Redemption? Oh, I Have Already Fallen into the Blood Demon Lord

A very good story that fascinated me deeply. Here, I saw a person, a living person; a world, a world that was more real than reality. I saw a person, an ordinary person who could not be more ordinary. You will be confused by what you have done, and you will cry because of the regretful and unwilling story. She really looks like an ordinary person. Although her identity is not simple, she is a classic ordinary person who cannot be more classic. Living in confusion in the world, being involved in inexplicable events again and again, seeing the indifference of the world, I will be moved by some things, warming that empty heart... Every character here, even an inconspicuous supporting character, has his own story, unlike some novels where they are just puppets to meet the needs of the plot. They give me the feeling that they are more like flesh-and-blood people who have their own thoughts and will laugh or be sad about some things... I saw a world, a world that was more real than reality. It brings the warmth and coldness of the world, and the corruption of power, one by one before our eyes. It is no longer a cold setting, nor a lifeless background. It is a stage called the world. The characters in the author's works dance gracefully on this stage called the world, performing their own lives. Just like reality, the performer is either a legend or an ordinary life. The author's writing style is very in line with my taste, and the world view is also very large. Although it is not the best novel I have ever read, it is definitely the novel that made me write the review most carefully, and it is also the novel that resonates with me the most. The author's psychological portrayal is very delicate, and his grasp of human nature is just right. Falling into the abyss for eternal life, fighting openly and secretly for power, in order to survive... One person after another, one thing after another, appeared before my eyes like a drama, scene after scene. Moreover, the author is good at quoting classics, one after another, documents that I am familiar with or unfamiliar with, appear at just the right place (such as "The Divine Comedy" and the song at the end of the first volume), so that the whole text does not appear mediocre, nor does it appear as exaggerated as those articles piled up with only gorgeous rhetoric. I am also an author (on other platforms), so I know how hard and difficult it is to write. I hope the author can persevere and finish writing this story. In my eyes, every story is a real world, and every character is a living person. We should not give up easily, please keep writing. I don't want to see a good story end hastily. I am looking forward to the ending of this story, whether it will be gorgeous and powerful, or plain. This is my plea to you. Finally, I would like to express my most sincere wishes to you that you will succeed in your studies, work smoothly, and live a satisfactory and happy life. Come on! [Like][Like][Like] I read the remaining volumes in one go. It feels a bit underwhelming. Some people say that the article written by the author is a bit of a riddle, and I can't figure out the cause and effect, but it may be my own personal problem. I feel that the entire article is actually quite smooth, and there is no messy feeling. What impressed me most was Duan Ping's first sentence in Chapter 16. A book friend said that the author's writing was too riddle, but if you read the previous articles carefully, you can find the corresponding foreshadowing. (I originally wanted to find the original text of the previous paragraphs to prove it, but Tomato cannot save comments and it is so speechless that I am too lazy to read it) Of course, it is also possible that I have read too many riddles and have become somewhat accustomed to them. I can immediately think of the causes and consequences. This is purely a personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't comment.

This is a masterpiece that rarely gives me the feeling of reading a serious novel. The rhetorical sentences in it all have the flavor of a serious article. In terms of writing, use description to promote plot development and character growth, and concisely describe specific components that support important content. It can be seen that the author carefully planned the context of the article and made the story as exciting as possible. The tone of the story is depressing, but it's not that great. The author believes that the redemption can only be achieved after seeing the latest chapter. Perhaps like many similar novels, it is struggling between human nature and divinity. Inner conflict is the ultimate path to growth. In many scenes, the protagonist communicates with divinity through dreams. This is certainly a good way of writing, but it seems too frequent and the emotions are similar. I hope to enrich the thoughts contained in it, although the author has done a good job. After seeing the latest, I feel that this eloquent narrative style is very good, and the author also shows his ability to write daily life plots. Finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard and look forward to subsequent development. Happy New Year. [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

It's a good book. It made me resonate with depression. The author's writing style is very good. It's also the most profound description of another world and "destiny" I've ever seen in Tomato. The author should not stop talking! ! ! ! ! Beep beep, I've finished reading now, and I'm done spreading flowers!

Among the Western fantasy novels I have read, this book is really good. I am a person who likes stories. The purpose of reading books is to witness one story after another. These stories may be good or bad, but I always try my best to read and think about them, because as a reader, I am a witness to the story. I follow the protagonist's perspective and experience one adventure after another, feeling the joys and sorrows of (him, her, it, him). The memory of these stories remains, and even if the stories no longer exist, at least I still remember them. I have no literary talent, nor can I say any gorgeous words of praise. I can only say that in my opinion this is a good story. No matter what other people think, at least I think so. Thank you to the author for allowing me to witness this story. A story must have a beginning and an end. The ending may be happy, sad, subtle, or rough. There must always be an ending. I hope the author can persevere so that we can see the ending of this story, the final chapter of this otherworldly adventure.

"Bian Bai", the writing style is excellent, and there are few descriptions of women's clothing, body and female body. The Western world view of swords and magic is written in detail. The heroine travels to the Western Fantasy Continent and meets the second heroine. She grows up step by step, and has daily work + daily battles. He kept getting stronger, and then reunited with the second female lead. It was very sweet, with all kinds of conversations, posts, promises, wedding dress selection, interactions, falling together, falling in love, falling in love. The description of the if line is also good, with different choices, the writing is very beautiful, and the various sadnesses feel a bit pointless ~ I have to say that I have magic power in a different world, can do magic, and be with the person I like. How can I have so many memories of my previous life? Cherish the present. It took the heroine 211 chapters to figure out this truth. I was convinced. This can only mean that when she was a boy in her previous life, the heroine was with her children. She has never experienced life, marriage, raising children, supporting the elderly, etc. Returning to the theme, this book is a must-read for those who like Western fantasy. The writing is really good, the background setting is very good, and the emotional line is also good.

It's a really good work, it's my favorite subject matter, the characters also hit my mark, and the author's writing style is beyond words. This simple yet mysterious narrative really hits the strike zone. I can only say that I love it so much. However, I personally feel that the character expressions still need to be enriched, including the protagonist and supporting characters. For example, Roland Sir is one of the few characters in the work who has more descriptions, but the background of the character is relatively vague. Other supporting characters, such as Yoel and Kelly, are only mentioned in a few strokes, lacking a sense of three-dimensionality or even presence. As for Li Yue, the description is indeed a bit vague (maybe I didn't think carefully). It was not until the end of the first volume that I finally realized, "So that's how it is." Li Yue's behavior and psychology of escaping from identity and reality really came to the surface. However, if you look back at the details of the "imagined girl" earlier, you can also learn something. From this point of view, I have to say that the author is still very strong👍. (I have no resistance at all to people like Liyue [love]) As for the plot, as everyone said in the comments, it feels like the development is a bit fast, and there are a lot of battles and events, but there is an illusion that the amount is small. This may be a side effect of the "simplistic narrative", and maybe it can be enriched. The description of the battle is impeccable, but the development of events feels a bit fast, even jumping, one after another, and the atmosphere is slightly tense and urgent. Perhaps more daily life can be added to the events. For example, when Li Yue first arrives, there may be some narration of city exploration, or daily interactions with members of the demon hunting team, to enrich the image and personality of the supporting characters. After reading the first chapter, I found that the author's plot framework is still very good. Every event does not seem cumbersome and useless. I need to do some foreshadowing, polish it, and describe more scenes to slow down the pace and make the events less abrupt. This can make the content fuller without making empty jumps. The above is my personal opinion after reading the first volume. I can only say that I really like this work. Although it has just started, it is already starting to take shape. I hope these suggestions can help the author greatly and become the motivation for the author's creation [top post]

I feel that the author pays more attention to the atmosphere. If you can read it patiently, you will still feel it (a lot of words and sentences). However, it is a very pessimistic fact: in this era of fast food, and in this fast food tomato, the author really does not have any group audience. It is like an ordinary person who lives in the city and does not live well, but goes to the deep mountains and wild forests to survive in the wilderness with nothing. The author seems to have come to the wrong place. In short, the book is good, and it is quite interesting to slowly experience the struggle of thoughts. This book is not a transformation story, with two female protagonists, but I feel that the author may be a boy (sorry if this offends me). The female protagonists are very capable and avoid a lot of, well, how should I put it? (I don't mean that only boys can write this kind of heroine, but I feel that if a girl writes it, there should be more, that's about it)

What's this? This is a work of art! A complete work of art! Σ( ° △ °|||)Reading this book is like appreciating a magnificent epic. The plot description is amazing and the environment description is fascinating. After reading the first volume, I couldn't help but praise it. Although I may be a little dizzy when I started reading it, because the big jump in the plot content is a bit overwhelming. , But if you watch it carefully, you will feel the immersive shock. Author, are you going to publish animation or movies? Seriously, the author has a side job. (▼ヘ▼#)[Anger] Give me all the five-star reviews! Fill the author's mouth with five-star reviews! ! Ｏ(≧▽≦)O

I have only seen the early stage. The writing is good and there are many riddles. However, the atmosphere is well created and the emotional transition is delicate. Instead, the riddles become a motivation to attract people to watch. People look forward to the moment when the mystery is revealed. I really like this kind of protagonist who is in confusion, but the surrounding environment brings to the protagonist. Not just confusion, but also various guidance, allowing the protagonist to gradually explore and gradually uncover the world through various events, giving me a feeling of the early stage of Lord of Mysteries. I really like this writing method, letting the settings serve the plot, and setting the settings bit by bit as the plot progresses. I hope the author can keep writing. This book really poked me There are many shortcomings in the ending, but there are also many advantages. Many plots are too simple and the explanations are not clear enough. But then again, is this a sacrifice for the overall atmosphere? Generally speaking, the emotions are delicate and the melancholy atmosphere is well created. It is an outlier among online novels. It is still very interesting. I recommend it.

It's 2 o'clock in the morning, and as I write this, I'm crying in my den. The melancholic blues, the echo of silence, the hypothermic body temperature, the sheltered redemption... After watching it for 2 hours, I suddenly felt that I was no different. After all, the established future was really vivid in my mind, and inaction and self-transformation were not a good path no matter how I looked at it. I suddenly remembered the scrapped manuscript of the novel I abandoned after graduating from high school. Those handwritten stories still appear in my dreams. They were beautiful in the past, but painful now. Maybe people shouldn't be so pessimistic, but sometimes we don't even have time to grieve, so we have to move forward with blood... Ps: The author's writing is really good. It reminds me of the novels I have read before that I loved very much, but I really want to take a break...

After reading the review from a book friend, I thought about it. In the early stages of this book, I was just as confused as I was when I read Weird Fairy. But I can eat anything (proud), not to mention that this article is written in Tomato.

It's very good. I really like the author's descriptions of daily life and love. I think it's because I was impatient and didn't read it carefully in the early stages of the novel. This is also a common problem in foreign novels. I felt that the early stage was more of a riddle. But after reading the second volume, I felt a lot better. [Blow a kiss]. The contradiction and madness of the protagonist are very well portrayed. [Like] [Like]. Although the subject matter is niche, the writing is very good. I have read so many Xiaobai novels and I feel more comfortable reading the previous one [shy] I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Love][love]

I feel that this book is very suitable for Mili's song "Between Two Worlds", with its sacred, profane, and depraved feeling. The author's writing style with a strong sense of artistic conception is very suitable for this style. Although it may make people look a little unclear, this can be regarded as an advantage. The strong sense of picture brings shock. I like it so much, Ayu must finish it, meow

There are a lot of foreshadowings in the first volume, which you may not understand at first glance, but it gradually becomes clear in the second volume. Although it is the author's debut, it is still very interesting overall. I hope that I can keep writing. Readers will do everything.

From August 2, 2024, to July 17, 2025, 352 days and nights of companionship are like a long and gentle journey. When I turned the last page, I felt a little reluctant to leave it - those heartbeats that fluctuated with the words, the nights when I was worried about the characters, and the moments when I was struck by a certain sentence, have become precious marks that are unique to me. Thanks to the author for weaving this story, which makes ordinary days shine like stars. Maybe the ending is not the end, but another beginning: the joys and sorrows of the people in the book will continue to grow in my memory, and when I close the page, I also take the courage and warmth given by the story to my next chapter. Finally, I wish Ayue and Crowe must be happy! ——To "Yorman Gund on the Lost River"

An incredible story about "love and time". I read it in one sitting. After reading the first chapter, I felt that this book was not simple. The sentence "I don't like the ending of the story" at the end echoed the beginning of the first chapter. You can feel how strong the author's control over the outline is. This level of structural awareness is rare in online articles. In addition, I suggest that the whole book should not be read as an ordinary online novel. This book is not that exciting. The protagonist is suppressing himself from beginning to end. A lot of content needs to be connected to the airwaves to get it, but once you are connected, the stamina will be great. Moreover, the author has a very deep literary foundation, and many classic literature references can be seen in the lines, from Shakespeare's sonnets to Borges, who I personally like very much. It is particularly comfortable when reading. [The following involves some of the content in the article] "It's just that that reckless girl has become the last god in this world." "I didn't save the world, I just wanted to save you... My Clo." These few sentences at the end, combined with the long paragraphs of foreshadowing, directly bring out the despair of the book on the verge of doomsday - the unconscious loneliness of the past, the hesitation of being the only one left now, the slight sentimentality, the unconscious guilt, and finally the "love" for Crowe that cannot be with him. When I first read it, I felt an indescribable feeling of boredom. I went back and read it several times, chewed it over and over again, and thought about it, and finally I could only settle on one word: love. Pure love, selfless love, helpless love. After thinking about it for a long time, I probably still can only describe this feeling by borrowing other people's sentences - calling for love in the center of the world. When the two finally met, they said, "Welcome back, welcome back to this reality where I exist." The whole world owes you a grand wedding, my dear Miss Savior. However, some of the foreshadowings are buried too deep, making it a bit tiring to read, and I always feel that Crowe's story line can be expanded a little more, but the current level of completion is already very good. Time will prove this is a good work.

Excellent work! It makes me linger, but I was attracted by Lily at first, but it seems that the sweetness is less, and more is Liyue's ignorance in the early stage. When she meets Crowe again, she clearly knows that her fate cannot be escaped, but she still wants such a stable life to be longer, longer, and desperately suppresses the madness in her mind. It can be said that it makes me worried! What to say in the later stage? I feel unexpectedly calm, maybe it's because I also have a premonition in my heart? Everything will fall into place. I have seen Li Yue's story, and now that the story has ushered in a new beginning, I am really filled with emotion. To put it simply, author! You wrote well! I am very happy.

The writing is very good. I finished reading it after I was sick at home for a few days. It can be clearly seen that the author's skills are getting better and better, and the author's replies to the paragraph reviews can also be seen that he is very concerned about this book [Blow kiss]

The narrative is very distinctive. The author's writing style is like a broken dream. It can be seen that the author is very attentive and the plot connection is very smooth. However, there are a little less battle scenes. The story in it feels like it could be written in more depth. All in all, it is a good novel. I look forward to the author's progress.

This is the best Western fantasy novel I have ever read. The world view of this novel is classic and grand, and the characters are also very rich. The writing is both humorous and elegant. Come on, great author!

The technique is sharp and the plot is good, but the atmosphere of the book is too depressing and sad. Books are used to relieve and enrich people's hearts. I hope readers can improve it and not make the world too bleak. Add more active descriptions of people (not one-to-one but people), otherwise it will seem too dead.

I'm sorry that I only read this book in 2026. In reality, I am a very ordinary person and a very stupid person. In the past two days, I have poured all my beautiful expectations that I cannot realize in reality into this book. I am also an emotional person. I will travel in the world of fantasy and be sincerely moved by the characters in the book and resonate with them. I hope that the pressure of life will not change me in the future, and I can always be that person who has strong empathy and is easily moved. A Yue is a very vivid person, which makes me forget that she is virtual when reading. I may be a little stupid and be attracted by the beauty written by others, but I still hope that I can maintain my original intention and a heart that can be moved by novels. Dear author, I saw your author's words. I'm really looking forward to the book you're writing, and I hope you don't have to change your original intention for life.

In fact, I feel that the main tone of this book is a bit sad. But it is a very good story, just like sitting in a rocking chair drinking coffee on a sunny afternoon, half-squinting your eyes, feeling this beautiful but somewhat nihilistic state, which fits my state of mind [Love]

The content is very novel, and the author's writing style is also very good. After reading it for so many years, I have found a few details. I really don't know why I find this "level" strange. Can the author explain it to me in detail? [Smile]

The author's writing style is very good, but this novel does not meet the public's taste, so not many people will read it. The writing is a bit too romantic, but this kind of novel is good as my own comfort. In short, it is well written, but it is very niche. The author must be mentally prepared [Like][Like][Like]

It's not a conventional article. The author has his own unique thoughts. The world view and characters in his writing are also very vivid. It can be seen that they are from the OC carefully created by himself. I think it is a rare gem among fast food.

Really well written! I really enjoyed watching it. The table must be updated! ! ! I want to read a book but I don't dare to read it. I really don't dare to read a novel that the author clearly writes very well (maybe because the first volume is too vague) but no one has read it. I am afraid that I will die and I will fight with the author until the last moment!

It has an epic feel and the words are shocking to the soul.

It's very interesting. I highly recommend it. The world view and the characters are all very detailed. Even my emotions are perfect. It's the best novel I've read this year.

Well, it's very good, the performance is very tense, the emotional shaping is also good, there are quite a lot of riddles, and it gives people a feeling of emmm fragmentation? (To be honest, I didn't quite understand it, but it gave me a pretty good feeling.) This kind of switching of perspectives can really give people a mental impact? Broken? Incomplete? But don't hide the riddles for too long, which still feels a little fragmented, but I am sure that this book should not only have a 7. The multi-score is probably around 9.1 To 9.3. (Well, there is a saying that you may all know, which roughly means "Novel can reflect the author's inner emotions, either present or past, and it often symbolizes a past or..." Of course, this does not apply to many full-time writers. I have also written... I sent 400,000 words) Writing a novel is a difficult thing, I am willing to persevere... 25.6.11