Ha! I Became a Pretty Boy!

It looks good so far. There are some poisonous points that can be said to be poisonous points (because they can be justified), but Tomato readers are like that. Even if the writing is logical and rigorous, they have to cut it out and tease it out. For example, the character of the male protagonist. He is the only one who will die in the apocalypse while playing a single-player game. But some people just like to cut it off and see the doomsday without seeing the loneliness and childishness of their character caused by playing stand-alone games in the future, and then run away. When I came out to question the male protagonist about the character of the child, I can only say that Tomato is too ignorant. Let me talk about the advantages of this novel. So far, although it has the atmosphere of a female pornographic novel, it does not suffer from female pornography, nor does it make any mistakes. The characters are also pretty good, nothing too obtrusive. As for the plot, at least I am satisfied. It is really a breath of fresh air in female pornography invading male pornography. I feel that some things are written in too much detail and are too boring. There are very few emotional lines, and they are basically business lines. Then I started to switch to superpowers. I don't grasp the focus very well. It's getting more and more boring to watch. It's basically not interesting. Some unnecessary things are written in a cumbersome way, too detailed and complicated, which affects the viewing experience. The pace is very slow. It's really Yes, if you want to write a business article, you should write about business well, and use the superpower as an embellishment. If you want to write a good article about superpowers, you should reduce the business part, and if it is about emotions, write more. It will give people a feeling that you can't do anything with words, but the author obviously wrote it carefully. It is easy to affect the perception if it is written like this. I will give 4 stars.

The author describes an extremely pure male protagonist, but even such an extremely pure person can be angered. The plot setting is quite careful.

I've finished reading, and there are a few pictures at the back that I'm skipping to read. This book is about group portraits. Personally, I'm a little bit reluctant to group portraits, because when reading a book, you don't have to read every word, and the dialogue between the characters will be confusing when reading. I really like the portrayal of the male and female protagonists in this book, especially the female protagonist in the male video. This The writing in this book is really ideal. Unlike the female protagonist in the Dragon King novel, who is basically just a vase except for the female CEO's label. This female protagonist is strong, has independent thinking and will not cry, and does not need the male protagonist to solve everything. The female protagonist and the male protagonist in this book complement each other, and I love this kind of female protagonist. It shouldn't be scored so low This book also tells us a truth: before rebirth, you were a waste, and after rebirth, you will still be a waste. The character Ren Yuanyao has all kinds of regrets from beginning to end.

This is the third book. I must read every book. There are no bad points so far. They are all my favorites. I must follow it. The first one is very good, the second one is even better, and I am looking forward to the third one... I just really like Xiaopingan in the second book. I hope it will be updated for a long time and don't end in a hurry... Of course, this is a follow-up book, and I want to read it too [makes a face]

This is the first time I read a book about time travel. It's a very enjoyable article and the writing is very solid. I like reading it. If I'm sorry, I also want to marry Mr. Huo, haha.

The author is thoughtful, the overall layout is reasonable and smooth, and the story is told eloquently.

The content is very solid, the author's writing style is also very relaxed, and the characters are well created.

A good book, the plot is full of ups and downs, the more I read, the more I like it!

It's very good-looking, with clear logic. Both the male and female protagonists are very strong and not sloppy. I read the comments and saw some people's comments with low scores. I feel like they didn't understand or skipped reading. The male protagonist can remember that there are no human beings in the world since the end of the world. The world is swallowed up by dark matter. The male protagonist has been living alone and with a vine for a long time until he can no longer produce plants and is starved to death. Go to the new world to see There is absolutely nothing wrong with seeing the sun, living people, and food. He also said that the heroine is unclean and doesn't even know how to read. In her previous life, she married the male protagonist's brother for profit only to complete the project. She is half-paralyzed and has never slept in the same room. How can she be unclean? In the future, she will not live in the same house. The heroine only had a career in her previous life. Come on, I am very selective in reading books. It is really beautiful.

Okay, it's a book with great potential, not bad.

The description of this book is delicate, the wording is accurate, and the atmosphere is full of atmosphere.

The author's writing style is very unique and the plot is well polished

Fu Sheng is good, well written, and the plot is very well designed. It is very direct, without any clichés, and it looks very comfortable.

The pacing of the novel is very well controlled, and the plot is also very interesting. I like it very much [like]

The character creation is full and three-dimensional, and the content is fascinating. It's very good.

The writing style is relaxed, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and it is very interesting to watch.

The characters have distinct personalities and are lifelike.

Recommended by Shuhuang, it's really good and I wasn't disappointed.

It's interesting, not cliched, and has a lot to see.

Distinctive writing, novel and unique concept, beautiful

The structure is exquisite, the plot is rich, and the rhythm is appropriate.

The novel's logical thinking is clear and its content is gripping.

The characters are vividly and vividly drawn and very brilliant.

I really like this kind of single-female story, it's very easy and bright to read!

The writing style is relaxed and everyday, and it feels very comfortable to read.

A very good book, the plot is ups and downs and fascinating.

Nice novel, I like it very much, I love reading it Really beautiful

The plot is good, I'm very thoughtful, the story is compact and very interesting!

What a special little sweet article, the male protagonist explores his own love brain. . . .

The author has polished the details very well and the content of the book is also very solid.