Douluo Dalu: The Demon Guardian

The plot is actually quite good. It can be seen in the book that the author has written it based on the original plot. The changes are reasonable and can also reflect the image of the new characters created by the author. I think this is good. However, based on some comments and my own feelings, I really feel that Tang Lian's character is too cowardly, and even the damage he suffered in his previous life would not make him like this. Since he could become a prince in his previous life and make his younger brother afraid of him, I think he would never be this weak and incompetent. However, the above is just my little opinion on the character. If you think it is wrong, you can ignore it. Here, I would like to give some suggestions. If Tang Lian's character is really finalized now, then I think she should make changes in the later stage. She should not be too feminine or too dependent on others, and she must have the ability to protect herself. I think if the status quo is maintained, some readers may abandon the book. The main thing is these. The plot is quite good, and the characters will be more attractive if the characters are changed. [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] Come on, keep writing, keep changing to attract more readers, come on😄😄❤️ @ You can adopt the poor suggestion of the minister, or you can not adopt it.

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I cried when I read it. I highly recommend it. It's really great, but it's too short. The character's personality is very distinct and it doesn't fall apart. I really like the character design. It's written in big letters. It's just a bit short. Give it a try.

I feel like the protagonist is too weak. Even Dai Mubai was not as good as before.

It's beautiful. I'm in love all the time. But will there be a scene of sacrifice later? Isn't it bad if the relationship goes too smoothly😏 No, why is the book blocked😢There are many other fans with high scores, so why haven't they been blocked😢😢😢

Dear friends, if the score is too high or too low, the book will be blocked. And the author, I beg you, can you update it twice a day? If it really doesn't work, just updating once a day will do. I'm already honest, please continue to update😢😢😢😢😢 Three points is enough

It's very good, but there are a few too few, so please try to update more! 😘 😘 😘 As long as you don't die, I'll fight to the death [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart]

It's so beautiful, but I'm afraid of being blocked, so I still give it the highest score 😄😄😄 Recommended 👍👍👍

The emotional scene is a bit embarrassing

The author should update quickly. Someone is reading your book. I am almost waiting to die. The update is too slow 🥺 🥺