别人练武，我八九玄功，肉身成圣

I came to comment after seeing Chapter 16. Simply put, this book is super nice [like][like] The protagonist is not brainless at all, for example: - I was sure I had a golden finger, so I didn't watch it at all at first. I killed my parents to develop my destiny as a child of destiny~ - He knew from Golden Finger that an enemy was coming, and he was also tough, which is in line with the fate of the Destined Child~ - He is also a straight man operating on his childhood sweetheart, which is in line with the fate of the Destined Child~ Highly recommend five stars! ! ! ! Super pretty! ! ! Come and see everyone! !

This is not a mindless novel. Every character has flesh and blood, and their personalities have their own characteristics. Although the protagonist is usually a bit unreliable, he can still resist things when he encounters them. The front is a bit frustrating and angry, but maybe this is life. I have read too many novels about smooth sailing and crushing all the way, so it is good to change my taste. After a break of several months, I finished reading it today. It feels like a lifetime has passed.

The emotional lines of the characters are drawn very well. It can be said to be a cool article, or it can be said to be not a cool article. Although we can see the future in the diary, the protagonist still has many troubles, which is more relevant to life and daily life. You don't need to lose your brain to read it. Only by reading it with your brain can you discover the wonderfulness of this book.

It is definitely an underrated book. The author is very three-dimensional in characterization. You will find that every character is very distinct. Even if it is a supporting role, the author can write it very vividly with just a few strokes. Secondly, the writing style is really delicate, especially during the time in college, you can really feel the flavor of youth from it. This is also my favorite writing style. This is very different from the heroic work in the later period. The author cleverly blends two different styles, and this change of style allows you to see the growth trajectory of the protagonist. Because of this, this book is actually very powerful. After reading it, I felt like I was in another world, and I can't forget it for a long time.

This is not a Long Aotian-style cool novel. The protagonist encountered many setbacks, but these problems were quickly resolved. The characters have distinct personalities. I support the protagonist and Xu Feiran being together. So far, there are some flaws, but it is still a good book. I can see that the author is trying to describe a story. Come on! I feel like the later I write, the better.

The writing is good, keep it up. It's not even a little bit better than those cookie-cutter routines. 8.3 Is just other people's prejudices, come on. Many 9 points are actually not as good as you. Book guarantees start at 9 points

It's an excellent book. I couldn't help but read it in two days and two nights. I wanted to have a good sleep [smile]. The story line is very attractive. The author's writing is delicate and many details are very artistic. The characters in the story are perfectly shaped. The only shortcoming is that the names of the exercises and the names of the monsters are not very beautiful. It is recommended to replace them with the descendants of the monsters. It will be perfect. I recommend everyone to read it [like][like][like][like]

My family, I still highly recommend this book. It is not a cool type of book. There are still some parts that touch my heart deeply. You can find some microcosms in reality in the book [Adoration] [Adoration] This book is really good. The articles can reveal some phenomena of modern society. I have read several books, and they are all of the cool type. But I really don't like this type. But this book is not of the cool type, but rather inspirational and social. I recommend everyone to read this book. [Adoration][Adoration]

It's really completely different from ordinary Shuangwen. It can even be said that he is not a Shuangwen. The group portraits are vivid and vivid. It's beautiful and I love watching it. The part where the evil cultivator is chasing him is really as tense as if he is being chased. I can't stop.

I've been watching it for a day and it's pretty good. I hope the author will create two female protagonists. If I have to choose one, just choose one. After all, Xu's first kiss was given to the male protagonist, and his portrayal is better from what I've seen so far. But Xiao is not bad. To be honest, I am not good at handling this kind of situation. Both parties want to please [laughs awkwardly] But if this is in a novel, it will be an adult and beautiful two heroines [blowing kiss] When will Xu return? I really want to see their emotional line [crying]

Author, I hope you can perfect the outline of the whole book, the small details, the characters, the character, the smoothness, and the poisonous points. The content of the whole book is still very good, the subject matter is also good, and the writing is also good. It may not be unbeatable on the list. Come on, I will look forward to you. I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and this is the first time that there are so many comments. Work hard!

It's not purely about martial arts, but it's definitely one of the top ones among the cultivation novels. It has many jokes, and there are also some funny points besides the jokes. In addition to the main character having a good chance, many of the supporting characters are also good. The characterization is pretty good. I finished reading it in two days and I still feel like I can continue to read it. The author will update it soon.

It's really good. I definitely didn't recommend it. To be honest, it was okay in the early stage. But the more you read later, the better it gets. The characters are really three-dimensional. It's really a good book at the T0 level. It's a pity that after reading it, I will be short of books for a while.

The writing is quite good, the writing style is humorous, the atmosphere is heavy and not deliberately sensational, and the word count is not high. Regarding the setting of two heroines, from a reading point of view, the current description is biased towards Xu, the characters are more three-dimensional, and Xiao's sense of presence is very weak and almost non-existent. I feel that Xiao Xiao is very timid when facing the protagonist, but with the lessons learned from the past and the appearance of Xu, Xiao Xiao should face his own heart instead of being like before, at least not in line with the identity of the genius or not having strong feelings for the male protagonist. The current feeling is that Xiao is consuming Zhu Ma's emotions, and the protagonist is also leaning towards Xu, and Xu has stronger feelings for the protagonist. Although there is a diary, there is no inevitable connection between the protagonist and Xiao.

It was better in the early stage. The protagonist had flesh and blood and had his own code of conduct. The content was rich and exciting, but in the middle stage it was a bit average. Only the martial arts were better, and the emotional line was not very good. But in the later stage, it began to sublimate to make up for the shortcomings in the middle stage. It began to face its own emotions, and the language was more contagious. Overall, this is a novel worth reading.

Among the Gao Wu novel series I have read, this is one of the best in terms of plot and story. The writing style may still have room for improvement, but it is really good-looking and the author often interacts with the comment area.

The author's description of the expression is vivid and vivid, and in just a few words, the character's personality characteristics are clearly outlined. The character's speech and behavior have a distinct and unique personality. Praise, praise, praise! Praise! Praise! [Like][Like][Like][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Full marks, very realistic and real, fully embodies the emotional aspect, few people shed tears when watching it. After reading it, I don't feel that the protagonist is the protagonist. It is the first time I see the protagonist in a novel without a halo. It is relatively ordinary. From the beginning to the end, it gives people the feeling that Hong Yuan cannot beat Li Changan. Li Changan is described sideways. In other books, Li Changan has such a protagonist setting. Sometimes I forget whether Hong Yuan is the protagonist. I haven't seen it for a long time. It's hard to predict the follow-up book. The plot is very novel. This book talks about God. There should be a new chapter in the future. The world view at the beginning cannot be said to be small or large. The detail settings at the beginning are relatively large. The description is not too clear, but it is not unacceptable. The climax of the plot can be more shocking without being too low-key. The protagonist looks like a passerby, but ordinary people stand out. The plot is very decisive. Unlike other books, where death and resurrection make people feel too idealistic, death in this book can make people feel that the emotions are very close to reality, and the description can be richer and more profound in this regard. The protagonist resembles everyone who transforms from a child into an adult in real life. This book is really good. I hope the author can write it longer. It doesn't matter if it takes a long time to update. For a good book, you have to use time to make it more exciting. Come on, author, you are not much different from the authors of other works. Really, your writing is great. If you slowly improve in other places, you will become popular.

I will give this book an overall rating of four stars. I have said that most good novels have more than 3,000 chapters. This book has advantages and disadvantages. This book can be easily seen. In fact, its environment, plot, main story line, and suspense are all quite simple. Moreover, this book can basically be rated as a mixed book. It uses too many things from other books. Although the flow rate may be higher, it often lacks its own characteristics. There are also some errors in details, such as typos and inconsistencies. Because I am very picky about reading, I basically read it word by word, so the requirements are a bit harsh🤔, but after all, when writing a book, who can avoid typos, but this also reflects something, but this book is good at describing the growth and ambition of the young hero, and the character portrayal is also very good. I haven't finished it yet, so I will keep the above. As I continue to read, my opinion will change at any time , after all, I watched it for free, so I won't make any sarcastic remarks. I wish the author will continue to work hard, be inspired, and achieve great results. There are about 100 chapters left at the end. Although this book has flaws, it is quite profound. And unlike other books, the protagonist is not invincible or unique. He is more like silently expounding a history. There is no established protagonist, but Hong Yuan is the main character and he begins to write the magnificent events of these eight thousand years. It can also be called a masterpiece. I would like to add again that I finally finished reading it. I stayed up all night several times. This level of obsession can be traced back to 3 years ago. It is a really good book. The flaws are some minor problems, typos, and occasionally the context does not correspond. However, the characterization and plot can also stand up to scrutiny. We read the book Don't read a book with a wrong mentality. You should understand the meaning of the author's writing from the author's perspective, rather than thinking according to your own ideas. This will only deviate from the meaning of the book. You should treat the book as if it was written by a well-known author. It cannot be wrong, but I didn't understand it well. That's probably what it means. The last few sentences are my thoughts after reading the reviews. They are not specific to a certain book, and they may not be precise, but what I want to express is probably this. It's over. Just like what is said in the book, everyone has regrets, but they can't stop moving forward. May everyone be like a dragon.

The plot is novel, give it a five-star review and the author will add more updates @ proud watermelon (●´ڡ`●)🍉

It's quite interesting. It's hard to tell the emotional line. It makes you hesitate to choose one of the two, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable. However, the emotional portrayal of this hesitation is quite good, and it is in line with human nature. If there is only one female protagonist, the plot may turn towards love. Now this kind of plot development has a little bit of love, which is quite good without slowing down the progress. I am looking forward to the following plot. I support you, the author [angry]

The author's sword-shaped eyebrows and starry eyes are fresh and handsome. He has a straight nose and thin lips. He is suave and handsome. Ancient carvings. Calm and elegant. Elegant and peaceful. Smiling through the fan. Beautiful and graceful. He is majestic, graceful, dignified in appearance, looks like Pan An, majestic, dignified, dignified appearance, bright eyes and white teeth, handsome and unrestrained, with a talent, clear eyebrows, dignified appearance, graceful demeanor, well-dressed, Xu Gong in the north of the city, thick eyebrows and big eyes, jade and gold, full of energy, handsome and refined. Binbin, well-dressed, graceful and graceful, with jade trees in the wind, face like a crown jade, both talent and appearance, outstanding in talent, gentle and elegant, extraordinary appearance, talent and appearance, face like a crown jade, eyes like bright stars, nose like hanging gallbladder, lips like oil, long body and erect, graceful and graceful, bright eyebrows, rich and elegant, divine and handsome, magnanimous and extraordinary swordsman and handsome man

It's really good-looking, but the progress in the later parts is too fast and not as detailed as the previous ones. The characters in the first part are very three-dimensional. But later on, the writing style seems to have changed for some reason. It's better to slow down. The humor in the first part, everyone's emotions, and the writing in the diary and the tavern are all very delicate. Can we return to that?

It's really good to watch, and the early plot is very good. Then when I went to the academy, I felt that the plot was really, really good, very, very good. [I'm about to cry]. Show me the score. [I'm about to cry]. Give me the score.

I originally came in to see the ratings, just to have a look and play, but I didn't expect the ratings to be wrong for me. See the majestic human race, see the heroes sacrifice themselves and forget themselves, see the broken mountains and rivers. I only hope that you will not forget the national humiliation. The plot advancement and characterization are detailed and full of pitfalls. In particular, "The Legend of Heroes" completes the character's history and makes the characters more vivid and three-dimensional. Personally, it should be around 9.5, Which is a very good book. May the mountains and rivers prosper forever.

It looks good. Has the author written the same thing before? It feels so familiar, as if I've seen it somewhere before, just the part where the evil cultivator is chasing after someone [Thinking]

The first part was a little frustrating, but I was excited by the martial artist's college entrance examination. The protagonist Hong Yuan was made flesh and blood. I really liked it, especially the sentence he said: "Do good deeds and don't worry about the future." It really gets better and better the further you go. It's the type where the writing gets better and better, and the ending is good. It's the only book I've finished reading in recent years.

After finishing the book, leave a review. Personally, I think it's pretty good to read, and the author's writing style is quite online. The emotional description and battlefield continuation are all very well done. Therefore, five-star praise is used to encourage The diary, to be honest, the explanation is not very clear [laughing] At the beginning, the diary gave me the feeling of touching a machine. After vigorously opening the penultimate page, it ended hastily. Old beggar, it's pretty good [like] It feels like a great skill. Borrowing someone else's advice, I discovered that the old beggar existed many years ago and had many secrets. Sword Ancestor, very tragic [face covering] became famous at a young age, arrogant, stinky, and the people he admired became demented and heartless because of him; when he was old, he returned to ancient times to work as a tool. The hero's sublimation makes people read the previous story again. The emotional entanglement between the two heroines is really complicated. They both have life and death experiences, they both have emotional ties, and they both have distinct personalities. It's really hard to choose between them. The relationship has been running for hundreds of years, and after many life and death separations, it has finally achieved its fruition, resting at 135, 246, and 7 days [laughing] (Honghu is free and easy in this regard, he just moved and married two people) Criticize a little [think] Don't be an old knife man. There are supporting characters with names, surnames and lengths, and they may die at least 50 times. I know your battlefield continuation is awesome, and the battle between humans and monsters covers the fourth dimension of the book. The battle at the Great Wall started halfway through the book, and I thought it was almost over [face covering] Who knew that it took 40% of the pushing and grinding to end [face covering] I thought I was watching the Three Kingdoms [shy] The last few heroes are pretty good, especially Li Changan. I just read the whole story again [like]

It looks good. The only flaw is the male protagonist's emotional line. The male protagonist needs to be favored early and his relationship is good. But I still don't know whether it will be a single female protagonist or a double female protagonist. I feel really itchy when I look at it [facepalm]

The author actually writes quite well overall. , It is very attractive to read, but in terms of some details, such as the settings, it is easy to get messed up and fall apart, so you should pay more attention to it. In addition, the character's personality seems to be fully integrated into your style. For example, the protagonist said "Ah, right, right, right" before, and later Xu Tianbao and another person whose name I forgot also said "Ah, right, right, right" in the conversation. , Such catchphrases or memes, you can't substitute for every character, you have to distinguish the personality, speaking style and characteristics. You can't say that you just introduce the general characteristics of the person for the first time, and then everything becomes the same. For example, the dialogue between the bosses can be brief, and the attitude and tone of the dialogue between the elders and the younger generations must be different. The second thing is your own unique style. You can learn from classics, but you have to take the best and eliminate the bad. You can't add everything in, which will lose your own style. There are only so many suggestions at the moment, I hope the more I write, the better I will make progress [Thoughts]