Voldemort's Heiress of Slytherin

This book tells the story of the beautiful King who traveled to the world of Harry Potter and became the daughter of his aunt's family. She looked exactly like Lily when she was a child, and then went to Hogwarts to learn magic. Snape and the Potions teacher who liked Harry in the original book were both surprised. Snape was obviously partial to the heroine, and the little boys also had a crush on the heroine to a certain extent. Harry also has a bit of a sister-control tendency. As for the comment saying that the heroine is not good to his parents, I think it is pure nonsense. The heroine's parents are Muggles, and they live well in such chaos in the original book. But Harry and the heroine will be in danger of encountering Voldemort when they learn magic. In this case, not interfering in the normal life of his parents is the best choice. The heroine has already worked very hard!! Harry is also very protective of his sister!!! There is no such thing as who licks whom, it's a two-way street.

It's about the heroine traveling through time, replacing Dali as Harry's cousin, and giving him a perfect childhood experience. According to the introduction, the heroine is super powerful and will be able to defeat Voldemort alone in the future, for the sake of my dear cousin, but I don't know who the CP is. Looking at the current storyline, I feel like Draco and Harry are a couple. The others are not clear.

It's quite good. Although I would rather have a CP for the heroine, the family story is also good. The aunt's family is actually very good to Harry. It's really good.

The writing is okay, but it would be better to give some hints when changing the perspective. Secondly, I don't know which version your translation is 🤦 is a bit strange.

The subject matter is novel and very interesting, and the characters should not be out of character. It's just that this book is too young, I only read it for a while and then finished it

Oh my God, my God, my God, my God!!! I really like such a cute heroine! It feels like it's really rare in fan fiction. I was very happy when I saw this book and decided to give you a 5-star review.

How to say it? Overall it was very gentle, um, and the process was not a big problem. Let me talk about the overall feeling first: I have seen more than 70 chapters so far, and the main body of the language is very confusing, and the main line is quite unclear. There seem to be many pitfalls that are not meant to be filled. Is this the intention to fill all the pitfalls by the end? The rhythm should be more chaotic then. Let me talk about it separately: there are many key parts that have not been restored, which makes me feel uncomfortable as a person who works in the original novel. For example, the key to Gringotts is the most typical one. The second typical one may be that Quirrell and others always call the Dark Lord that person. I first thought of it as a new character, or the identity of the protagonist in the later period, but the language expresses the Dark Lord. Personally, I feel that it is better to replace that person with the Dark Lord. Well, let me finally talk about the advantages of this book: the main thing that supported me in reading more than 70 chapters was curiosity and a sense of freshness. I was really looking forward to the growth of the heroine in the end, and I was also looking forward to the part about how he finally returned to the present through time and space, and then became the Witch of Thorns (most likely I didn't see it, anyway, I was guessing). The main feature is that I don't know where he will jump to write, and it feels like opening a blind box.

Healing system, everyone who has a conscience always has a chance of redemption, which is quite good. It's just that the second half of the story is garbled, with many names changing, and the Witch of Thorns hole has not been filled in. The Potter family's legacy has also disappeared, and the ending of the heroine, Rael and others is unknown. There is a cliffhanger ending before the start of the fourth grade league.

Good-looking, very good-looking. The subject matter is novel, the content is compact, and the character of the protagonist is also very interesting. Very good-looking.

When I saw Chapter 21 about the Witch of Thorns, I read the table of contents again. Well, the eldest son of Potter, that is, there are other children. I blindly guessed that the Witch of Thorns is the heroine. She traveled to the past and changed.