Unfair System and Novice Protagonist

It's really good so far. I was too lazy to write a review, but I was afraid that the author wouldn't write it anymore, so I just kept mumbling. Advantages: The rhythm is okay, not laggy; the skill design is good, it has the flavor of a meat pigeon game, and it is full of imagination; I think the distribution system is a big improvement, which is good. Disadvantages: The storyboard is not very good, and sometimes it looks very messy; the emotional line can be said to be enough at the moment, so I will write it slowly at the moment, not too much, otherwise it will be messy and weird; In summary, it's not bad (PS: Please change the cover, Picasso's style is not something ordinary people can understand [laughs awkwardly], AI can do it)

See the beginning of Volume 2 and comment The first volume is very well written, both in terms of plot and overall control. There are no poisonous points. It has been strengthened after the return of the protagonist. The world view and plot have also opened a new curtain. It is novel for the time being and makes me look forward to it. Then in the second volume, you have a sister at the beginning. Good guy, just because of "an inexplicable emotion", you directly use the red potion to save people. You give her a little drink and her life is restored. When she wakes up, you give her another half of the bottle. When playing a dungeon like this can really kill people, and you only prepared two bottles of red potion, are you a bit too much? Some people said that I didn't look carefully before starting to complain. Let me go back and take a closer look. It said that the protagonist inherited the memory. I went back and watched it several times. There was no memory, only an inexplicable emotion. Anyway, that's all. It would be disrespectful to read any further.

The book is quite provocative, but the author's writing is smooth and the emotions are drawn to the end. Especially Yu Yuanbao has an abstract character, and everyone says that the word "" has a knife on his head. However, the system content in the book accounts for a large proportion, which is a bit more extreme. Anyone who likes it will like it.

It's interesting that the first world attracted me, but the second world is an apocalyptic world similar to nuclear winter. Children who survive independently in this environment can't kill people. Their morals need to be lowered.

The protagonist has super upright views and is also a very dedicated person, and Jenny and the protagonist really match each other. I really like a heroine with such a personality, affectionate and dedicated, as light as water but unwavering until death. From the plot point of view, the SCp world is quite good. The most important thing is the power armor battle in the second world. The shortcomings are that I always feel that the combat power is about to collapse, and the system between the real protagonist and supporting characters seems to be nothing special, and it cannot highlight the uniqueness of the protagonist.

The first world line is quite attractive. I don't know if it's because I like American TV series. The author's first world line has the style of American TV series. And it's not just about the plot, it's about the dialogue that is full of a sense of déjà vu.

This is the author's first time writing a book on Rotten Tomatoes, and his writing and IQ are both online. If he writes online in the future, the results should not be bad.

Hao Kan, the numerical protagonist, is not a damn antisocial personality, but some people may not be able to accept the protagonist's abilities that have negative effects (such as reducing the gain and increase the numerical value). Also, the protagonist's ability development is not very good, but that's okay, since he is Mangzi after all.

It's so good-looking, it's really good-looking. Both the setting of the protagonist and the plot development of the world copy are very good. Whether it's Jenny who is curious at heart, or the protagonist's soul-pierced sister Yu Xianxian and the younger brother named Yu Xiaodao, as well as the old civilized soldier He Yunxiao, it can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it, especially. The last identity plate is of great significance.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a wonderful and correct novel. I've always felt that traveling through the heavens shouldn't just be a passer-by on quests. Each world shouldn't and won't have just a few quests and only a few characters. What you should be facing should be an independent biological individual rather than just a mere NPC. What you're fighting against is not mobs but living opponents with flesh and blood, souls and thoughts.

As for the first copy, it looks pretty good. But it's a pity that the Peanut's containment items I wanted to see didn't appear. I hope I can open this dungeon after I become stronger. As for the second copy, the front and back are pretty good, but the middle part is a bit boring. Anyway, I just flipped through it, stopping wherever I was interested. The third copy is not finished yet, but overall it looks pretty good. The writing is quite fluent. Come on, the author [learned it] (I hope this book will become more and more popular. Anyway, I am the author who keeps updating and I will not give up, but I know how to maintain the book. After all, the author is still a bit slow in updating [laughs evilly]) Summary: Excellent work

[I will lead them to survive, even if the outcome is already doomed] [In this way, you can be called a manager]

Very good article. After searching randomly for n days, I finally found another piece of fine chaff.

Not bad, full of American style, the writing is also good

As an infinite flow novel, it feels very good to me. In my personal mind, it has the same status as reincarnation people. The title of this novel is quite interesting, and the chat relationship between the protagonist and the system is also quite interesting.

The heroine has less roles (emmm less can be considered too much). It's really good-looking. The world view is relatively grand. It's a very interesting novel. I just don't know how it will develop in the future. I hope it won't collapse.

The first one is that I like this heroine very much and hope to see her in the future.

The first world looks great, and the author writes it really well! ! ! ! !

The front is a bit confusing, but at least you can understand it until the Xingsha chapter. It's really fun to watch, the description has a qualitative transformation, and it is neat and capable. Come on, author!

It's okay, but I can't accept the harem

Yes, it's a very good book. There are no particularly big flaws. It reaches climax where it should. The update speed needs to be improved. It's worth reading.

A good book, but it's a pity that the heroine was introduced early, otherwise I could have read more

I will objectively record the poisonous points I think The first poisonous point, Chapter 14, is to let a 10-year-old boy sleep on the bed with his sister while he sleeps on the sofa. The second poisonous point is in Chapter 22. Yu Xianxian, who is suspected to be the second heroine, sleeps in the same bed with a 10-year-old boy and even steps on his face with her bare feet. (This is a subjective opinion: as an author, you need to take the initiative to avoid suspicion, and don't fool people with children's ignorance.)

Interesting so interesting

I like the first world very much, and I also like the heroine in the first world, but generally speaking, in novels like this, the two of them have little chance.

The content is passionate but not irrational The plot is exciting but not compact Character descriptions are detailed and lifelike Anything else you want to add? [Thinking] This book is quite provocative.

The number of book reviews I read today turned out to be 100. Damn it, I need to beat this number. I am the 101st book reviewer [like] [like] [laughing] This book is really good. It's the setting I like. It's definitely a five-star review. I won't say anything else. That's it.

It feels quite interesting. This is just a normal infinite flow. How can I put it? It feels like the protagonist's hang-ups are not big enough. It feels like the others. I feel that the system is a big scam. The plot is pretty good, but I feel that the protagonist doesn't have his own hang-ups. He just has better luck than others.

It's worth watching. The work is quite good. The writing is also quite different. The description of the second world is really amazing. If I were He Xiaoyun, I might be desperate. But it's not poisonous.

This novel is very good, why is the rating so low?