Collapse of Iron: the Immortal Boat Life of the Envoy of Fertility

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I hope the heroine is Yunli, Fu Xuan, Huo Huo, Qing Que Don't ask, if you ask, you are a lolicon [laughing evilly]

The pull of Ruojiruoli describes the girl's thoughts just right. Although it was said to be a single girl when I first watched it, it was later changed to multiple girls and it still did not affect the viewing experience. The transition from single girl to multiple girls was indeed written very well.

, Water, is said to be clear. Refers to a clear and translucent pool. A pure pool without dirt is called , and a pool that is bright or translucent is called clear. Those who are delicate and clear are rare in the world.

My favorite episode (originally it was just for Yunli, but I still accepted the result of having multiple girls [face covering]). It has its own opinions on the background, and there are many details that I didn't pay attention to. Overall, it's good.

After seeing the ability of the protagonist, the Envoy of Fertility, I was stunned for a moment. Will it be possible to return to the subconscious state? No, why do I feel so angry about K (K Serum)? When I looked at it later, oh, it turns out that the author is also a Yueji person. [Hold] That package is a five-star one.

It's a very nice fanfic. I pay more attention to the characters. The characters in it are basically not broken, and there are no poisonous points. The most important thing is that the emotional line is very well done. The author is very considerate. An average author can't write that kind of thing well. Without that talent, it really can't be done. [Like] [Love]. I hope to see the ending and keep updating [please update]. Come on, author!

Adhere to the law of life and ascend to the lonely seat in the other world. At the end of the journey, he gathered the power of all spirits to open up a way forward, but the dawn suddenly appeared, the return journey was cut off, and new life came, but the entire world he guarded finally disappeared silently like a bubble...

There are no problems except for the mirror scene where I felt uncomfortable due to my personal ideological issues. It's very beautiful.

The author handled the early and middle stages quite well, and I also liked the overall plot. After reading it, I still had some unfinished feelings, feeling that the author had written too little. Of course, I think there are some shortcomings, such as the description of the mirror flow in the middle and later stages. It feels a bit far-fetched to explain the marriage to heaven in the early stage. This is also where I personally feel that there are some failures. Also, when writing about the appearances of all living beings, it seems that there is no particularly good handling, and the timeline is a bit rushed. When I first started reading this book, I was almost persuaded to quit because of the timeline the author started writing (the heroine is Yunli, but the protagonist traveled before she was born). Of course, this does not affect the reading of the whole book, because the author is very skilled in controlling time, but it seems a bit rushed. I feel that the author has some unique insights into philosophy. For example, every time the protagonist makes a breakthrough, the protagonist gives me a contradictory feeling, but it is reasonable. Some of the flaws are reasonable, and I personally like this book better. But again, it's too little. It would be great if there could be a follow-up or spin-off. (I have read the entire article, and I am also a Fu Xuan chef, so I mean no harm)

Speaking of which, this is the only harem novel that I am not disgusted with. I even have some ideas about agreeing with the protagonist's concept. It is not a mindless cheating, nor is it lustful for no reason. If I can, I want to read it.

Please be sure to add Fu Xuan and Jing Liu [cry] [cry]

Can't the protagonist activate the crashed fairy boat? @ The author is great, can the protagonist activate the fallen fairy boat?

Oops, why is the author so short? I finished it in just two hours. It's not enough, it's beautiful. (Twisted crawling in the sewer)

Not bad, the love in it is very real, falling in love without any reason, this is very realistic [laughter]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh out out there out there out there out there, please update me more, it's so good it's not enough to watch [crying]

It's pretty, but it feels too bland. Sometimes I want to dance and watch

The logic is strict, the language is vivid, and the content is reasonable. It is worth reading! [Like][Like][Like]

Good looking (I want to eat Yunli😋)

It looks good, I love watching it, and I follow it every day. [Blowing kiss]

Very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful

Please don't stop updating, please don't stop updating [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

The plot and story are good, but the protagonist's emotional line is a bit tortured.

Fine chaff, taste well. This is what I understand as abundance. The protagonist embodies the abundance vividly.

Initial book: 5 points Favorite IP (Beng Tie): +1 point Favorite genre (invincible style): +1 point Favorite heroine (Fu Xuan): 1 point Normal writing: +0 points Modified with subsequent viewing

There are basically no logical loopholes and it is very well written.

I haven't watched it for long. Do you know who the heroine is after watching it?

Overall, it's pretty good.

[Like] The book is really beautiful

Ahem. Maybe she's a lolicon [laughing]