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The voting is here. I still like the one without a female protagonist. I feel that this article would be better if it were written without a female protagonist. The author's writing is really beautiful and I like it [shy]

It's quite good, the plot is very novel, and it should be without a female protagonist, which is a bit fun, but if you are a Redha party member, please note that there is a moderate amount of Deha elements in it, and it is easy to get hit, but overall it is still very good! Uh-huh, the Sun Doudou in the back is really wise. After reading it, I feel like I want to go back to kindergarten to study. There are so many exclamation marks. The main thing is that Doudou. I can't help but feel an unknown fire in my heart when I look at it. Is the author trying to express his carefree character? Let's not force our way in, okay? I can't stand it. I can't stand it.

I think it's pretty good, and there aren't many poisonous points. Tomato has become so desolate that there are almost any good books out there, so I think this book is pretty good. Come on, I look forward to the author updating it to 1000 chapters. Of course, you'd better not write a female protagonist, otherwise it will be difficult to reach 6.0 Technically.

Very classic design. The characterization and emotional description are like a delicate oil painting, with every stroke full of vitality. This way of depiction is like cherry blossoms blooming in spring, with both delicate tenderness and vivid power. During the reading process, I seemed to be able to feel the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of the characters written by the author. Their emotional fluctuations were like ocean waves, sometimes calm and sometimes turbulent. Such writing builds a world that is both real and imaginative, making readers irresistible and drawn deeply into the whirlpool of the story.

So good-looking, so good-looking! ! ! Based on the image of the male protagonist, I hope that I won't be given a chance to find a female protagonist. No cp is the best destination! ! !

Apart from a lot of typos, it's still very interesting to watch. To highlight, even though I have traveled through the world of Harry Potter, I never forget that I am Chinese. I exaggerate Xia in almost every chapter. Crazy extra points [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

1. The protagonist is usually very good at pretending and looks like a gentleman. In fact, he is very murderous. After all, he is the leader [who he admires], but he can't tell it at ordinary times. He is quite a good person. 2. I didn't go to Harry most of the time. It's not the kind of nanny story about Harry. The protagonist has his own life and career. 3. The protagonist is also very good at talking (brainwashing?) After becoming a prefect, the little snakes are very united, and the junior students are all gentlemen. There is no such kind of intrigue, which is quite fun anyway. Can you imagine it? A group of little snakes are standing still, and they only take action after the protagonist gives an order. It's so pretty [laughing] 4. The plots in the academy are all very interesting. I don't really like watching the career part of the protagonist, so I watched it in a hurry. 5. In short, it looks good Secondly, I know that Snape likes Lily, and I know that Snape and the protagonist's parents know each other, but I still feel that Snape and the protagonist are really in love with each other (sorry!!!) 6. Not very friendly to Ron 7. Some of them are original, but they do not affect viewing. 8. The protagonist is simply too rigorous. He takes one step at a time, but he is prone to overturning. He is not always invincible. Good books should be rewarded. This is the first time I've seen a post that's so natural, so cool, and so intelligent! It's not easy! So pretty! Let me see them all! [Adoration]

Really, it seems to be really good so far. The characters are very vivid and lively, and the plot is also good. Especially when the protagonist talks about Hannah's throne, it was something I never expected. His character image suddenly came alive.

It is well written and cleverly conceived of a villainous evil force. The slightly uncomfortable part is Black Ron. How can I put it, although I don't like him either, but it's true that the sin will not lead to death. It doesn't matter whether it's estrangement or green tea, but forcing Ron to death feels a bit too much, so I'll deduct one point here. It's because I haven't finished reading it and I'm jumping to conclusions too early.

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Personally, I think the plot is good. I've read Chapter 20 so far, but I can't stand it anymore. Every dialogue of the characters in the book is filled with exclamation points❕ which makes people feel tired when watching it. . . It feels like every word is shouted out or expressed with special force Mainly, I read the later chapters to see if the author has changed this habit. If he changes later, I will just read it and try it. After all, I quite like this setting, but... I think the author still has a lot of exclamation points after more than 500 chapters! Just like this! Really awkward! (Exclamation marks are the most used in most conversations) Then I really like the character of the protagonist, who has some fun-loving attributes, but I'm a little confused. The protagonist has been working in the mafia (what's black) for several years and has reached the status of a godfather. Most of them should not show too much emotion. And because the protagonist knows that he is in the magical world, he almost feels excited (jumps?) Many times. Four stars encourage the author to work hard

Why is it only rated 7.8? It's obviously very good to watch. I hate that the updates are too slow. I have to wait and see again. Come on, the author ~ great I pray that there must be no cp, otherwise it would be very uncomfortable for me to abandon the article halfway after pursuing it for so long. I hope the author never thought of adding a female protagonist.

Super pretty [laughs][laughs][laughs] [Grieved] But please don't have a heroine, please🥺[I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry ][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying][Nearly crying] This one looks like Shuangnan No cp ok [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I've been listening to the book for three days [I'm about to cry], and I scored more than 43 points

First: The character and style of the protagonist are very to my liking [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart] Second: The writing style is neither awkward nor white, so nice. Third: I have dug a lot of pits so far, and I look forward to the author's subsequent articles [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] (Please don't stop, please, a lot of HP's good articles have been cut off, the author holds on)

My family is really good-looking. I didn't read Harry Potter at first, but now I've started to read it₍₍ ง(*Ӧ)ว ⁾⁾, but I only like this one. I have read it back several times. Erwin is the Slytherin in my mind. He is smart, ambitious, noble and elegant. Snape is a rare good person. In other books, Snape is always a villain. Secondly, the cpp between Malfoy and Harry is really super sweet! (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎) Our smart Miss Hermione also successfully became an eaglet! (๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ) Finally there is someone who dislikes Ron as much as I do! ❛˓◞˂̵✧

This book should be renamed: Things Between Me and the Eight Great Families It is not a pure hp, it contains a lot of personal settings, the characters have a certain degree of occ, and there are multiple language arts to describe the protagonist (in fact, a little description can leave an impression on the reader) If you can accept the above points, you can jump straight into the pit. The article written by the author is still very good.

I think this is a good Harry Potter fanfic, although I felt it was a bit broken in the later stages. I don't think it should go from Western fantasy to Eastern fantasy. Such a macro and diverse world will make it difficult for the author to grasp and readers will lose. I thought it would go from Western city to Western fantasy to world city. But the author still wrote well, at least the collapse is not serious [laughing] It's a good book and worth appreciating

Overall, it's good. I like the ending of Si Jiao very much. Although making dumplings at the end may be liked by many people, I feel that there are gains and losses, which may be better for me. The only poisonous point is the extra chapter after the ending, which opens up the harem. Although the protagonist's emotional line is not that important, you can accept it completely and accept it all. To be honest, it is a bit 🤢. It is mainly to achieve the ending of watching it all, but it is undeniable that it is really poisonous. Turning back to the plot design, the overall rating is 8/10. The main deduction point is the reveal of the foreshadowing. To be honest, it is a bit hasty and has a feeling of being forced into it. It is that kind of rigid and not pursuing perfection, which is generally acceptable for book friends; secondly, the follow-up story. In fact, there is no need to continue the emotional line at all. You can consider the things behind the wall. Of course, I will not comment on the fact that the protagonist cannot transfer the will of the world. It is a matter of opinion. The overall review is good, and it is still a very good fanfic. As long as the main setting remains unchanged, I suggest that the author delete the harem in the extra chapter, or book friends who read the comments can just skip the extra chapter. After all, there are only two or three chapters, so it doesn't hurt to not read it. Mainly because I have obsessive-compulsive disorder.

Not bad, not bad. I personally feel that this book is a bit dark, but it does seem quite enjoyable. The protagonist's IQ is always on the line and he basically does whatever it takes to achieve his goals. I have read more than a hundred books and I highly recommend it.

Beautiful beyond words! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] @ The painful and desperate high school student You must watch it! ! It's super beautiful, there are many elements blended together, it looks great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I like it so much

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so pretty! ! ! ! Chase it all in one go! ! ! I hope there will be no cp later or the plot will be in the extra story! ! ! ! It's been a long time since I've seen such an awesome HP fan! ! ! ! !

It's good-looking and totally in line with my taste, but I don't quite understand the feeling of separation among the mysterious people. I really like the character of the protagonist, who understands human relationships and accidents. I feel like I've learned something from reading this book! Elegant and scheming, sometimes funny, I enjoyed watching Ron's part hahahahahahaha'

The main character has clear logic and I like the style. I hope there won't be a female protagonist [Sending my heart]

The author is very sensible and knows that in terms of the relationship of this article, without a heroine is an above-average choice in terms of the emotional line. This has been the case before for me. I actually wanted to end the story with a single heroine, but by placing the heroine in the next semester, this leaves readers with room for imagination and will make them love the book even more. I am still very satisfied with the ending. Fans who wrote in the cold circle also wrote a 9.0 Review The points are very good. I hope the author will not take advantage of me. I won't say too much. I love this Harry Potter book very much. Personally I think it is the best Harry Potter fanfic I have ever seen. Although I have been a fan of Harry Potter for a while, I have read a lot of novels. I am an old bookworm. Don't criticize me (I won't listen to you, personal evaluation). I hope you can work hard to produce more masterpieces and create a better version of yourself.

It's a fun fanfic. There are a lot of secondary settings. I haven't read much of the original Harry Potter books. I don't quite understand the plot changes in this article. Not much is said about the protagonist's character. The standard character of Shuangwen is ruthless. The protagonist doesn't take life very seriously. He still takes good care of the people around him. There is currently no heroine, but there are four followers. However, the author revealed that he wants to write about a heroine or a harem, at least not yet. The plot is relatively compact, the writing is online and a bit slow. I read it in three days and it was still very engaging. Usually I stop reading after I finish reading because I like to save. But if I save enough, I forget about the plot and I won't read anymore. This book is worth reading and very creative.

Yes, it's very beautiful. It would be perfect without a female protagonist. Although I don't know if there is a female protagonist now.

It's very beautiful, really refreshing. Elvin Cavendi, you are not green tea, you are a sweet green tea cake😊, but it would be better if there is no heroine😘

I love watching Hogwarts' house life, and it deserves to be the leader. But when there are about a hundred chapters left, I can feel the urgency of the end. They are all about the Riddler. I can't understand and started skimming, so I feel very unhappy. The Riddler should get out of Hogwarts [smiles] You can watch it as a novel without a heroine or with a single heroine (until the extra story, the heroine has not been confirmed, and it is only said that there is more than one, but it is written that the protagonist and xx have an eldest son, which is the only certified heroine). By the way, if you continue to write about the world outside the wall, you will inevitably have a common problem: the battle of gods.

Needless to say, it's really amazing. This is also the first book that I have seen Merlin written about in detail. It combines the extraordinary abilities of the East and the West, and has a very unique main plot. All the holes dug have been filled. The final battle was also very tearful and full of regrets, but it also contained the kindness of human nature. Highly recommended

I just read Chapter 202. Although there are a lot of grammatical errors and some places are a bit funny, the plot is generally okay. The author feels that the writing is a bit limited, but it is a good tool to kill time and looks good. It's too late to talk. But then again, who can say no to a Goushi Liuxin chocolate bar? . . Three changes Sorry guys, I'm a dog and I can't eat chocolate. I really can't stand it anymore.