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The plot is actually quite good. It can be seen in the book that the author has written it based on the original plot. The changes are reasonable and can also reflect the image of the new characters created by the author. I think this is good. However, based on some comments and my own feelings, I really feel that Tang Lian's character is too cowardly, and even the damage he suffered in his previous life would not make him like this. Since he could become a prince in his previous life and make his younger brother afraid of him, I don't think he would be this weak and incompetent. However, the above is just my little opinion on the character. If you think it is wrong, you can ignore it. Here, I would like to give some suggestions. If Tang Lian's character is really finalized now, then I think she should make changes in the later stage. She should not be too feminine or too dependent on others, and she must have the ability to protect herself. I think if the status quo is maintained, some readers may abandon the book. The main thing is these. The plot is quite good, and the characters will be more attractive if the characters are changed. [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript] Come on, keep writing. Constant changes can attract more readers. Come on [laugh][laugh][love] @ You can adopt the poor suggestion of the minister, or you can choose not to adopt it.

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I cried when I read it. I highly recommend it. It's really great, but it's too short. The character's personality is very distinct and it doesn't fall apart. I really like the character design. It's written in big letters. It's just a bit short. Give it a try.

Dear friends, if the score is too high or too low, the book will be blocked. And the author, I beg you, can you update it twice a day? If it really doesn't work, just updating once a day will do. I'm already honest, please continue to update [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Three points is enough

It's beautiful. I'm in love all the time. But will there be a scene of sacrifice later? Isn't it bad if the relationship goes too smoothly [laughs evilly] No, why is the book blocked [crying] There are many other fans with high scores, so why is it not blocked [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's very good, but there are a few too few, so please try to update more! [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] As long as you don't die, I'll fight to the death [Send your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart]

The author should update quickly. Someone is reading your book. I am almost waiting to die. The update is too slow [almost crying] [grieved]

It's good to read, but the author hasn't followed you for three days.·´¯`(>▂<)´¯`·.

It looks good, keep up the good work, can you add a little aggression to the little lotus to protect yourself? [Crying][Please pay attention][Please pay attention][Please pay attention][Please pay attention]

It is definitely the one that suits my taste the most among the Douluo Dalu fanfics I have read. It's really, really, really good. I hope I won't stop updating it in the future.

I think it's very interesting. In the novel, Jiang Yan is very fond of Xiao Lianhua and is very sweet. I like it very much, but this is just my idea. I hope Jiang Yan can have a good ending with Xiao Lianhua, and I also hope that the author can update it more! Score it down, it looks good

It's beautiful. I hope the little lotus can have some ability to protect itself.

I won't split the official version, the plot hasn't changed much, it's very sweet, just savor it for yourself [shy]

Not bad, very pretty

Not bad, but could the protagonist be a little stronger? Does Little Lotus have no ability to protect herself at all?

I love you so much, you are so beautiful [pinch][pitch][pinch]

It's super cool, I hope the author will continue to work hard! I got a score

It's very beautiful, but there is one big drawback - there are too few. Come on [blow a kiss]

It's so beautiful, the author is so awesome, please update it quickly [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Woohoo, why can't I publish this book? I'm sorry, because I found out that he wouldn't let me recommend this book.

Tang Lian is written very weakly and a bit delicate, but still beautiful (personal opinion)

So pretty, so pretty

The writing is so good, I recommend it

Very nice! Can be flushed! ! ! ! !

Five-star praise haha

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

There are some mistakes that the author needs to correct, but this book is also good.

I like it, but the author can update it quickly, please.

It's really beautiful. I hope the author can work harder. It's beautiful, but it needs to be scored

Okay, okay, very nice￣ ￣)σ is really nice (`Van´)