To the Dying Dark

One thing to say is that I felt that the beginning was too rushed, the pacing was not good, and the characters died inexplicably without being reflected. It made people feel very uncomfortable all of a sudden. The abstract language made me unable to hold back. On the one hand, it was my first time writing, and I was not very sure about the beginning. Some people thought that they wanted to push the explosive point forward, but the effect was neither fish nor fowl. I also thought about it. The beginning part was written in high school, maybe I wanted to retain the youthful feeling of high school, well, it's actually 💩, and then I didn't know how to change it so I left it 💩 at the beginning. I'm really sorry, but I have one thing to say and it will get better as the plot unfolds. It's not 💩, there are still a lot of ideas, if you want, you can add a bookshelf to catch up on it, it will be fine⌯oᴗo⌯