and could not bet on an unknown variable, which might very well lead to the demise of the Xiao family. Also, it is unlikely that a self-created character will seize Xiao Xuan's body. Both Soul Heavenly Emperor and Void Swallowing Yan were barely killed, and Void Swallowing Yan recovered for a thousand years. Moreover, the original work writes about the owner of the cave in the cave. Hunt a flying monster with his friends to create flying fighting skills. If you are a fighting saint, do you still need to do this? Is Fenjue worth collecting more? It's useless if you don't practice. Isn't Tianjie awesome? Fen Jue can still evolve in the vast world. It's no more powerful than your martial arts of that day. Logically speaking, Xun'er is ten years old and has probably been touched all over her body. I have long been fascinated by anti-inflammatory drugs. Before the anti-inflammatory cultivation level was lost, at most he liked to show off and be a little arrogant. This was normal. And the most important thing is that the northwest continent is very barren and only the highest powers will have Dou Zun. Will Dou Sheng come here? Why go to Zhongzhou for development? It's because Zhongzhou is full of fighting spirit. There are more natural and earthly treasures. There are also many big forces. You see, the Jia Ma Empire doesn't even have a Douzong. How could there be a fighting saint coming here?

It would be nice if it was always a single heroine [Like][Love][Like]

It's normal for some people to like Xiao Yan and others not to like it. This fanfic must be written from different angles. You don't have to be too focused on Xiao Yan's character in the original novel.

It's very good-looking. I read it as a mystery novel.

So, author, when will you let the protagonist return to the Medicine Clan? It's time to write the protagonist's own story, right?

The image of the Xiao family and his son in this book is not as upright and upright as in the original work, but it can also be understood that the perspective is different, or it is more realistic.

The plot is good, but there are some mistakes in some places. The overall evaluation is okay.

The plot is quite compact, but Xiao Zhan, an old boy, is too arrogant [laughs awkwardly] and the protagonist is kicked in the face [face covering] (Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

The plot is very interesting and suitable for listening to at night

Haojian is so cool, but Xiaoyan is a good person in my eyes. Unlike some people who come up and tell you that you have a way to die.

Reopen a book and continue writing

Although, the author's ideas are quite good