My Little Pony: Begins in the Everfree Forest

It's very good. It's great that the actions or looks of the original owners who play the characters with various anime items can be reproduced. However, it is still recommended that the protagonist can participate more in the plot and help m6 and them make some changes. Otherwise, it will not be fun. Discord should not be written as too powerful. This is exaggerated by those netizens. If the protagonist has an owner of an object that is more powerful than Discord, just finish the game, and you will come and still want to run away! There are no doors! If the author writes well after Fan Zheng, some readers may say that they are not allowed to leave the pony world in the future. If they insist on leaving, leave a world coordinate for Fan Zheng to play. Who knows if there will be other items that can play the role of the original owner.

The plot is okay, but the emotional scenes feel like there are multiple female leads, and the host can also be given some flexibility. After all, Rourou's part must be collected. [Thinking] Very well written. I originally wanted to say that you could summon the skeleton, but you couldn't summon Susanoto, but you explained it again. If the power is not enough, then I can't say anything. But some skills are also hidden. For example, the art of transformation.

Author, if I remember correctly, Nightmare Moon appeared at this time and the three cute little ones didn't know each other yet. There is a bug here, but you can look at it as a parallel world [face covering] [thinking]

Give yourself a five-star rating for your own book, but that's not too much.

You horse-harnessing man is mighty and majestic [laughing evilly] [admiration]

First of all, the subject matter is good and the content is very good, but the language that intersperses the third perspective and the first perspective, especially "Lu Feng" and "I", can always be mixed together. One moment it is "Lu Feng" and another moment it is "I". This is a deduction point. The author can filter and pay attention to it before posting. Overall it can be around 8-9 points

The book is very good, I don't see any shortcomings so far

When are you going to write about gay gays? I want to see the protagonist save the world. After all, the protagonist's ability is only suitable for saving gay gays and has almost no use in the main plot [face covering] [OK]

You must keep writing it!

Well, it's pretty good, but the author likes to stop updating!

The protagonist is decisive, moves without losing his mind, has high emotional intelligence, and is strong without being too supermodel.

Awesome, very good, come on author

Come on [Sending Hearts] We must take Rourou away and crush Disorder [sneaky laugh]

Okay, no poisonous points. (Puppet)

I hope it ends smoothly [laughs] I like it very much

Why is Nani so short?

Very good, Xiao Mawen

Won the Easter match

Be sure to write it down!

Come on! Unknown author

I am a horse fan, please support me

Very beautiful, I want the moon [laughing evilly] [OK]

My Little Pony's Wonderful Works

The writing is beautiful, author, come on^ω^

Thank you to the author for such a warm and heartwarming writing style. I am looking forward to the follow-up.