You Asked Me to Write a Song, So Why Am I Reading the Diva's Fortune?

Some of the plots are a bit awkward, a bit forced to be sad and touching. Tomato's unique computational themes, a little entertainment, and a little live broadcast content really created a good spark. Let me talk about one thing that makes people feel particularly awkward. The live broadcast is always ignored. For a long time, a lot of content that should not be known to the audience is not mentioned or turned off. Especially in this recent plot, the Chen family was so crazy and said everything during the live broadcast, and then GJ didn't react at all? The background is still the situation of the strongest country. 😂 Overall, it should be considered a little bit poisonous, and the plot is quite enjoyable.

Tried and basically non-toxic. The songs and storylines are very good. The scene design is very good. The system settings are a little complicated. The conflict and pulling routine at the beginning is a little bit toxic. It gets better after twenty chapters. I hope the author can re-examine the opening part. The author has smooth writing and solid writing skills. The work uses entertainment online articles as a carrier and integrates many elements such as live broadcasts, news, Taoist culture, and netizen comments. The creative method shows an earth traveler's adventure in a different world from multiple perspectives. The story content is rich and colorful. There are both pleasant melodies and complaints about various social phenomena, human fireworks, love and hatred, worldly sophistication, Taoist culture, etc. It focuses on showing the protagonist's attitude towards life. It is easy to understand, full of positive energy, grand world view, clear background, vivid characters, lively and interesting plots, humorous and very distinctive. A few suggestions. For reference only. Can the author appropriately reduce some discussions and unnecessary dialogues? The current more than forty chapters may be condensed into chapters ten to fifteen, which may be more compact and reasonable. It also leaves a certain amount of space (blank space) for later creation and readers' sense of participation and participation. Let's talk about these first. I'll leave other small questions for everyone to ask. Haha, five-star recommendation. Come on, author.

Summary: The bad news is that the stitches are weird, the good news is that they are all stitched together. The plot involves singing, writing, calligraphy, poetry, fortune telling, Taoism, martial arts training and other plots. Overall, it's good. There are no obvious poisonous points. What I like more is the relaxed feeling of the author's writing in the early stage, which is very comfortable. But unfortunately, this feeling gradually disappears later on. My favorite plot is the concert at the beginning. Many people may feel that this section is awkward just reading the text, but if you follow the author's suggestion and read the two sections while playing the song, you will find that the author's choice of these two songs is really good and particularly suitable. My suggestion is to skip the section about writing "Coco" in the creative competition. This section can be regarded as the only poisonous point. There were too many judges and barrages. Basically, the male protagonist had just written the beginning, and had to comment three or four times. It was very tiring and uncomfortable to watch. Then, when the climax of the plot came later, it was skipped directly without any key descriptions or discussions. In general, the author used a lot of writing and contradictions in this paragraph in the early stage, and skipped all the climaxes and discussion points in the middle and later stages. This paragraph will make people extremely uncomfortable after reading it. It is not recommended to watch it. Finally, give a five-star review to encourage new authors.

Come on author, although the rhythm in the front is not very good, the rhythm gets better as you go to the back. Also, when will the protagonist start writing novels? Will there be four famous novels? Can the protagonist write ancient prose? I would rather see the protagonist write ancient prose. If the author doesn't know how to write, he can just copy according to the ancient text.

I have read the latest chapter, and I feel that the author is getting better and better, and the writing style in the later chapters is better than the previous ones.

It's well written, very immersive, the more you read it, the more interesting it becomes, and it updates quickly.

Come on, come on, good writing! The plot of the story is compact, the rhythm is strong, and the sense of substitution is great.

A great idea, the plot is novel and interesting, and very beautiful. The author will give it a thumbs up.

It looks good, not bad, and the subject matter is also very good!

It's super cool, but the updates are a bit slow. There are two chapters every day, both at around 10pm.