Star Railroad: the Order of Nothingness Also Wants to Be the Protagonist!

Five stars for encouragement, the writing is quite good, although there are some flaws, but overall the flaws are not concealed, but I personally feel that it would be better to improve some aspects. In terms of combat power: the ten people in Shixin were given ten pieces of power as the order history by Diamond. As the envoy of Nothingness, Yuan Yuan could slap those 10 people to death even if he was only 8 years old. It was precisely because he could not control his power that he caused more damage. Also in Xianzhou, the weapons and power given by the two star gods (four to be precise) were still incapable of death. In terms of plot: The protagonist is the group favorite, right? Is it a little inappropriate for the protagonist to be bullied but turn a blind eye to the person who bullied the protagonist? There are also wheat ears given by the abundance, and the light cones given by the memory may have other plans by the author. I originally guessed that they were used to save Bai Zhan, but I guessed wrong. There are still five people. Now it depends on how the author Tongxi writes it, but I feel that the author is planning to write a gloomy group pet article

@-Sama's dog While it's still early, I just want to discuss it with you, the author, and make some suggestions. I just feel like, even though the protagonist is the darling of the group, I always feel a bit aggrieved while watching it. When Wu Lu fought with the protagonist, three star gods came, but no one liked him. It's just a waste of time for the protagonist to be angry (I think the protagonist is angry!). I am the protagonist's control. So sometimes can we add a little more plot where the Star God supports the protagonist, or the kind of description that makes others shocked when they know the background of the protagonist. A little more, otherwise, what is this background used for? Are you at a disadvantage? Life would be too boring if you didn't pretend to be cool! The highest level of pretense is pretense, the kind that you are unaware of [laughing evilly][eating melon] In summary, I hope the author can add more star gods to support the protagonist, and also include scenes where the protagonist is shocked when others know his identity! [Blowing kiss]

This is my first time reading a book by multiple star gods, and you don't have to worry about those messy timelines. The author is also very active and obedient. The protagonist is very cute, and I am full of expectations for this book.

Great writing! I still want to see Yuan Yuan in the void, is that okay? Can it be done? Can it be done? Hello! I'm back again! The more you write this, the better. Come on! I'm optimistic about you! Great author! See what's great now from the beginning, okay? I can be considered an "old player" of this book, right?

Come on, author, it's not enough, woo woo woo.

It's the favorite article of the Star God Group! ! ! Like

Oh, I didn't rate it [Thinking]

You can follow up on the plot and develop it around the plot, plus the Star God group's pet. If the writing is good, you can add the effect of live barrage

It's a bit like a prequel to a favorite novel about the Celestial Gods.

The most supportive episode for the author

It's quite interesting. If the author interacts more with the readers, there might be more people.

Pretty good looking so far

Will the author write about Hanabi? [Sending Hearts]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking!

Beautiful, so beautiful.

It's really beautiful and worth checking out.

So fun! Being pampered by the Star Gods! Hope it won't be interrupted. You hope not to enter the dark room. I hope the author writes sweeter

Abba Abba, I want a book club

Keep it up, author [laughs]

The protagonist can be defined as the "daughter" of the tree (the tree is the tree of imaginary numbers). The "daughter" of the imaginary number

Very interesting, I hope the author will continue to work hard

I've been reading this book for a long time! Feels good looking

Ness, Ness, Ness

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

This nothingness is not that nothingness, it looks good [face covering] [OK]

No one commented? It's quite beautiful.

The writing is very nice, please keep working hard and don't stop updating. Thank you so much for the food. This food is as exciting as seeing a glass of water in the desert~

Yes, it can be a bit boring in the early stages but can be read as a daily article.

It's pretty cool, I'm a little curious about what happens next.

Beautiful, love watching. I almost forgot to rate [face covering] [face covering]