Figure Skating: The Making of a Champion

Concise and clear, excessively smooth. Although the writing feels a little stiff, the narrative is still very clear. A little suggestion, it feels like I am not writing a novel, but an essay - some descriptions are not natural. The details are not adequate. This book mainly talks about the heroine's continuous efforts to finally achieve her dream. In other words, the main line of the novel is that the heroine's figure skating skills grow step by step and she is honed in various competitions. But the one school I have written so far seems to have written too much, and it seems that the same is true in some useless details. But the author needs to work hard! Regardless, I think this book has great potential! The above is just my own selfishness. If it offends me, please send my heartfelt condolences.