I'm Almost Dead, Can't I Give My Junior Sister Some Strength?

It's too slow, (I firmly believe) at least three chapters a day. The content is quite interesting, and the main character is very real, which fits a person who has read similar novels and experienced a time-traveling experience. But now that the elixir has been raised, do you still need the method to raise the elixir? The heroine of destiny shouldn't need this method to get the top golden elixir, right? Unless you want to gain the admiration of some people, it is recommended not to be too awesome in the Alchemy Method. Otherwise, this method will be too boring, which means that people everywhere have an excellent foundation, which makes people feel boring. So far everything is fine, I'm very optimistic about you, the author. [Shy][shy][shy] As for the protagonist, Master, we have no personal opinions. Master Chong is a bad person, but as long as the writing is good, it is not impossible. Writing can solve everything. At least it can be seen in a few high-scoring articles. If the writing is not good, you can avoid it. Of course, you can do it if you like it. Just believe in yourself.

It's cool, but I recommend keeping books. Recently, the author likes to write text on hydrology. Now that it is easy to read, I just get a kick out of it and start to write text. The refreshing feeling is that feeling of neither going up nor down. It is recommended that you keep it on your bookshelf and wait for half a year until the author has finished the water in the lower realm. Otherwise, it will easily fade away. The hydrology has been too serious recently. It feels so uncomfortable to be neither up nor down

It's cool, this kind of push junior sister's niche category that I haven't seen much, is very cool to write. The small flaw is that there are a lot of typos, and then it seems to be out of control after more than fifty chapters, but the writing is quite smooth. Anyway, that's it.

The content is novel and the plot is compact. It is a rare good book. I hope it doesn't end unfinished.

Finally finished reading. Good reviews. Although there are many typos, the author has a bad memory, and the author himself always forgets to write mistakes, the writing style is good, the plot is also good, it is a very enjoyable article, and it is endlessly enjoyable. The only thing that made me feel a little bit poisonous was the recruitment of the maid in the middle and late stages. I just did it and it felt quite normal. However, some comments felt that the maid took the poison inexplicably and frightened the author. She came back in the next chapter and said it was a joke. The confiscation was not done... This is the real poison, but okay, other than this, the writing is pretty good. Also, after getting along with Luo Xuanyin, he was too straight and had a bit of a flirtatious attitude, which was a bit irritating to others. Well, everything else is an advantage, right? It doesn't stop it from being a good book. The last hundred chapters have sped up the ending, and the plot has been explained, but it feels a bit rushed and hasty.

I feel that this book is so good. Why is there so little traffic? It is both fast and refreshing, but also slow and refreshing like a traditional online novel with a huge world view. It is refreshing but not very brainless. The world view and the plot are very good. It is not cliché and not boring. I don't get tired of reading it. Anyway, I can't get tired of reading this book. Sometimes I can't follow other books after reading them for a while.

The strength of the male protagonist is at a different level in every battle. Overall, it is a pretty enjoyable book [Eat Melon]. However, this book is about not being timely enough. The male protagonist cannot participate in many battles immediately. It is like our Bronze and the enemy's King. However, the male protagonist is cheating. He can push the opponent with just one person. However, he hangs up in the spring every time and waits for several towers to be pushed before leaving the city to kill him [Heavy Punch Attack].

From a refreshing perspective, the protagonist is invincible all the way, which is really cool. From an objective world view. The combat power is not too broken, and the realm setting is quite clear. The plot structure is also relatively complete, making it a pretty good book.

It's good-looking. The protagonist talks very little. When encountering an opponent, he doesn't really beep too much. He just takes action directly. Moreover, the protagonist is also very strong.

It's really beautiful! ! ! The plot is also very good! ! How can I say this is the first time I have caught up on a book since I entered the bottleneck period. It is really good! ! ! ! The author is great, please update soon! ! ! !

The protagonist has a very good character and is decisive in killing. However, he is not a character who kills people casually. There are some minor flaws in the plot, such as the difference in the time to learn the skills. Several junior sisters are also dispensable. The plot is also a bit lagging, but overall it is well written, and it can be counted as a 9 points at least. Um, if a bunch of foreshadowing ends before it starts, it can be considered a bad ending. . .

The overall score is 7.5. The traditional invincible system has a smooth flow and is slightly poisonous, but it is not fatal. Advantages: The pace is super fast, at least it doesn't get stuck in the plot or levels. In the period of book shortage, you can read it without thinking. It is an over-the-top article.

From what I can see now, the plot and everything are pretty good, but it seems that the eunuch novel is not suitable for some people. I gave it four stars because of personal reasons. I feel that it is a bit difficult for the heroine to give you a feeling of wanting to accept it but not accepting it, and just not reading it. But as a book, it should be ok.

This book is quite good. The writing is witty and the characters are vivid. It's not popular because it's too plain. It's a bit low on expectations. It's a snack that you'll enjoy reading and won't miss even if you don't read it. It's suitable for killing time when you have nothing to do. After reading Chapter 200, the rhythm starts to become smoother, the long-term and short-term goals are relatively clear, and the shock writing is also good. It belongs to an author restricted by Shen He. I may start to use AI in the later stage. The whole article seems to be uncomfortable to listen to.

It's okay. I feel it's already better than many Tomato novels. Although the plot is a bit old and the combat power always gives me a feeling of obsession. There's no problem. It's quite enjoyable. However, chapters 187 and 188 are a bit poisonous. There's nothing wrong with them individually, but they are quite poisonous when taken together.

Cold and crisp, both the writing style and the image of the male protagonist gave me this feeling, it's so awesome.

The overall writing is smooth, and the writing is enjoyable from beginning to end, without any surprises. However, because the worldview splicing draws on many masterpieces, the plot cannot be spread out and written in detail. The overall pace in the middle and late stages is too fast, the plot is relatively simple, and there is little depth. Many plots are rushed to the end.

The killing is decisive, the IQ is online, and some parts are a little unreasonable, but it's just a fun read, so there's no need to care so much about it. There are some laughs, but not much. The plot is relatively compact, and I personally feel good about it.

I read it in one sitting, it's pretty good, the plot is complete, it's exciting and entertaining Junior sister doesn't squeeze hard enough and doesn't grow fast enough hahaha In the middle and later stages, the wateriness is a bit obvious and a little dragging. The ending is a bit rushed but okay, the explanations that need to be explained are pretty much the same. It is recommended to add some tender scenes. There is not enough interaction with the junior sister and master's wife. The most anticipated plot of becoming a master did not happen.

Not poking, very non-poking, Wudi Shuangwen is indeed like this, there is nothing wrong with this

It's a decent and refreshing article, and according to the level of Tomato, it's enough to score 9 points. As for the shortcomings, the biggest feeling is that the plot transition is too stiff. Of course, I have just started watching it. Maybe the plot connection will be smoother later.

Yes, it was quite fun in the early stages, but the system felt useless later on, but the plot is still quite compact, and at least I have the desire to watch it, and there are no matryoshka dolls. Overall it is quite good. I don't know why it is only 8:00, but it feels better than some 9-point movies.

The subsequent ending, although overall seems okay. At least it didn't leave any regrets for the readers. But the overall viewing experience feels a little bit. I was too hasty and didn't describe what happened next. But this book is still pretty good

After reading Chapter 30, I feel so happy and don't beep. Skip to chapter 283. Let's wait and see how it unfolds later. There is not much progress in these nearly 100 chapters. See Chapter 193. It feels like the protagonist has a sauce aura, and no one cares about the situation but tries to provoke him, and then gets slapped in the face. It's funny that he attacks the No. 1 Sect, and then the protagonist directly kills the second-ranked sect without giving him any face. It feels a bit difficult to explain in one sentence. No wonder the human race in the article is not good, right? The internal fighting is so serious that the main internal forces are often fighting. He jumped and looked behind him, ready to retreat. See Chapter 188. The Machiavellian plot doesn't feel good. 184 Jiang Qing, it's because you haven't disclosed your identity before. It's normal for other people's disciples to provoke you. No matter how straight-faced you are, it doesn't seem to be easy to judge. 185 Jiang Qing's case was patched up again, saying that he was looking for disobedience. 186 Suddenly started driving. Although it is different from the previous setting (not interested in women for the time being), it can be understood as returning to the Shen family to relax. After all, he is a young master. 188 May have had a lot of comments, so I made up for it by saying that 186 did not drive with Mu Wanqing. It's quite reasonable that I can't find it, and the patching ability is very powerful [laughing]. However, the previous car driving was a bit lacking in foreshadowing. See Chapter 180. The plot is quite typical, that is, the protagonist does not tell which family he belongs to, and the villain comes to provoke him, and then he is slapped in the face and killed instantly, and then others find out the identity of the protagonist, and then beat up the younger one and kill the older one [laughing]. The plot of Dragon King is a bit classic, but many people like it [eating melon]. It's just that the character of the protagonist seems to be a little more torn. After all, in order to show off, he kills many human overhauls. Although many people have verbally offended the protagonist, it seems that as a human combat force, he will not kill them directly. It feels like deliberately creating conflicts to advance the plot. See Chapter 152. After 117, the viewing experience here is good, and the protagonist's combat power has improved slightly. See Chapter 117. I made a patch and said that the protagonist's system is the highest system in the world, so I can make up for it [laughing] See Chapter 116. Maybe the comment section has a strong opinion on the multi-system, and the Wu clan's time traveler has been written to death. The author previously commented that he would not adjust the multi-system again, so let's take a look first. After all, it's actually quite jarring if it happens before. (Because of the background setting, there are other time-travelers and other systems, such as a time system and a causal system, which can hold the protagonist's hammer) See Chapter 114. Over 100 chapters, multiple systems were suddenly introduced, and there were other time travellers. Just trick people into killing them, right? Don't feed X in the middle of the introduction. Judging from the previous plot, I feel that the writing is very unstable, and it is difficult to say how to make things happen later. Let's see if it's going to be a great job, it's better to give it a 7-star or 8-star rating [smile]. Originally, the protagonist's personality was hardly attractive, and having system plug-ins was the only advantage. Now that we have multiple systems and multiple time-travelers, it means comparing the system strength. Whoever has a stronger system will be stronger. The system document makes this point clear, which makes it less satisfying. The protagonist is reduced to a tool of the system. In addition, this protagonist looks like a candidate for the miner in the anti-routine article. He is the kind of person who provides a system in the fairy world and finds a mediocre person in the lower world to implant the memory of time travel so that he can be initiated and ascended as soon as possible and captured for mining. See Chapter 110. These chapters are fighting scenes, and the viewing experience is okay. See Chapter 100. The main character was torn apart halfway through. One is behavior🍬☂. Hualong Pond directly sucks away people's thousands of years of accumulation. Although I passed the skill transfer after a few chapters, I didn't know that the other party needed the skill before I sucked it. It seemed that I knew that the impression was really bad and I was trying to make up for it. The second is to pretend too much. He kills people on sight and says he is not afraid of anyone. It feels like he is pretending and the plot is inconsistent. If he were so invincible, there would be no need to worry about the Demon King. In order to make up for it by saying that he had some background to amplify his words, he suddenly said that the sect master was a protector of the Tao. The third is the realm of the card protagonist. The reason for being stuck in the golden elixir is that I want to upgrade it to perfect the golden elixir. However, the development of the plot was affected by the realm in the middle, and there was another chapter where Yuanying transformed into a god. And if you count the simulation time, the protagonist's talent is not particularly good. It has been in the simulation for hundreds of years. (In more than 110 chapters, there are some supplements, saying that the talent for talismans is high. In fact, there are also foreshadowings in the past. Maybe the swordsmanship and body refining talents are really mediocre) The fourth is the protagonist's 80 behaviors. Chapters 96-99 repeatedly write that the protagonist orders the villain Lu Ya to trouble his junior sister, and then beats Lu Ya to block system bugs. You may want to make the plot laugh, but it is monotonous and repetitive, and you only see the strong ones constantly teasing, 80, and indifferent to the weak ones. Destroy the protagonist's popularity. The fifth is suspected of being a doppelgänger. Putting the enemy's remnant soul into the Dantian, Yuanying seems to be trying to create a clone. After reading the summary of Chapter 100, I was very happy in the early stage. Starting from the capital of Daxia, the impression becomes worse. Those who like protagonists like Tang ③ may like it.

It's okay. I think the action scenes are okay, but the ending is a bit sloppy. I feel like if you wanted to expand this book, it would cost three to four million. Maybe the author didn't really want to write it, so the whole story line is relatively compact.

I've read Chapter 300 and give me an evaluation. To be honest, it's not bad. I felt very comfortable throughout the whole process. There were no peeing spots and no dragging. However, when I reached the upper realm, I felt that the pace was a bit slower. It was not as fast or as enjoyable as before. In fact, the protagonist's combat power does not need to be so stuck. It can be stronger. It will look more enjoyable. There is also no need to write out the praise of the protagonist's intelligence. It feels very embarrassing.

It's quite good, not like the Holy Mother, it kills decisively, and it's quite enjoyable to watch. It's just that the pace is faster later on. I feel like I defeated all the big bosses in the later stage and then cleared the level in Chapter 50 or 60. But it's good, at least it's not unfinished or dragging on forever, it can be considered a beginning and an end.

Yes, it was very enjoyable in the early stage, and the male protagonist failed a lot, but I think it can be more exciting. I hope that when I return to the Shen family, I can have a king of the world.

It's better than many novels. The protagonist doesn't pretend to be cool, and you naturally feel that he is awesome. The plot is in line with the fantasy plot, and it's getting better and better step by step. It's really beautiful. I'm not going to brag. Just look at how long I've been watching it. It's been a month since I've even started riding the cliff. [Grief]

It's so beautiful. It's the first time I've seen something so beautiful here.