I'm a Black Beard

Let's just say that the child in my cousin's family feels like he has been reborn. My cousin is from Wuhan. She has been married for 7 years and has always wanted a child. The health of both of them has been checked and both are fine, and local methods have also been used. She just wasn't pregnant, so I found an old Taoist priest behind me. The Taoist priest took a look and He said that he was destined to have a child and was waiting for it. Then last fall, I finally got pregnant. Everyone in the family is happy now. Food and drink are good and they are taken care of. I made it two days ago. Color Doppler ultrasound revealed that the child had abnormalities, and his mouth and nose were constantly moving. All kinds of tests were done, but no cause could be found. Later, I found an old man Traditional Chinese medicine, the old Chinese doctor said that this child had something on his mind in his previous life, but his mouth was actually Keep talking. Later, I found a professional to watch the color Doppler ultrasound video. While recording the mouth shape, I know what the child said: "Update quickly." When will it be updated? Hurry up! Hurry up! !

The writing is very good, but the protagonist's strength at the beginning is already very high, and it feels difficult to break the million-word mark. At present, the plot is not falling apart and is very smooth, but I feel that it is a bit problematic to keep writing and teasing Blackbeard. What is better is to write a lot of the inner struggle of the protagonist whether to leave the white group, to pave the way for the future.

The writing is okay, and the description of One Piece is also good. However, the author's protagonist's behavior is logically chaotic, and his animality is greater than his humanity. Similar to Kaido, he insists on making himself the enemy of the world. The pirate novel I remember most is "The Pirate Code". The protagonist William's charisma makes me want to read it a second time after reading it once. As for this book, you can read it, but you may forget it after reading it.

Whitebeard: My ten thousand silks are family, whoever touches them will die, Roger? He is not good, I appreciate him, even if he killed my son, he is still my good friend, I should attack my good son with my friends, hahahahaha

It's very awesome. I can only say that it doesn't conform to the mainstream values. But I want to say that in a world like this, force controls everything. It's right for the protagonist to put everything he has into pursuing what he wants. The author is so awesome that it touched my heart. Come on.

It is very realistic, and the personality and ideals of the protagonist are written out. The domineering character of self-centeredness and the power of Whitebeard to protect the love of his family are very vividly displayed. This is the real world of pirates. Please update it quickly and look forward to the following content.

The update is slow and I'm not happy. Shanks is gone and I'm not happy. My personal suggestion for the follow-up is that Roger is gone. After the protagonist takes revenge, he has gone through some things and can become a normal person. After all, One Piece is flesh and blood. Be more aggressive in the early stage, and be more x-y in the later stage. Be more stable and feel the One Piece. It's okay to let the main story run for 500 chapters. Walk slowly. If you go too fast, you may run out of things to write. There are too many charming stories about the main characters, such as the drinking party where you met Whitebeard, such as paving the way for the main line, and establishing your own island country. There are too many things to write.

The phantom beast I grabbed must be the Yamata no Orochi. It has eight heads and eight hearts, which makes sense. If I write further, I would like to make some suggestions. The author hopes to listen to them. He will set the protagonist as a user with eight devil fruit abilities, learn from the eight magical skills of the alien next door, and simplify and modify them: The Dark Dark Fruit extracts other fruits, Surgical Fruit Immortality Surgery, Yamata no Orochi Fruit divides the soul into eight, Soul Soul Fruit divides and stabilizes the soul, and the Thunder Fruit activates the body, and can also divide the body into eight independent areas. There is also the supplementary Tun Tun Fruit, which is a special swallowing oneself, which is simply a plus version of Life Return. The original Five Old Stars will age slowly if they don't spend all their lifespan. The Tun Tun Fruit can replenish the weaknesses. The last of the eight fruits can fill up a space. The fruit can expand to all the worlds and open storage space, or other regular fruits can also be used. In addition, because the physique of the doctor protagonist can be selected from the ghost race, Oz giant, fish man, Bakania, and Neptune (this one is available), the Celestial Dragon bloodline can also be expanded into the key to the ancient weapon King (written in a novel), the Lunaria race is okay, but it seems a lot useless due to the flying ability Thunder Fruit, and the ability of the green "flying dragon" in the original work to turn into a stone statue and be reborn can appear as a foreshadowing after death. If you have a short-term physique, you can choose a fishman and transplant the gills to your body. It will be the only way to return to the fishman island in the new world. Finally, I sincerely wish this author's novels to become popular, come on! ! !

This book is indeed outstanding among Pirates fics. If the number of words and plot reaches a million words, to be honest, it can compete with Farmer Sanquan [Like] (I have read most of the fics on the market, and this one is truly worth recommending) [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

This is Pirates, but the title of the book is a bit bad. It can be expanded according to Yeager. There is no need for Blackbeard or he can be Blackbeard himself.

The correct way to open the world of pirates is to kill decisively without leaving any consequences, a killing machine without emotions, everything is only for the strongest, and only for a carefree and free life. (Ruthless, but choose the right one)

It's a good-looking book, there are no system plug-ins, and the main character's name fits the One Piece world. It's a good-looking book.

The madman who pursues ultimate freedom and power has found his own meaning, and his upper limit will be unlimited. I personally rate this book very highly Reason 1: The world of pirates is like the big fish eating the small fish. The strong make the rules and the weak follow the rules. The second reason is that in the sea, in this world, it is about will, and the protagonist is chasing the ultimate freedom, and it is a perfect fit. Reason 3, I talked about one point, which is very good, that is, I am weak and follow the rules. I use the rules to find my own way, then explore, and then discover. However, I found real freedom after leaving the pirate group, and found the freedom to be above the world. But what I also want to say is that you do not have the freedom to be above the world. You have not transcended the rules of time. Nothing is transcendent. The real freedom is my destiny. I can't help but truly control myself inside and out, and understand myself.

I think your content can be ranked in the top three of these fan fictions I have read. It's great. Keep it up👏

Why was the other book of Yeager taken off the shelves?

The author writes well. Maybe the main character isn't particularly likable. The score is not high. But the writing is really good.

It looks good, but I could use fewer adjectives. I feel like the adjectives take up a lot of space. The content of the battle is very watery and a bit unbearable🤦

With three hearts and the physical fitness tempered by the Thunder Fruit, once you get the Dark Fruit, you will become an enhanced version of Blackbeard.

It was frustrating at first, but now it's getting better, pirates just want to do whatever they want

It's really great. All concepts in the world of One Piece are distorted, so what is the so-called justice?

If you are ambitious, you can take a look

Be yourself, stick to yourself, super cool [cool]

One of the few good things about One Piece is that the updates are too slow. If it's so slow, it's a one-star negative review [star]

I've read a lot of Pirates fanfics and yours is the best. Let's update soon. Let's see what you write next. Join Blackbeard?

It's okay, it's just a pity that Whitebeard

This is the pirate I want. Lawless. No rules. My rules are the rules.

I really enjoyed watching Killing Decisiveness, but I don't know when I can create my own pirate group.

It's cool. When you become a pirate, you shouldn't have any thoughts of living. Asshole, being a pirate is not a game of house.

Okay, but the writing of Roger is a little too strong.

It looks good but has some shortcomings. I can accept that the writing at the end is better than the beginning.