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Update! Update! Update by any means necessary! Update! Update! Update by any means necessary! When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

It's not bad, but the plot of the country and nation after entering the secret realm at the beginning is a bit cliché. After such a slight flaw, the writing is very good. There are not so many live broadcast poisonous points to ridicule. The secret realm plot is also very well written. Good luck, author [Like][Like][Like]

Update quickly. Another point is to give whatever the market price is. Normal transactions. There is no need to be rich. Wouldn't it be nice if you don't use the extra money to develop the army? In the early stage of development, you need royal value, don't lick it!

It's rare to see such a lord article. There are not too many useless plots. The plot is very compact, but the details are well preserved. There are no shortcomings except that the author is slower [please read carefully]

It's a good book. There are basically no poisonous points. The only thing is that the history is completely broken. However, if it is the national destiny, it is a normal operation. It is basically just development. There is very little realistic content and there is no brainless ridicule. It is very good.

I have read part of it so far, and overall it is okay, except for some minor flaws (for example, the soldiers summoned by the protagonist are intelligent, but the protagonist always likes to micro-manage on the front line. If the protagonist is strong enough, there is no problem. The problem is that the protagonist has to follow him to explore if he is not strong enough. It has become a flaw and breakthrough point for the team every time, and has put the team in danger several times)

Looks good but has a few problems 1: The timeline is very messy, and the concept and description of time are unclear. 2: There is a problem with tactics. When unnecessary sacrifices can be avoided, casualties are always deliberately arranged. For example, in the time of Jordan, you can actually build a defense line at the back first and wait for time to upgrade. You can use small-scale wars to increase resources and restore morale, but you have to use hard steel. 3: The IQs of the lords of other countries are very low, and the psychic technology is too slow, nuclear bombs can be built but not, and there are some minor problems. Summary: good-looking, slightly unclear, and the behavior of water characters, but still an excellent work on Tomato

I just saw Chapter 378 and I feel like I can make some comments. This book is not as exciting as I imagined. It is more about the description and extension of technology. Even though it is a big scene, it still makes me feel that it is not so grand and not so turbulent. The character image and design (including the way of speaking, behavior, and thoughts) make me feel that they are designed for the needs of the protagonist. This does not allow me to appreciate the charm of the protagonist. Instead, I feel the charm of cheating. All in all, it is a fun article, just read it and enjoy it.

Very satisfied, the subject matter is good and the ideas are very clear! !

I just like reading this kind of heavy industry science fiction. It would be better to come to a sci-fi heaven that would be more enjoyable.

The writing is pretty good, I personally don't think it's toxic, and the updates are fast. Although I don't update much at one time, I can't help but update it so many times.

The rest of this book is okay. The only flaw is that we can watch other people's live broadcasts, but others cannot watch our live broadcasts. This should be the author's flaw, in order to prevent him from being unable to write later.

The more I write, the better. The beginning of the reading is still a bit green, but it becomes more and more exciting! Like, send flowers!

I read Chapter 70. In other novels, the insect swarm is a very powerful existence. This one is a bit awkward. It feels like it is just a branch of the lower level of the super insect swarm. There should be stronger enemies in the follow-up. The book is not bad.

Da Qin is very well written, and Da Qin's arms are well written, but the world view should not cover countries all over the earth. It is difficult for people to keep reading, and it is easy to publish a book. You should write about other worlds, the process of the unification of the Great Qin War, the protagonist's name should be changed to Ying, and there is nothing wrong with Ying's descendants inheriting the Great Qin! It can only be said that the world view is not good, but Da Qin can

The subject matter is novel, but the plot progress is a bit slow. It has only been 7 days before the end. However, the characters are very detailed, and they are not mindlessly patriotic. They also have different considerations for different forces.

The story chain is very complete and the author has no bad endings. Have been working hard to give us updates. So please be sure to read it carefully. Although the front part is a bit cliche, the back part is very exciting.

Khorne is here [laughs evilly] When will the slut and the loving father come?

This is the first Daqin Heavy Industry I have read so far. Although I have only read this book, I still can't stand the temptation. Come on, it's a good read so far.

The plot is super interesting, and the protagonist's growth line is well shaped. He grows from an ordinary time traveler to an emperor who rules the entire civilization, leading everyone to unite to fight against foreign enemies. The protagonist and supporting characters are all vividly written. Daqin yyds Su Yang yyds I like a protagonist with a high IQ. No matter what difficulties he faces, he can calmly analyze and have correct judgment and command ability. He has an undying pride and an undying will. He is the belief of the entire civilization. He is a great leader who sacrifices himself for others.

The creativity is very rich and the description of the mecha is very detailed.

Quite fun. The rhythm is slightly tight, the taste is good, and there is a degree of relaxation. Moreover, the character creation is more three-dimensional compared to other novels. The data is just a bit messy, I hope it can be improved. And, there are a few small highlights: The small action interactions between strategic unit soldiers and generals are quite interesting. For example, Li Xin is handsome, naive, and a bit arrogant. The generals occasionally avenge each other without affecting the overall situation, which is quite cute. The description of war is very cool and exciting. Come on [laughing] No, blanching is so funny, hahahahahahahahahaha

IQ is online, not the Holy Mother, and the story theme is relatively novel. It was okay in the early stage, but it was all water in the later stage.

That's it. Are you looking so enthusiastically? The result is gone. The author hastened to update it. This book was a pleasure to read! Very beautiful

So far I think the novel is pretty good, keep it up.

It's really beautiful. It's not enough. The author hastily updated it [crazy]

The lord story is quite tightly paced, but only watered down in the later stages.

The writing is good. The protagonist keeps crushing the enemy. The mechas with Qin Dynasty characteristics are very interesting. The author also includes pictures to explain.

Nice! It's really nice to watch! Just treat it like a book of mystery, the protagonist is invincible, and the most important thing is to enjoy it!

Good looking. Love watching. Not enough! The logic and context of the novel are really great, but there is too much data at the end, so I hope it can be streamlined. There could also be more descriptions of heroes. If you don't expect a female lead, don't!