Figure skating
Bai Wanlin is a girl who came to Kyoto from a small town. No one was optimistic about her before she entered the adult group. In front of her is her senior sister who is a world champion and is favored by everyone. She has no coach's favor and no relatives to accompany her. She only has herself, chasing her dreams alone. From being no one to becoming an Olympic champion step by step, let's see how she goes.
Reader comments
Concise and clear, excessively smooth. Although the writing feels a little stiff, the narrative is still very clear. A little suggestion, it feels like I am not writing a novel, but an essay - some descriptions are not natural. The details are not adequate. This book mainly talks about the heroine's continuous efforts to finally achieve her dream. In other words, the main line of the novel is that the heroine's figure skating skills grow step by step and she is honed in various competitions. But the one school I have written so far seems to have written too much, and it seems that the same is true in some useless details. But the author needs to work hard! Regardless, I think this book has great potential! The above is just my own selfishness. If it offends me, please send my heartfelt condolences.
Concise and clear, excessively smooth. Although the writing feels a little stiff, the narrative is still very clear. A little suggestion, it feels like I am not writing a novel, but an essay - some descriptions are not natural. The details are not adequate. This book mainly talks about the heroine's continuous efforts to finally achieve her dream. In other words, the main line of the novel is that the heroine's figure skating skills grow step by step and she is honed in various competitions. But the one school I have written so far seems to have written too much, and it seems that the same is true in some useless details. But the author needs to work hard! Regardless, I think this book has great potential! The above is just my own selfishness. If it offends me, please send my heartfelt condolences.