Why Is There Something Wrong with the Beautiful Girl Next to Me?

Look! But there is no need to write it in such a perverted way. Yandere is actually a very broad term. Not all paranoid love is reflected in wanting to kill that person. If all the heroines were written like this, it would soon become boring. Strong love can mean giving everything, or blaming yourself for everything. Yandere can also be more scheming. Anyway, I think it looks pretty good now, and I still hope to continue writing. Come on, author!

To be honest, it really fits my stereotype and fantasy of yandere, and it can basically satisfy my idea of ​​yandere, but when it comes to reality, it is better to be as far away as possible. The author is very good. Although he is a novice, he is basically very fluent. He does not speak awkward words or is very abrupt and the explanations are very clear. It does not have the feeling of the Riddler, and it can also feel very decisive. The protagonist has a brain, but not very much. It is much better than the brainless one. Come on, the author, it is not enough.

It's okay to read love stories on the spot. But otherwise it's hard to rate. You can understand that the system is used to torture the protagonist, allowing the protagonist to be resurrected a limited number of times and killed by heroines with supernatural powers. Of course, the protagonist is not killed a few times. I am still thinking about escaping, not how to solve the problem. But then again, this is a truly pure yandere love story. There is nothing wrong with weak men and strong women.

I really want to post it as a task for the group leader, but I feel very good after reading it carefully. The story of the yandere is well written (as expected of the author of Xiao Chu Nan), and the male protagonist seems to have applied it to himself (uh uh, I'm so embarrassed). I hope there will be a version 😋😋😋 with something everyone wants to see. The content is really good enough to make people smile. It makes people feel the author's great progress. Not only is he sensitive about emotions, but he also has some parts that make people smile even though they are bad jokes. Also, Xiao Chu is in trouble. Uh-huh😓😓 You know how to write, but you can't write more. I wonder if the author can giggle while writing. Let's wait for more updates before commenting on the rest. Ps: Xiao Chu is so numb that he really gets depressed while playing CS.

There is potential, but it needs to be grasped to a certain extent, which is specifically reflected in the plot arrangement, and then the characterization should be more delicate. At present, it feels like it is crazy for the sake of being crazy, (that is, some people do not understand yandere well enough), I still need to practice, look forward to the follow-up, don't stop updating, keep up the good work [Like]

In terms of portraying Lin, I can only say that the despicableness was created too successfully. It is not extremely despicable. It can only be said that he has a conscience but not much. But overall, the flaws do not hide the good points. I think it is still very good-looking. Although I don't really like the character Lin, I still believe in the author. (Believe in Taili, you don't need a reason to believe [laughs evilly])

It's great. The main thing about this novel is that his emotions are very real. It gives people a very comfortable and smooth feeling. And this kind of emotion is very easy-going. At the same time, this book also contains a lot of jokes, which is elegant and easy-going. Appreciating both refined and popular tastes, this book does not look like you are reading a very depressing yandere novel, but a passionate romance novel in which a young man slowly saves some girls while fighting for his own life. If I say it, it's great! ! !

Although it is a novel, it is fast-paced, the plot is very interesting, and all the characters are yandere. [Send Heart] Unlike other novels where the six female protagonists may have to write hundreds of chapters, this book gave me a safe haven when I was short on books! I sincerely recommend [adoration][adoration][adoration][top post][top post][top post]Like me

This is the best yandere novel I have ever read. The characters of the male protagonist and the female protagonists are well written. This type of novel generally has the problem of sudden harem relationships, but this book solves it reasonably and makes people not feel disgusted.

10/30, Serialized to chapter 142 To be honest, I should be a little more careful and give it 4.5 Stars. I'll talk about the half star later. To be honest, there are no big problems in the whole book. Each heroine has her own attributes, and there is nothing really annoying about them. However, the polishing of the characters is indeed not mature enough, but it is not bad. It should be said that the details have not been fixed. There must be party strife in harem works. I belong to Lin Yuexi's school (I must declare in advance that I belong to the schoolgirl school). The basic character design really pokes me. I am a childhood sweetheart of the same age who has been with me for more than ten years and can ignore the door locks and visit the house. She did make a mistake that is difficult to forgive, but in the personal main story level, she has committed crimes and has been forgiven by the male protagonist. The character rescue is a great success👍 The point where I feel uncomfortable and want to deduct half a star is An Siyao (hereinafter referred to as An Mei). I have already pointed out in the previous paragraph that An Mei lacks foreshadowing and foreshadowing for the purpose of revealing herself. Even if she changes suddenly, she behaves like a completely different personality. Even if she changes her personality, she also changes to a very bad personality. It is annoying. But in my eyes, the dislike is just to dislike her performance. As long as the plot has a reasonable development, I will not say anything. Anmei's problem happened to be during the period when your mental state was worrying. You said the data was not good and I don't understand Tomato's data. You said you wanted to work hard and I have nothing to say. But I think as a reader, I don't think it's too much to demand that the quality of the story and plot be maintained. I think it's not too much. Personal short chapter works are more suitable for weekly or double weekly updates. If you have the means to update twice a day, then I would prefer you to update once a day and improve the quality of the plot. I advise you to find time to rest. You are a good author. I like your work. I don't want you to go crazy and end the story. The five stars can be filled up entirely because you gave Lin Yuexi a good ending. I like it.

I really like this book. If it ends unfinished, I will really lose my little pearl [crying]. It is really amazing for a new author to have such writing style. I hope I can continue to write more. I like you, the author [sending my heart]

It's well written. I'm not a big reader, but I can get happiness from this novel. That's enough. I'm happy to give this book a good review. I hope the author can finish the book well. No matter whether it's good or bad, I will continue to read it.

I really understand what kind of dilemma the author is facing, but I hope you can live a happier life. The book is very nice and the stories in it are very exciting. I hope I can keep reading this book. Writing is also a skill. Instead of trying out a new book, it is better to practice various situations in this book. Anyway, keep going.

The previous plot with Lin made my blood pressure rise. I forgave her after being stabbed several times, but I became addicted to reading it later. I remember the last time it was Lu Xing's book. It was updated very quickly. It was not enough to read. I finished it at three in the morning. Who can read a hundred chapters? Come on, give me a thousand chapters. Each of you book friends here will give you a thousand chapters. Okay, don't make me kneel down to beg you.

Invincible. This is one of the yandere novels I have read. It is indeed a good-looking one. The characters in it have really distinct personalities. I highly recommend you to read it. You will fall in love after reading it.

It's really good, it's really good. The male protagonist is quite strong. Unlike the male protagonists in other books who are pure sissies, the male protagonist in this book has strength, but not too much. He won't be tortured all the time. It's fun for me to read (why do I feel like I'm writing randomly?)

I think this can be regarded as the best of the yandere stories in Tomato. Every girl has performed a very good "yandere" role. The male protagonist uses a "containment" style to open a harem. I think it is quite good. Compared with other yandere stories that have deeply hurt the protagonist, in the end, he uses love or acceptance in the harem. It is obviously more reasonable and interesting. Come on author, your writing is good, don't belittle yourself.

This is the best yandere novel that I have read so far. I don't feel that it is too bad at all. The novel story is much better than some yandere novels with cliche stories. It is also very good, even better than when I first read the yandere novel. It's just that I came early and didn't see enough.

Thank you for the update. So far, I have read all the chapters. At 12 o'clock in the middle of the night, I watched "Garden Baby" for another hour. After washing my mind, I fell asleep with my eyes black.

The plot is pretty good, and for a yandere novel, the characterization is pretty good, especially since the plot is entertaining and doesn't look boring. It's better than most yandere novels.

There are many details, and almost all are described in the first person, which greatly enhances the authenticity of the article and allows readers to better integrate into it. The language of the article is beautiful and makes people feel happy to read it! ! ! ! ! !

She is super beautiful and ranks in the top 3 of all the yandere girls I see. Each person's portrayal is three-dimensional and full, mainly because the content is diverse and not only the male protagonist's character is normal, but the writing style does not look strange, which is very rare. 90% More than similar products.

Although it is a debut novel, I have seen it ranked in the top three among many yandere novels. The male protagonist breaks away from the male protagonist setting of previous yandere novels (finally he has a normal person), and the character development is okay. It is rare to see high-quality yandere novels. Forgot to order, forgot to order

First of all, this is my first time reviewing books. If it's not good, please feel free to scold me [shy] This is the yandere novel that I have seen in Tomato that has a relatively smooth logic and no poisonous points. The writing style is a bit naive but basically no problem (much better than a certain three ghosts)

It's a very interesting novel, but because I failed the Chinese language test today, and in order to give you a higher score to prevent you from being reviewed and sanctioned, I give you a four-star rating. No need to thank me, the author (^_^)ノ

It's really wonderfully written, everyone has their own unique characteristics, and they're a little funny from time to time. Come on, author, this is a masterpiece!

It's a five-star review. I hope Shangguan Ning can become the main palace in the future [face covering]. She is really my ideal type.

This novel is so suitable for my taste. It's so good to read [cry][cry][cry]

Love to watch, love to watch, and then fly look

It's fun to watch, although it's a little uncomfortable, but you've come to see this, why are you still uncomfortable [laughing]