Ultraman's Original Version, Without System, Without Heroine, No System!!!
Monsters are fine, but try not to use Leonix. The protagonist Leonix is too perverted. Their monsters grow too fast. The most critical number is ridiculously large. Don't just strangle one generation after another with ties. Don't use Tiga.
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The idea at the beginning is good, and the writing is pretty good, but later on when I switch to other worlds, I don't understand why I ran into this kind of world, and I was forcibly drained of my power by my own creation, which is amazing. Four stars are for the beginning
I know why there is no heroine anymore. The heroine died 60,000 years ago. He took some of the heroine's energy fragments to create it, daughter. Why! What should I do if Ye Mansion can't kill him at all? It can only be locked up. Let him sleep. Or use a lot of music and some love to make him a kinder version.
Since we have created a daughter with someone else's light, it is better to just have a heroine who is strong enough to go back to the past and resurrect her.
The Ultraman world is okay, but the witch is not interesting at all. Moreover, I feel that traveling through the world is meaningless. It is just like going through the motions, not to mention getting stronger. You said that you were too forgetful before. Are you training your mind? The important thing is to have a goal. The important thing is to travel with a purpose, not like checking in.
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We have lived for such a long time and have daughters. If there is a female protagonist, the taste will change! !
Not bad, mainly because of the good imagination and creativity. It was good to travel before the people from the Kingdom of Light became Ultraman. But the details and writing really need to be strengthened Except for the idea of the person who transformed into the Kingdom of Light without changing into Ultraman, the others are very ordinary, really too ordinary, and it is a waste of this idea.
The subject matter is good, I hope it can be a little more in-depth, and don't write casually.
Regardless of what others think, I feel like this book is very good. Keep up the good work. I wish you a better next book. I hope you don't stop updating or give up on this book. One last word, keep up the good work✊
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It looks good, come on, author [Like]
One more thing to make you proud [note]
Great, it's Shaflin Universe Superman
It's rare to see people writing about New Ultraman. Come on, author.
It looks good, but it's a bit lacking in details, but it's so cool. The main character, Belia, the Kingdom of Light, are all mentioned in one stroke. The ghouls in the back also need to be written more comprehensively, so I'll do more.
The plot is very well written, and as long as it doesn't end badly, I feel like the book is well written.
The protagonist is relatively new
The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work
Very much to my liking.
It's very good, but the author is too lazy and has too many updates. It's not enough to read this much.
I don't know what to say, but it's super pretty.
A very good book. It is not easy to find such a good book on Tomato.
It's good, but I could go a little deeper and write a longer story about one world. The book is very good, but unfortunately no one has read it. The main reason is that the story line is a bit messy. I suggest the author integrate worlds with similar worldviews and write more stories in one world. If it's the kind of world view that you can't put together at all, you can write it separately.