[Fortune Telling] [Entertainment] [Wenzhao Gong] [Live Broadcast] [Relaxed and Funny] [Daily]
Lin Shu looked at the dozen or so microphones that were about to be thrust into his mouth with a dark look on his face, and said solemnly: "I started with "Wake" and wrote hundreds of songs within a year, and each song reached the top ten of the global music charts!"
Reporter: "Yes, yes, Master Lin, tell me your fortune!"
Lin Shu: "I have made dozens of movies such as "Coco" and "Zootopia". Each movie has been in the top 100 global box office!"
Reporter: "Yes, yes, Master Lin, tell me your fortune!"
Lin Shu: "I have written dozens of novels such as "The Three-Body Problem" and "Fortress Besieged", and each of them ranks among the best in sales!"
Reporter: "Yes, yes, Master Lin, please tell me your fortune!"
Lin Shu collapsed: "Yes to your sister! Can you believe in science?"
Reporter: "Yes, yes, Master Lin, tell me your fortune!"
Lin Shu clenched his fists: "Forget it, come and speak in front of me, and I'll take care of it for you."
The reporter just walked up to Lin Shu...
Bang! ! !
A piece of glass fell from the sky and hit the reporter just where he was standing.
"Thank you, Master, for saving your life!!"
Lin Shu covered his face and cried bitterly. It was over. Now he could not explain clearly.
As a Taoist priest who only wants to be a big star, Lin Shu said that the songs, poems, novels and movie animation scripts he writes have nothing to do with Qi Men Dun Jia.
Reader comments
Some of the plots are a bit awkward, a bit forced to be sad and touching. Tomato's unique computational themes, a little entertainment, and a little live broadcast content really created a good spark.
Let me talk about one thing that makes people feel particularly awkward. The live broadcast is always ignored. For a long time, a lot of content that should not be known to the audience is not mentioned or turned off. Especially in this recent plot, the Chen family was so crazy and said everything during the live broadcast, and then GJ didn't react at all? The background is still the situation of the strongest country. [Laughing and crying]
Overall, it should be regarded as only a little bit poisonous, and the plot is quite enjoyable.
Tried and basically non-toxic. The songs, storyline, and scene design are all very good. The system settings are a little complicated. The conflict and pull routine at the beginning is a little bit toxic. It gets better after chapter 20. I hope the author can re-examine the opening part.
The author's writing style is fluent and his writing skills are solid. The work uses entertainment online articles as a carrier and integrates many elements such as live broadcasts, news, Taoist culture, and netizen comments to create a creative method that shows an earth traveler's adventure in a different world from multiple perspectives.
The content of the story is rich and colorful, with both pleasant melodies and complaints about various social phenomena, human fireworks, love and hatred, worldly relations, Taoist culture, etc. It focuses on showing the protagonist's attitude towards life, explaining things in simple terms, full of positive energy, grand world view, clear background, vivid characters, vivid plot, humorous and very distinctive.
A few suggestions, for reference only. Can the author appropriately reduce some discussions and unnecessary dialogue? The current more than forty chapters can be condensed into ten to fifteen chapters, which may be more compact and reasonable. It also leaves a certain space (blank space) for later creation and readers' sense of participation and participation. Let's talk about these first. I'll leave other small questions to you. Haha.
Five-star recommendation. Cheers to the author.
Come on author, although the rhythm in the front is not very good, the rhythm gets better as you go to the back. Also, when will the protagonist start writing novels? Will there be four famous novels? Can the protagonist write ancient prose? I would rather see the protagonist write ancient prose. If the author doesn't know how to write, he can just copy according to the ancient text.
Summary: The bad news is that the stitches are weird, the good news is that they are all stitched together. The plot involves singing, writing, calligraphy, poetry, fortune telling, Taoism, martial arts training and other plots. Overall, it's good, with no obvious bad points. What I like more is the relaxed feeling of the author's writing in the early stage, which is very comfortable, but unfortunately this feeling gradually disappears later on.
My favorite plot is the concert at the beginning. Many people may feel that this section is awkward just reading the text, but if you follow the author's suggestion and read the two sections while playing the song, you will find that the author's choice of these two songs is really good and particularly suitable.
My suggestion is to skip the section about writing "Coco" in the creative competition. This section can be regarded as the only poisonous point. There were too many judges and barrages. Basically, the male protagonist had just written the beginning, and had to comment on it three or four times. It was very tiring and uncomfortable to watch. Then when the climax of the plot came later, it was skipped directly without any key descriptions or discussions. In general, the author used a lot of writing and contradictions in this paragraph in the early stage, and skipped all the climaxes and discussion points in the middle and later stages. This paragraph will make people extremely uncomfortable after reading it. It is not recommended to watch it.
Finally, send a five-star review to encourage new authors.
I have read the latest chapter, and I feel that the author is getting better and better, and the writing style in the later chapters is better than the previous ones.
It's well written, very immersive, the more you read it, the more interesting it becomes, and it updates quickly.
Come on, come on, good writing! The plot of the story is compact, the rhythm is strong, and the sense of substitution is great.
A great idea, the plot is novel and interesting, and very beautiful. The author will give it a thumbs up.
It looks good, not bad, and the subject matter is also very good!
It's so funny, my stomach hurts from laughing.
Zhuangzi has quietly appeared. Next time it will be Confucius' turn.
Worth savoring.
This novel is really imaginative, and the writing style is humorous and the details are in-depth. I really like it. The author, please continue to explode!
It looks good. I love watching it. It's funny when I think of the protagonist wearing a monk's robe and singing rock music.
The article is very interesting and thoughtful. I hope the author can continue to work hard, come on!
It's a very interesting article. The plot has twists and turns without being procrastinating. It's novel and not clichéd. It's good to read.
Great book, I can see how funny it is. Keep up the coding.
The writing is very good, smooth and natural, the writing style is relaxed and interesting, very good writing
Good-looking is good-looking, I'll take care of it first, otherwise I'll keep seeing the same [face covering]
I feel that the rating of this book should not be so low. I read it in one sitting.
I really like Jiang Sangman's story. Although it seems immature and the narrative angle is a bit messy, it is indeed a pretty good story. There can be more short stories like this.
The first few chapters stuck in my mind, and I found it very interesting when I read it later. It was humorous and fun, which I liked very much.
Very beautiful, very novel, very good!
It's super cool, but the updates are a bit slow. There are two chapters every day, both at around 10pm.
Will the fate swap have any impact on the protagonist?
Some of the plots are a bit awkward, a bit forced to be sad and touching. Tomato's unique computational themes, a little entertainment, and a little live broadcast content really created a good spark. Let me talk about one thing that makes people feel particularly awkward. The live broadcast is always ignored. For a long time, a lot of content that should not be known to the audience is not mentioned or turned off. Especially in this recent plot, the Chen family was so crazy and said everything during the live broadcast, and then GJ didn't react at all? The background is still the situation of the strongest country. [Laughing and crying] Overall, it should be regarded as only a little bit poisonous, and the plot is quite enjoyable.
Tried and basically non-toxic. The songs, storyline, and scene design are all very good. The system settings are a little complicated. The conflict and pull routine at the beginning is a little bit toxic. It gets better after chapter 20. I hope the author can re-examine the opening part. The author's writing style is fluent and his writing skills are solid. The work uses entertainment online articles as a carrier and integrates many elements such as live broadcasts, news, Taoist culture, and netizen comments to create a creative method that shows an earth traveler's adventure in a different world from multiple perspectives. The content of the story is rich and colorful, with both pleasant melodies and complaints about various social phenomena, human fireworks, love and hatred, worldly relations, Taoist culture, etc. It focuses on showing the protagonist's attitude towards life, explaining things in simple terms, full of positive energy, grand world view, clear background, vivid characters, vivid plot, humorous and very distinctive. A few suggestions, for reference only. Can the author appropriately reduce some discussions and unnecessary dialogue? The current more than forty chapters can be condensed into ten to fifteen chapters, which may be more compact and reasonable. It also leaves a certain space (blank space) for later creation and readers' sense of participation and participation. Let's talk about these first. I'll leave other small questions to you. Haha. Five-star recommendation. Cheers to the author.
Come on author, although the rhythm in the front is not very good, the rhythm gets better as you go to the back. Also, when will the protagonist start writing novels? Will there be four famous novels? Can the protagonist write ancient prose? I would rather see the protagonist write ancient prose. If the author doesn't know how to write, he can just copy according to the ancient text.
Summary: The bad news is that the stitches are weird, the good news is that they are all stitched together. The plot involves singing, writing, calligraphy, poetry, fortune telling, Taoism, martial arts training and other plots. Overall, it's good, with no obvious bad points. What I like more is the relaxed feeling of the author's writing in the early stage, which is very comfortable, but unfortunately this feeling gradually disappears later on. My favorite plot is the concert at the beginning. Many people may feel that this section is awkward just reading the text, but if you follow the author's suggestion and read the two sections while playing the song, you will find that the author's choice of these two songs is really good and particularly suitable. My suggestion is to skip the section about writing "Coco" in the creative competition. This section can be regarded as the only poisonous point. There were too many judges and barrages. Basically, the male protagonist had just written the beginning, and had to comment on it three or four times. It was very tiring and uncomfortable to watch. Then when the climax of the plot came later, it was skipped directly without any key descriptions or discussions. In general, the author used a lot of writing and contradictions in this paragraph in the early stage, and skipped all the climaxes and discussion points in the middle and later stages. This paragraph will make people extremely uncomfortable after reading it. It is not recommended to watch it. Finally, send a five-star review to encourage new authors.
I have read the latest chapter, and I feel that the author is getting better and better, and the writing style in the later chapters is better than the previous ones.
It's well written, very immersive, the more you read it, the more interesting it becomes, and it updates quickly.
Come on, come on, good writing! The plot of the story is compact, the rhythm is strong, and the sense of substitution is great.
A great idea, the plot is novel and interesting, and very beautiful. The author will give it a thumbs up.
It looks good, not bad, and the subject matter is also very good!
It's so funny, my stomach hurts from laughing.
Zhuangzi has quietly appeared. Next time it will be Confucius' turn. Worth savoring.
This novel is really imaginative, and the writing style is humorous and the details are in-depth. I really like it. The author, please continue to explode!
It looks good. I love watching it. It's funny when I think of the protagonist wearing a monk's robe and singing rock music.
The article is very interesting and thoughtful. I hope the author can continue to work hard, come on!
It's a very interesting article. The plot has twists and turns without being procrastinating. It's novel and not clichéd. It's good to read.
Great book, I can see how funny it is. Keep up the coding.
The writing is very good, smooth and natural, the writing style is relaxed and interesting, very good writing
Good-looking is good-looking, I'll take care of it first, otherwise I'll keep seeing the same [face covering]
I feel that the rating of this book should not be so low. I read it in one sitting.
I really like Jiang Sangman's story. Although it seems immature and the narrative angle is a bit messy, it is indeed a pretty good story. There can be more short stories like this.
The first few chapters stuck in my mind, and I found it very interesting when I read it later. It was humorous and fun, which I liked very much.
Very beautiful, very novel, very good!
It's super cool, but the updates are a bit slow. There are two chapters every day, both at around 10pm.
Will the fate swap have any impact on the protagonist?