Awakened a Sacred Physique, I Sweep Across the Four Provinces with the Demon Princess

Come on, author, you have potential.

What should I say? I have just read more than 60 chapters. There are some problems. I think the relationship between the male and female protagonists is indeed well written, but before they got together, they were a little childish. Regarding the emotions of the female protagonist, she can be more appropriate and generous. After all, she is the sister who grew up with the male protagonist. And regarding Miss Liu and the male protagonist who grew up together, even if the male protagonist only regards her as a sister, she shouldn't be like that when rejecting her. I can put it more tactfully. Although it is good for her to refuse clearly, I think the way of saying it is still a little problematic. Secondly, when they entered the pagoda, the male protagonist's mother was also an expert. Why was he just worried and crying at this time? Can't you do something? And although the author probably wants to highlight the relationship between the male and female protagonists (although I also like to read it), I think the way of speaking and expression of the supporting characters can be more reasonable. I still like this novel very much. If the author still has the heart to continue updating it, he can make some improvements. I hope more people will read this book 🤭 I've finished reading it. I've finished reading it. How should I put it? There are almost no poisonous points in the back. I hope the author will update it a lot, and I hope more people will read it. Come on, come on, come on

In terms of emotional drama, this book is really good. The plot is not satisfactory. Unfortunately, too few people have read it. I really don't understand why this book has such a good score.

'Well written, cheers to the author 🤭🤭

It's really beautiful. Kudos to the author!!!

It's very interesting. Kudos to the author!