A Lone White Rabbit,

It's so beautiful, why are so few people watching it? There are few comments? This is one of the few good books I've read in Tomato. It's not the kind of mindless cuteness, mindless love, mindless protagonist halo, the kind where everyone will fall in love with the protagonist.

I don't know why, but it's just tiring to watch. The author described a lot of characters' clothing and appearance in the early stage. There are very few plot points, and some of them are not coherent. The preface does not match the follow-up. If you have a dream, just write it. Moreover, in some places it is obvious that one person is speaking, and later it is stated that it is someone else. Just make a mistake once or twice, and it happens in every chapter. I can't understand the plot at all. This book is suitable for listening to a book while sleeping without using your brain at all. I give four points because I think the author can complete the story and write so much. I encourage him and hope he can improve in the future.

Come on!

It's okay so far, but there are some typos and the lack of segmentation makes it hard to read. Also, the characters' names don't match up. I suggest you revise the text. Overall, it's okay. If you don't revise the text, it always feels weird in many places when you read it. You need to manually adjust the sentences and plot in your mind.

It's very beautiful and the writing is very good!!!! Maybe the introduction and title are not attractive enough

White Rabbit is so cute, the plot is also very good, and the writing is good. It's really gold found in tomatoes🤓

I like it, I will always keep it

I read the last one, but the synopsis for this one says it has about a million words. It's too painful to follow the update. I'll keep it up for a while 🤦🤦🤦

Good looking 💕💕💕

I like it, very pretty