Time Travel Female Channel, You Fall in Love and I Revolution

I hope the author can listen to his advice. What everyone wants to see here is the opposite, not the romance. I really dislike the heroine named Han. The growth of the protagonist is the only motivation for me to keep watching [face covering]

@ Come on, I hope I can see a more real world. How can I put it? I hope the changes in the total angle can be bigger? So far, or in other words, up to the first five chapters of the second volume, the protagonist's thoughts have not changed much. It seems that he has been assimilated into the world and has not maintained an innocent heart. How can he lead a revolution? !

The writing is not light-hearted. At present, it mainly focuses on foreshadowing and the psychological and physical growth of the protagonist. Different from traditional revolutionary literature, it currently highlights the inner changes, background and foreshadowing of the protagonist. The author wants to write about the protagonist's growth, and so far he has only been exposed to revolutionary events. The social background is written in depth, and the background frame has not yet been filled in. It is recommended that the growth should be mainly based on foreshadowing and the display of the protagonist's character and quality, and the time should be shortened as much as possible. The scenes of the female protagonist should also be mainly based on foreshadowing the social framework structure, unless the male protagonist and the female protagonist appear together. During this period, relax scenes should be mixed in from time to time to find ways to reduce boredom and increase fun and relaxation! When you read online articles, you definitely don't read them to suppress yourself!

Too much writing has been written on Han

The writing is very good, and it has a sense of how steel is made (it just doesn't suit my taste. Maybe I am only suitable for reading some cool articles. I think I can't read this kind of fine chaff). Good work, author [laughter] [like] [KISS]

Brothers, there are too many female protagonists in the early stage of the revolution. How can I say that it is too much? But the writing settings are okay and I can read it. Overall, I'd say it's average.

It was a little uncomfortable at first, but the more you look at it, the better it looks. Can the author really not let the protagonist be a pioneer? I don't want them to follow our old path

The front is very addictive, but the setting and outline are very good. Keep it up, author.

I would like to give my five-star support and hope that the author can take a look at my suggestions. This subject matter is very rare, so I hope that the author will not follow the novels that highlight individual heroism, which are the majority of the Internet now. The first few chapters of the second volume are very good. The protagonist can provide theoretical guidance, but it is obviously unreasonable to leave all the protagonists to a person who is divorced from reality. I suggest that the author writes more about the role of the masses in GM.

The subject matter is good, the content is good, and the overall pace is good. If it doesn't falter later, it's basically a good book. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

At the end of the day, there are no problems. I personally recommend eating it with Warsaw Qu for better results.

I think it's very exciting. The male protagonist has transformed in the new round of war. This is really exciting.

I hope the author can keep writing. Although I think the pace is too fast in some places and the heroine's perspective is also missing, the flaws are not concealed. The plot content is novel and in line with realistic logic. However, I hope that the author can fully express his thoughts according to his own ideas and rhythm, and not be biased by the data and the opinions of some readers. After all, this subject matter is a bit niche, and it is not a refreshing article in the traditional sense. However, a book written from the perspective of the people's historical perspective must have value and significance worthy of careful appreciation.

Don't be fooled, the score is just lowered, and it is recommended to start reading from Chapter 2

I suggest Li Mu give Han Feiyu a shot The writing is so good, why is the rating so low?

I'm a human and a machine. Leave me alone. What should I do if the king becomes more and more dishonest the more he fights?

Support, this is the only novel with this theme

Looks good, I like it, Tanya Senki version boy, really cool

What about now? You can still watch it Don't be swayed by those comments. The daily life of the heroine is only part of it, just to set off the behavior of the male protagonist, and it is all for the advancement of the plot. It gradually becomes less about the heroine. Trust me, keep watching. Decide that there will be a better tomorrow

Write the Qing Dynasty as the Ming Dynasty

It's okay, at least it's not selling sheep's head to dog meat.

The subject matter is very new, let's see what the author writes next [OK]

Hope the fire doesn't collapse (๑˙ー˙๑) I'm optimistic about you (✪▽✪)

I'm not the author. Can you use your excellent qualities and hard work to update it quickly?

It doesn't count as a masterpiece with a score of nine, but it should have a score of eight or more. The current disadvantage is that the author updates too slowly.

It's a subject I'm interested in, so it's a five-star rating.

Beautiful package Reading this book requires a little patience and confidence. The first volume lays out the background of the male and female protagonists. From the second volume onwards, it describes the changes of the male protagonist after being involved in the wave. The world of the novel changes slightly due to the intervention of the male protagonist, which makes people feel that the plot is advancing, and the plot is not delayed or watered down. The author used a lot of dialogue with readers to explain clearly why the plot develops in this way. The advantage is that I understand why the author arranged the plot in this way. The disadvantage of course is that this novel has "no secrets". If this is a novel with 500 chapters, then I can give 100 points, but! The Bull Demon only updates less than ten chapters in a month. The author, you poet, holds it in your hands.

Come, come, come, come

The growth of a revolutionary warrior Some people say that this article is not well written and that the male protagonist plays too little role in the plot. I think it is good. The male protagonist does not have to achieve something big to be a good article. It is more realistic to be an ordinary person with relatively advanced knowledge but unable to break away from the background of the times. Just proceed step by step.

Come on, come on, look good, look good