[Pokémon fandom + initial Sinnoh region + rebirth] (Pre-viewing tip: no system and golden finger + mixed game and anime world view, please do not bring it into the game completely.) A family with super powers was reborn in the Sinnoh region by accident, and won the championship with his childhood friend Eevee, and reached the top! You said that the protagonist has no lower limit and the tactics are disgusting? That's right!
Reader comments
After briefly reading it, I think there are two shortcomings of this article. The first is that Ah Shun's role has no sense of existence. Even if it is deleted, it will not have much impact on the article and the character image cannot be created. The second is that there are too few twists and turns in the article. I feel that the author's writing is a bit simplistic. Another small problem is that it is interspersed with memes from the Internet, and it is interspersed. It's not so natural, which leads to a weak sense of substitution. In layman's terms, it's too dimensional. If it can be changed, for example, by giving Ah Zun a complete growth line and turning the article into a dual-protagonist mode, where the two interact with each other and grow, the above problems can be better solved. As for the issue of memes, I suggest not to write about it. In short, cheers for the author [Like]
After briefly reading it, I think there are two shortcomings of this article. The first is that Ah Shun's role has no sense of existence. Even if it is deleted, it will not have much impact on the article and the character image cannot be created. The second is that there are too few twists and turns in the article. I feel that the author's writing is a bit simplistic. Another small problem is that it is interspersed with memes from the Internet, and it is interspersed. It's not so natural, which leads to a weak sense of substitution. In layman's terms, it's too dimensional. If it can be changed, for example, by giving Ah Zun a complete growth line and turning the article into a dual-protagonist mode, where the two interact with each other and grow, the above problems can be better solved. As for the issue of memes, I suggest not to write about it. In short, cheers for the author [Like]