One Piece: The Black Tortoise Subdues the Sea

There may still be some minor flaws, so why not join the navy and at least ask the World Government for help and create an identity? If you are vague, you will not be allowed into the training camp. You will have to be evaluated for at least a year and a half. If Peach Rabbit wants to accept it, she must at least give her a good devil fruit. Also, the update problem is too slow. I originally had to deduct one star, but I think about it.

Very beautiful, so powerful. The Xuanwu Fruit is so awesome. After 3 and a half years of training, you can beat an adult. You don't need the resources of a Celestial Dragon to go straight to a deserted island to practice. It's so powerful. The writing is awesome.

See Chapter 134. It's a very good work so far, but I don't understand why the rating is so low? From the perspective of the second creation of One Piece, this book not only respects the original work, but also has its own reasonable private settings, which can at least convince me, an old fan. The protagonist is invincible, the writing is cool, and the story is fast-paced. So far, it's very enjoyable to watch. The identity of the Tianlong people and the objective analysis are indeed more realistic and reasonable. Especially in the world set by the author, there is no so-called way of heaven and fate, and everything can be changed through personal hard work. This is also in line with the Chinese philosophy. Therefore, in such a world, the world government's rule has reasonable motives, and the existence of the Celestial Dragons is no longer a heinous crime. Therefore, the protagonist's desire to change the world is not a pure and ideal Datong society. From this point of view, it is infinitely better than those authors who start from dreams. At least this book has realistic theoretical support and starting point. There are also disadvantages. The overall pace of this book is relatively weak. The author's focus and perspective are all focused on the protagonist, leaving us with almost no impression of the other characters in the book. The characterization is also relatively shallow. Except for the protagonist and a few important characters, the other characters have no personality charm. In addition, the starting point is too high-end. At 18 years old, you are standing at the top of the world. The subsequent battles should not be interesting. The only remaining ones are the operations of how to subvert the world, so there will be a lot less fun in terms of highlights. I gave it five stars because I think this work deserves the score. Although it is not a top-notch one, it is one of the better and newer works I have seen in the past few years. Good ideas, good writing, and good stories need encouragement.

. It feels pretty good. Please encourage the new author. It happens to be the first few books I read. The writing style is still a bit childish, but it's pretty good for a first book. The subject matter is very good. The black basalt fruit is also a rare one in One Piece articles. Good luck to the author. I've been following it for half a month, it's really good

Does the author have a female protagonist? If so, is it Gion?

It looks good and suits me very well. It has a single heroine and no emotional line, so it's good

It's a very good book, especially the first chapter written by the author. Who hasn't fantasized about writing a novel in high school? Support and support 😘

The book is quite good, but can you change the cover? I feel like this cover is discouraging too many people.

It's pretty good, but the setting is a little different from the original.

When I think I can harvest the sky and moon, the Toki Fruit is very powerful and can help the protagonist develop time-related abilities. The most important thing is that Momonosuke must die.