The Adventures of Luoluo: the Innocent Girl Went Crazy When She Was Killed

The first review is still from the author himself The author is already on fire. Are your family members on fire? If it's too hot, I'll cut it. If it's too hot, I'll burn it. The main focus is on balance!

I think it's great [laughing evilly] (reader's affirmation)

The overall writing style of the article is still very smooth, and it is really rare to see female fans in the fanfic about the Luoluo Adventures. Is the author not planning to update it?

There was no review before. Please add it now. Um, your hard-to-achieve force configuration is too poor. The quality of the forces in the Eastern Region crushes other pure ones. It's not easy to defeat three of the nine war kings, let alone the racial quality. Apart from internal strife and external forces, I can't think of a reason why they are not unified. It's easy to talk about internal fighting, but the intensity of internal fighting is too low. If there are external forces, shouldn't there be an alliance? The world view should be revealed more, and the level differentiation and upgrade system should be talked about. How can a character who can't kill the King of War advance so much?