I Met a Cool, Aloof Young Diva, Then Flirted Her into Falling for Me

After reading the first few chapters, the author's character descriptions are very good, the plot is good, and the writing is okay. It is a book that can be read. The author hurriedly updated it and came back to comment again after reading it👀 The author's writing is pretty good, keep up the good work, but the updates are a bit slow. 😫

It's a very interesting novel, but I don't understand why no one has read it. The heroine Lin Qingxue is very well described and on point. I like this kind of comfortable life story and the plot is not cliche. [Shy][shy][shy]

Isn't the male protagonist a succubus? [Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] Is it multi-female or single? There are so many categories in the introduction and list. Most of the women in the book like the male protagonist. I can't figure it out.

Li's line is better written than Lin's line, and the logic is there. Compared with Li Lai, Lin's line is more empty and ideal. If Chen's line is the separation between the male protagonist and his former self after time travel, then the appearance of Li is the male protagonist becoming himself after time traveling. But in the latest chapter, I actually don't agree with this plot setting. For the character Li, there is no need for a man to lead her out, and she does not need love. In fact, the biggest failure of Qin's line is the introduction of love (of course, the death part is really well written). There is more than love between men and women, life is not only love, and life is not only love. There should not be a woman who just likes the male protagonist. Therefore, it is completely unnecessary for Wei to join. Qin's handling can actually turn friendship into family affection. Therefore, the shaping of the character of Li should be based on the mistakes she made when she was with the male protagonist in her youth, to become a girl who can truly handle her own life well, instead of introducing a man into her life to redeem her or something like that. This looks down upon girls and people. So there is nothing much to say about the character Lin, it is completely an idealized treatment in the novel. There's nothing wrong with that. Come on, author, I hope you can really write something valuable that is close to life. I hope the author can get back to me (I really want to ask what the initial design of this character looks like). The male protagonist design looks a little weird to me.

The author's writing is super good, I love it. It suits my taste very well. The beauties are all written very well. They are beautiful and beautiful. [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]. I hope the author will persevere and finish writing, and the writing will be beautiful. Don't worry about the temporary results. Come on!

Male Succubus Many women like the protagonist

Big boost to the author 💪

Thank you for your comments. You are welcome to express your opinions after watching it. The author is a mature author and can accept criticism! I also think this book is worth reading. It is not stupid, the plot is novel, and it is well written! There is not such a bloody plot. Regarding your opinions and suggestions, this book can no longer be changed. I can only change it in the next book [face covering]

I read it for two days and wrote it very well. I like relaxed daily writing.

Very good, for me