Transmigrating Into a Romance Novel: You Fall in Love, I Start a Revolution

I hope the author can listen to his advice. What everyone wants to see here is the opposite, not the romance. I really dislike the heroine named Han. The growth of the protagonist is the only motivation for me to keep watching 🤦

@ Come on, I hope I can see a more real world. How can I put it? I hope the changes in the total angle can be bigger? So far, or in other words, up to the first five chapters of the second volume, the protagonist's thoughts have not changed much. It seems that he has been assimilated into the world and has not maintained an innocent heart. How can he lead a revolution?!

The writing is not light-hearted. At present, it mainly focuses on foreshadowing and the psychological and physical growth of the protagonist. Different from traditional revolutionary literature, it currently highlights the inner changes, background and foreshadowing of the protagonist. The author wants to write about the protagonist's growth, and so far he has only been exposed to revolutionary events. The social background is written in depth, and the background frame has not yet been filled in. It is recommended that the growth should be mainly based on foreshadowing and the display of the protagonist's character and quality, and the time should be shortened as much as possible. The scenes of the female protagonist should also be mainly based on foreshadowing the social framework structure, unless the male protagonist and the female protagonist appear together. During this period, relax scenes should be mixed in from time to time to find ways to reduce boredom and increase fun and relaxation! When you read online articles, you definitely don't read them to suppress yourself!

Too much writing has been written on Han

The writing is very good, and it has a sense of how steel is made (it just doesn't suit my taste. Maybe I am only suitable for reading some cool articles. I think I can't read this kind of fine chaff). Good work, author [laughter] 👍 [KISS]

Brothers, there are too many female protagonists in the early stage of the revolution. How can I say that it is too much? But the writing settings are okay and I can read it. Overall, I'd say it's average.

It was a little uncomfortable at first, but the more you look at it, the better it looks. Can the author really not let the protagonist be a pioneer? I don't want them to follow our old path

The front is very addictive, but the setting and outline are very good. Keep it up, author.

I hope the author can keep writing. Although I think the pace is too fast in some places and the heroine's perspective is also missing, the flaws are not concealed. The plot content is novel and in line with realistic logic. However, I hope that the author can fully express his thoughts according to his own ideas and rhythm, and not be biased by the data and the opinions of some readers. After all, this subject matter is a bit niche, and it is not a refreshing article in the traditional sense. However, a book written from the perspective of the people's historical perspective must have value and significance worthy of careful appreciation.

I would like to give my five-star support and hope that the author can take a look at my suggestions. This subject matter is very rare, so I hope that the author will not follow the novels that highlight individual heroism, which are the majority of the Internet now. The first few chapters of the second volume are very good. The protagonist can provide theoretical guidance, but it is obviously unreasonable to leave all the protagonists to a person who is divorced from reality. I suggest that the author writes more about the role of the masses in GM.