[Original Plot + Twists + Slow Burn + No System + New Pokemon]
(The writing has fallen apart. New readers... give it a try if you don't mind.)
The writing isn't very good, and much of the plot is original. Elements of Honkai will be incorporated in the middle and later parts. (It might take some effort to follow.)
Whispers in a dream: Let's turn this imperfect world into the kind we imagine! A world without pain, without sorrow...
A murmur by your ear: So what if you've lost heart? You said you would completely rewrite this world...
"Where am I...? The world of Date A Live?"
An unknown inverted Pokemon, ruined walls and broken rings, an endless mirror of reincarnation, and a stopped watch of time.
[The End?]: When the power of Honkai bears down on Tengu City, what will you do, Ling Feng, the one who has lost heart? Will you still insist on following your "misguided path"?
One of the few battle stories, after rescuing Erya in advance, it seems difficult to develop the plot later 🤔
Mio and Masashi are miserable enough. It would be nice if they had a happy ending.
Come on author, give you a five-star review to support it
Overall good, keep going
Don't give up your teeth! There are really too few and too many fights with fellow fans, and too many interruptions, which is ridiculous.
Who is the heroine? The original one?
I don't know why, but the content feels a bit familiar. Can the author really not add some more original heroine?
Give yourself a five-star rating and work hard until the end [laughs]
It's pretty good in a date battle and the writing is pretty good, I personally think (✪▽✪)
I would like to ask if this article is about changing marriage?