HP: a Smiling Snake Comes from the East

The heroine has no CP and is very smart and calm. It's really rare. This is the first time I feel that the heroine's intelligence and calmness are concretely reflected in the article. (And it's Snape's affectionate character. It's even rarer [crying]) The author has carefully crafted every character in it. Xiaoduo's family line is also very interesting. The heroine is very clear-headed and independent and does not need to be dependent on others. The author really loves the heroine he writes. The career line is so exciting to watch. (I have read a lot of articles that are mixed with love. As long as the love heroine is involved, the whole person is as if her body has been taken away. Regardless of whether she is calm or any other personality, she becomes delicate and loses control. I hope Elvira will not become like this during the if line) Come on, wife of the author, I love you [love] I hope the author won't start to foreshadow the heroine's love for them just because the if line has CP [crying]

Ahhhhhhhh Super Invincible is so good to watch. Really, the foreshadowing is amazing. Every step is foreshadowing. If you watch it without thinking, you will be confused. And the emotional lines of each paragraph are well described, and the writing style is really good [ Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts], I cried to death in every section (currently the heroine and the professor, Theodore and his father), don't use a family knife to kill me [crying][crying][crying] Everyone's emotional and character description It's very vivid, and the interactions between each person are really good at describing it. I really like the character of the heroine, and I also really like Draco. I love the character of the young master so much. I feel that the character of the young master has finally been written in the right way. The young masters in other fanfics don't feel like it. There is no official version of the text, I think it's great (very loud) But when writing the extra CP, can I write about the heroine and Draco (raise your hand and whisper) and then write about billions of dots and dots (weak and super quiet)

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo,,, I was so moved and cried when I read Chapter 70🥹The writing is really, really good. It's so rare that Sif's character is so difficult to control but not OOC at all! Author, you are so awesome!

The Chinese heroine puts interests first. Based on the original work, she knows spell formations and teaches her daughter (the most trusted person by both parties). She transforms from the lion courtyard to the snake courtyard. The heroine dominates the rankings and leads the snake courtyard to get all the glory. The whole school is impressed by the heroine's ability. The original three primary school students Many pure-blood families, including Draco, trust the heroine. She is an Eastern dragon who has cultivated her own power since she was a child. The author's writing style is exquisite, the full text is fluent, the thinking is close, and the emotions are touching. Each character in the article has its own distinctive characteristics. Elvira: I'm very good at pleasing people.

I like it, I really like the character of the heroine. For someone who really likes wandering around in tomatoes (˘▽˘)っ🍅, I have found a long-term ration! It's so long, I can't read enough, I can't read enough. The author of one of my favorite novels is very lazy, so I, a loyal believer, held a sacred ceremony to resurrect him. Of course, this ceremony was to build up my author's body with comments all over the sky. Then, we also found that the author was really too lazy, so I was heartbroken. Then, I met this article with holy light, which saved me when I was down and out! Looking at the long number of chapters and the writing style that is not inferior to the previous author's, I admit that I am moved! Hahaha, we also have a long-term meal.

My eyes light up The logic is online, and the details are very good. Some places may seem problematic, but they are either foreshadowing or have reasonable explanations. The original novel is very comfortable to read. The author is also very independent and personal (I can't find the right adjective for me). It does not reduce to a plot that imposes a concave character on the heroine. Everyone who has read it said it is good. The psychological description of the heroine is very realistic, and the use of formations and talismans is also immersive and very cool! Everyone's interactions with her are warm and heart-warming. It can be seen that both the system and Avila are growing step by step and transforming in all aspects. As Elvira's father, the two of them are a two-way salvation line (I say this just to make it easier to understand, the relationship between the two is no longer something I can deal with in one or two strokes). Elvira will give everything for Snape, and everything that is bad for her father will be eliminated, and the same is true for Snape. Overall, very nice What makes me unmoved when I look at Memories is this👎🏻 I recommended this book on the Book Recommendation Forum and found that the ratings had changed, so I reviewed it! ! In the past few days, I have read several mindless Sri Lankan education CP books, and after realizing the age difference, I still really love this family love story! ! The only true God! The last time I checked, the score was still 8.6. I was very confused as to why those stupid and cool articles with blunt writing and many typos had such high scores (no thumbs down!!). Now it has reached 9.1! There is a feeling of watching a child grow up. After all, this is the first HP fanfic I have read. I feel that Elvira and Sijiao have completely come into my life. Sure enough, pursuing a niche is a very popular thing in China😭😭I don't want this book to be ruined on the street. I hope that everything goes well for the author and that he becomes more energetic as he writes the book😈💪🏻

It's super beautiful and perfectly adapted to my aesthetic point of view. It's basically tailor-made for me. Not to mention the writing style, it's like Qu Wenxing descended from the earth. Besides, my favorite plot is none other than Sif, plus I am a heroine (in short, the heroine cannot suffer any loss), so from the looks of it, I like everyone 😍[Shy][Admiration]

I like it very much, especially the family relationship between the heroine and Sri Lanka. It is very touching. Finally, I have a heroine who truly does not lose her character and puts interests first. She does not need love, but only family and friendship. The heroine Shuangshang Online is a real "businessman" (except for Sif) who doesn't meddle in other people's business. She really likes the feeling of the heroine playing the chess game in the palm of her hand. Moreover, the heroine is not really emotionless and is slowly changing, like a real living person of flesh and blood. I have read the full text so far. There is enough foreshadowing and the characters are solid. The author also has unique insights into some supporting characters. Some sub-plots are very touching and enrich the characters. Especially some foreshadowing arrangements and those pitfalls, I personally think they are well filled in, and the characters are not considered OOC.

When I first watched it, I didn't feel anything. I even thought the heroine's character was a bit too cold (I didn't mean to dislike Xiao Ai). Later, when I learned the true story of the heroine Wang Mu, I understood her indifference. Her edge was forced to be helpless. Her patriarchal family fostered her personality of putting interests first. She has no weakness and is extremely rational. Later, because of her intentional or unintentional choices, she found the right person, and she gradually became a flesh-and-blood person. "She is a noble elf" is the love that is read in the dictionary, and "Endless Summer Blooms" is a promise made by two people alone. She is loved, and she deserves to be loved. Endless summer blooms, they are always perfect There are also the last two story lines, I love them both very much. I found that one of them lost his mother and his father did not love him, and the other lost his mother and his father loved him, but they both cried to death. Ryan "Mom's little king, be an upright and kind person" "Lian Smith" "April" "He had a happy family, once" Theodore "Platycodon, Eternal Love" "Do you not like it, or do you like it?" Can't like it" "No, he's very much himself" "A gift from God" It is recommended to read it a second time. There are too many foreshadowings. Please read it from the beginning. Come on, I've taken notes for about fifty places, and I did this randomly. If your brain is so useful, can you share half of it with me? The adults are also very nice. I love watching them interact with us the most. Finally, come on, I want to watch the story line of Xiaoyijiaofei. I have prepared toilet paper.

Although I haven't done much research on the original work, I still feel that my wife wrote it very well and everyone's characters are very cute. I just hope that he [please update][please pay attention]

I have two favorite oranges called Draco's Love Notes and a story about Hogwarts, both by the same author. After reading these two a few years ago, I have never watched another HP series long plot. This one is really interesting. The plot has ups and downs. It is not just a charming design in the conventional sense. The character of the heroine Elvira is very plump. Having one's own ideology is not the heart of a Holy Mother. She is thoughtful and ignores everyone equally but has the only salvation of Sri Lanka. This is the main heroine. The author raised his daughter well and the writing is also very delicate and detailed. The author also has a unique understanding of the story of HP, presenting the love-hate entanglement in the magical world from another aspect. The writing style also has a bit of humor, unlike the boring retelling in the conventional sense. There are many foreshadowings, and the story direction is fascinating. In addition to the heroine, especially the portrayal of Si Jiao, many of them are based on lovers. However, Si Jiao's love for Lily is more convincing from the perspective of a father and daughter, respecting the character itself more than from the lover's perspective. Si Jiao and Si Jiao The family interaction between the heroines is very tender and warm. It magnifies the personal charm of Si Jiao and clearly explains the heroine's only safe haven in this crisis-ridden world. The author is also very friendly to the supporting characters and does not become a background for the heroine. Each one has a distinct and independent personality. This book is really highly recommended.

As soon as I opened this book, I was attracted by the content inside. The heroine has a very unique personality and pretends to put interests first. However, in getting along with her friends, she gradually understood the preciousness and value of friendship. In her interaction with Snape, she went from being wary at the beginning to opening her heart. The character creation She is flesh and blood, she has advantages and disadvantages, but her original intention to save Snape has never changed. Each character has its own distinct personality traits. The author's writing style is also great, and he is very careful in shaping the characters. Come on [love] [love] [top post] [top post] [top post]

It's really good to watch, especially the gradual development of Elvira and Snape's relationship, which is particularly delicately written. Then, Elvira became more and more lively under the nourishment of Snape's love, and learned to love herself and others. Moreover, Elvira was really, really smart and hard-working. Her goal is really clear, and she has been striving towards it. She has a career brain and can scheme against anyone except Snape for her career (I don't mean to say this bad, I like it anyway). The mutual suspicion and calculation between her and Dumbledore is also very well written, with many back and forths. The author also pays special attention to the details. Basically, there are pictures of important things, such as Elvira's wand, bracelet, and the design drawings of the club. The writing is really good and very good. I express my gratitude to the author (* ⁰̷̴͈꒨⁰̷̴͈)=͟͟͞͞➳❤, and I hope the author will not cheat. ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥

This is the first time I read a serious HP fanfic. It is really good-looking, especially good-looking. The heroine has ambitions and calculations unique to Slytherin. Although she is a disguised little sun, she actually shines with light and heat, affecting the people around her. She has the appeal, appeal and strength of a superior person. Whatever you do will be successful. "Family Love" is really easy to cry, I cried for several nights, it is easy and funny every day, but the author has been hiding clues in various corners, the father chapter is connected very well, and the knife is also very clever. The author is very lively and personable (bushi), and I often encounter him in the comments. The atmosphere in the comment area is very good. I hope that Nugoose and Sijiao can always be happy. They will not be busy in the future and can at least rest early. I hope the author will stop using the knife in the future, the child is stupid😭. Also, I really like George and Little Snake (George, don't be rude next time, hahaha, he was beaten). Everyone comes to see it, I guarantee you won't lose anything∽

It is very, very beautiful. I really recommend everyone to read this book. I feel that this book is written with great care. Moreover, this book has no CP. It focuses on a female protagonist who is beautiful alone and only has family affection. Really, I feel that every chapter of it hits my heart. I really like it and love to read it. I highly, very, highly recommend everyone to read it. Especially the part where memory is restored, it's really easy to empathize with. I really like that part very much. How can I put it? I personally think it's very beautiful. I highly recommend everyone to watch it.

I like it very much. I really like Avila's character. She also has a family relationship with Sri Lanka. She is really super friendly to me who doesn't like to fall in love with Sri Lanka. The author's wife is also very nice. She will update it from time to time. I hope this good book can be read by more people! ! ! Finally, I confess that the author loves you so much (｡ò ∀ ó｡)٩( 'ω' )و (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The book is really good, and the characters are very detailed. I started reading it with a low rating. I am just glad that I clicked it and read it. Now the rating changes every day and is growing every day.

This book is really, really good. I have been reading novels for 10 years, and this book is absolutely top-notch in terms of writing style and conceptual logic! Thanks to Somu Yi for letting me see a different HP. I have never read the original book, only the movie. This book feels like it makes every character in the movie richer! Especially the character Elvira. Every time I thought she was a little bit unbearable, the heroine always stayed calm and put interests first. I really admire this characteristic. There are also multiple IF lines. My favorite among them is Barty Jr. (The others are also very good!!!). It feels so good when two people are evenly matched and pull to the limit! There are a lot of foreshadowings in it, and the author should have written the outline a long time ago instead of writing bits and pieces. The whole text seems to be completely natural, very smooth, and everyone has flesh and blood! There really isn't any nonsense! The last thing I want to say is, don't put too much pressure on me. The book is very good and it takes a lot of effort to read. I am looking forward to the completion of this book as soon as possible [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! The author, you are so good at swordsmanship. The emotional line between Elvira and Snape really made me cry. The author is so thoughtful. I declare this is my favorite HP fanfic! I will definitely let more people read this book!

Gooooood! Recalling those chapters gave me the feeling of reading "Butterfly Storm" before. I highly recommend it. The writing is very good and the character description is just right. Unsurprisingly, there may be 9. Prophecy of success

The family relationship between Si Jiao and sister Bao is very delicate! ! ! ! ! ! Many of the buried holes have been filled! ! ! The writing style is free-spirited, but a bit sharp! ! ! This is the fifth HP fanfic I've read. I haven't finished the previous ones. I've been reading this one for three days and tied it with more than 400 chapters. [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] The update speed is very fast and the writing is very delicate. I accidentally clicked on it and read the introduction. I was a little interested. I thought of reading more than 400 chapters in anger, and the description of my sister's growth is smooth and smooth, not abrupt at all. It is really my favorite HP fanfic [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]. It is the same as this one that has no similar type of novel. It was so painful to read (இдஇ; ), I hope to update Chapter 10 [Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute][Salute] (I would like to ask if there is anyone who describes the appearance and clothing of the younger sister and would like to make a date)

This book is a bit sharp, overall it's funny, and it's super good to read. It's best to pay more attention to the foreshadowing, there are a lot. The heroine has brains and ambition, Snape is the father, no CP, family and career line. The characters are almost non-ooc, and it is a rare good book. The only shortcoming for me is that it is not finished. All the author's books are very interesting, and the heroine's brain is super smart. It has been on the bookshelf for more than 200 days, and I have been following it for more than 200 days. It's so good. You'll have to thank me for reading it. Such a good book is worth reading.

How can I put it this way? The novel is very good and I feel it is comparable to the original work. I watched the movie (currently I'm editing the original novel), so I found some parts incomprehensible and even incomprehensible. But when I saw the completely different aspects from the original work in the writing of Mr. Kusaki Oto, I suddenly realized that this was actually the case. Mr. Kusaki Oto's writing style is so good that I didn't give up the article after reading more than a dozen chapters. Because all the characters written by the teacher attracted me, especially Elvira. Elvira is like a weed, tough, tenacious, and full of vitality. Although Elvira's interests come first, she unknowingly showed her sincerity to her friends. At first, I cried because of this episode. I think "everything is like a chess game, and all the tricks are calculated" fits Elvira very well, just like Avella used all means and methods for the death of Severus to prevent him from the tragic ending in the original work. Also, Kusaki O-sensei is the best writer I have ever seen among HP fans (only in my personal opinion). He will write the most appropriate experiences of Barty Jr., Severus' childhood and school days based on the movies and original works. To be honest, the teacher touched me the most when he wrote about Xiaoduo's childhood. I had read a few articles about Xiaoduo's childhood when I was playing literary games before, but I think the teacher wrote it more deeply. In it, Old Nott's coldness (?) And transformation, as well as Recy's deep love for Xiaoduo and Old Nott, made my eyes shine again and again, and the portrayal was particularly good.

It's very, very good-looking, the pace is not sluggish, and the heroine's image is also very full, mainly because it does not lower the IQ of everyone except the virgin heroine. The heroine's personality is also very distinct. Anyway, thousands of words can be combined into one sentence. It's very good-looking.

Highly recommended, every foreshadowing is laid out very well, every hole is filled in, the teacher really loves the heroine in her works, and she doesn't learn the details very well, please come on! ! ! !

Da Da Da really writes super delicately and the writing style is very good🥹🥹🥹. In Da Da Da's writing, each character has his own setting and his own highlights! 🥰🥰🥰😍😍Rather than binding the protagonist group to time travellers, and not deliberately planning some characters and deliberately touting some characters (actually, I have seen that kind of pure snake academy that portrays the protagonist group not very well😂, it's not that they wrote it badly, but deliberately vilified some characters, I think It's not very friendly to individual viewers, and Dumbledore has become a bad guy. I think there are no simple good guys and bad guys in Harry Potter, and this article is really well written [love] [love] [love] [love]) The knives at the back are also very sad, But I also said that the final ending is good, and there is no cp in the main text, and there are only some endings in the extra chapters. I like this setting very much, especially this article allows me to see a Severus and the heroine baby that are different from other fan fiction authors and the original work. 😙😙, And I really can't stand the thought of reshooting the movie or finding a black person😅😅😅😂😂[Stare][Stare][Stare][Stare][Smile][Smile] The producers of that kind of movie should just let all the fan fiction fans go and make it, it will definitely be well received.

Hp: A smiling snake comes from the east At first, I was attracted by the pretense in the copywriting, but later I discovered that the heroine has a super charming personality. She will set up different personas for different people to gain favor, and by establishing a foundation of public favor, the subsequent situation will be beneficial to her. (When I thought the heroine was the weak one, I discovered that the heroine's inner core was terrifyingly strong, so I thought the heroine was white and black, but later I found out that the heroine should be white and black.) The description of family affection is particularly good, especially the part about recovering memories that moved me to death. The heroine originally set up her character to please others in order to save herself, but as they got along later, the two of them really became each other's only sincere relatives (family members can guess who it is) The friendship aspect is also very good. Whether it is Harry, Hermione, the Weasley twins, Draco, Pansy, Daphne, or the four Peeves, the heroine is different in everyone's eyes, especially Draco and Pansy. I think the heroine has a more special meaning in their hearts. The author said that the main text will not have a clear CP, but will be written in extras according to fans' requests. What needs to be avoided is that the heroine is a firm believer in family supremacy. This is very similar to the Draco family. She will really pursue and kill anyone who hurts the heroine's only family (this makes the family line more touching). Therefore, from the heroine's perspective, the four school bullies of the previous generation are not good people.

I've followed hundreds of chapters, it's so interesting and I love reading it! ! The heroine Avila's character is very special to me! ! Courageous, resourceful, hard-working, and a very good girl! ! Because I am an outsider, I don't know who the author of the original work is, but my impression of this book is very, very good. I want to challenge the author's reputation! ! ! ! ——Elvira I love you—— I think the description of Malfoy here is a very cute child. Under the leadership of Elvira, he has grown up little by little and his mind has begun to change. The most important thing is that he can explode gold coins! ! ! But, now that I see it, I still can't understand the daily communication style of the threesome (someone must have seen my comment, it's purely subjective and not malicious, comrades). People outside the circle don't understand it, but just pretend they haven't seen it. . . (I learned something that is even more unacceptable that Ron and Hermione are actually together, I...) Maybe because in reality, I am the class leader like Hermione who keeps the secrets and earns points for the class, so when I see Ron and others, I feel emm. (Sorry it may have offended some Ron chefs) The aftermath of purely realistic feelings. . Oh, and I really hate that divination class teacher. (Sorry for this pure malice, please exit if you don't like it, thank you) Again, super well written! ! ! Recommended! ! ! ! Author I love you! Elvira I love you! Hermione I love you! (I think if I read the original work, I would be 100% like Hermione Cook... Duwei kind of person (^.^))

Super pretty! The perfect little Slytherin wizard! He is a smart, powerful, and unscrupulous character who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. Super touching! The hostess set up the three-dimensional scene, and there was a section in the early stage where I really cried! It's touching and heart-warming, I really cried because of the knife! [Crying] It's so well written! It's all foreshadowing [Like]

It can be seen from each article how much the author loves and is satisfied with his protagonist Elvira. Of course, we can also see from the small details in the article that the China described by the author is prosperous and diverse. The heroine, whether she is Wang Mu in real life or Elvira in the magical world, is excellent, both in appearance and quality, and has her own characteristics. The character descriptions and dialogues in the book are also more realistic, rather than being uniform and featureless. The author has worked very hard to produce many excellent works. At the same time, he will also take time to reply to the comments of readers, making every detail of the article and many foreshadowings more reasonable! At the same time, as a reader, I can be more immersed in the situation and observe it carefully, and I hope the author can write better works. ([Congratulations] Although I have only read a few hundred pages, [There are many small foreshadowings laid by the author in the article, so in order to avoid leakage, I will wait for you to take a closer look [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]], but I still have to give it a five-star recommendation to all the babies in the HP circle. I hope you can like it. Of course, this is also an affirmation of the author! Come on, great author!